Im gonna rate the first chapter as a first impression, as always, for me, in case i come here in the future looking for games. This way i will know what to expect, and i will know it from myself.
The first impression is that this engine is dated for 2021, and there may be different body types, but in the end, the body structure remains and it is not good enough. The asses are a big problem and this engine makes asses look like the ones of underage girls, literally, like really underage, those that willl definetly bring you doom, and a FBI squad to your front door.
Pussies are the same for everyone and are boring and ugly, permanently open.
The way things deform ,again, quite ugly and you will see strange polygon overlapping and well, that stuf. And also you will see this thing where a character that is thin, in some scenes will appear to have masive thick arms and legs.
Regading the writing, well it is there,and its obviously not an english native, cause even me, also not an english native speaker, can call this weird sentence structure choices from time to time. But thats it pretty much for the writing.
Character development ends in the 3rd paragraph of the introduction and you are sent straight to dating sim mode, where you do stuff, get some things to meet the requirements and progress the next level of lewd with almost no resistance.
And sex scenes are mostly the same that you have seen in 10000 games, the same animations and camera angles and the same lewd progression.
With all this said, even if that cute girl is my sister, she could be raped by 3 meter black orcs, and i wouldnt really care.
I dont know where the girls are when they are not reachable. Where do they go? Are they studyng? one of them is. Mc is looking for work, but did he study? what career? Well, i dont want cringy exposition but you can tell this things in a subtle way. For instance, he is looking for work and he is not finding any. While talking to his mother during breakfast one of them could make a comment like "I am a (instert career of choice) graduate, and i cant find a job. Or the mother could say something like "there is not much need for (instert weird career choice) in this small town.
Well this is my opinion, and it is for me mostly.