Ren'Py Maya's Mission [v0.2.2] [Pinkmochidango]

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Fearless_27

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Aug 6, 2017
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Man, I was excited to see this on latest updates. Shame about the NTR tag though.
I don't know. Doesn't really feel like NTR since Maya and Phoenix were never really a thing in the games. They pretty much seemed to be really good friends and nothing more.

Edit: Like the kind of friendship were they would have each others backs no matter what.
 
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Fearless_27

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Are we ever gonna go to trial? If so are we gonna see plenty of "wardrobe malfunctions" during the trial?

Edit: Anyways, I am eagerly awaiting the next update. I know it isn't much at the moment, but I get the feeling that this game has the potential to become something really special.
 
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oldscarecrow

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Ok first the update is great, and I can't wait for the next, also I found a couple of things that I thought should I mention.

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Also sorry for my mad ramblings.

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Again sorry for the rambling, I love the game all the negative I said before is just nitpicking(and airing out my thoughts).
EDIT: Misspellings and other stuff
 
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Poiseworks

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Sep 30, 2017
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Great update. I would propably enjoy it even more if I knew who the characters in the cards were. Maybe I will play the ace attourney games just to enhance my porn experience lol
 
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johndoe314

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Great update. I would propably enjoy it even more if I knew who the characters in the cards were. Maybe I will play the ace attourney games just to enhance my porn experience lol
Whether to enhance the porn experience or not, I do highly recommend the games. A good dose of logical thinking, with a healthy dose of first person snark and other humor. The cast of characters is always great.
 
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Riktobzcool

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Jun 9, 2017
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Wow, just played the game. Had a hope this will be great! Also there's a bug when you use the tracker and there's a dialogue box, it will stuck can click or press "enter" and need to skip or "ctrl" to fix it
 
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avarice_ban

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May 28, 2020
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Great game love the interactions/interactables, hope to see more maya content (tracker and perspective). I dont even play ace attorney and im even considering playing it for context XD
 
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Arkade

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Its better to be linear for a game like this imo. If it was going to have some sort route split-.. Should only be at the final day and decide what kind of ending there is.- making too much extra work will just make the rest of the game suffer in quality.

Interested in how hard the hcontent ends up goin though. A maya pov through device would be interesting. The device is clearly a magical gadget so theres a lot it should be able to show. And the lights are based on Mayas thoughts rather than what is happening I believe..

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AnonRX

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I avoid NTR usuallybut if the quality is good enough i dont mind, and damn this one passes with flying colors, not only in the h parts but also it really feels like an AA gamr really excited to see the rest, specially after watching the trailer.

is there going to be a gallery for the tracker miniscenes eventually? Back in the day there was this game bowsers castle where you would get letters from peach as she was getting more and more broken by bowser, getting the same vibes here.

Also cant really stop thinking the polly card is faye, maya and pearl, even if its probably not.
 

SharkVampire

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Probably just one ending, the story is going to be mostly linear, I can see where you're coming from though!
That's very sad to hear. The idea of a scanner to track the heroine's condition was pretty much killed by one linear route in the game. At this stage of the game, my expectations included that we would actually be able to influence how events would unfold later on. It's disappointing that this doesn't happen.

Edit: This game somewhat reminded me of the game Nebel Geisterjäger, in that game we also had a scanner, but without showing us a picture of the heroine. But you had a phone and could call her. The juicy part was that she started breathing heavily and moaning a bit when she fought. In the beginning, there was no danger of someone stealing her, so when such a person appeared, you couldn't be sure if she was just out of breath from the heat of battle or what was really going on. That's what the cameras were for, first with bad visuals and later with HD. Your game reminded me a lot of that, so of course I was a little disappointed that no one else was coming up with ideas like that. By the way, in that game we were able to save the heroine completely, although it was very difficult.

In general, I enjoyed this game much more than Klee Prank Adventure, although in both cases I'm not familiar with the source material.

What I found lacking: You made a great plot hook for the mysterious NTR, but immediately ruined all the intrigue with direct hints (e.g. red color of text, detailed discussions after missions, other characters revealing everything that happened to them). Scanner is also too perfect in this regard, showing the stream with a girl online. You can call me a nitpicker, but that's just my opinion. The scenario the characters found themselves in was perfect for hints, suspicions, gradual revelations, and so on. But in the end, we get everything thrown in our faces without any trace of suspense.

And one last thing. Judging from the comments, you correctly conveyed that the protagonist and Maya are just co-workers, rather than people interested in each other. I thought that was a strange choice for an NTR game. It seems to me that it would be worth making it more obvious that the main character is interested in Maya as a woman and not just cares about her well-being.
 
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RoughlySpecific

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Maya already having a card would certainly be a twist… That would put the entire game into an entirely different context.

Makes some porn-logic sense. The game wouldn’t actually be about Maya’s corruption, but about Phoenix’s corruption. The whole thing is organized by Maya. She even provides the tracker that suspiciously malfunctions or shows that she isn’t disturbed at all during some of the sexual scenes.

It would certainly make for an interesting April fool’s episode.
It seems to me that it would be worth making it more obvious that the main character is interested in Maya as a woman and not just cares about her well-being.
You assume that the devs want this to be more of an NTR experience than it is. Currently, you can imagine their relationship as you want, it is left ambiguous.

Personally, I don’t like NTR, and I can still enjoy their relationship. If you add jealously etc to the mix, that wouldn’t be light-hearted and enjoyable for me any more.
 
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rgrtbrtbrtbr

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I think the devs copied the structure of Klee Prank Adventure without really thinking about what the change in protagonist would do.

Klee is both young and a girl, so is not a valid partner for any of the girls, so it feels more like voyeurism and less like NTR. Compare that to Phoenix being an adult man, even if story-wise he's not interested in Maya.

Not really meant as a criticism, just a thought on why the "vibes" are different between the two games.
 
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