VN - Ren'Py - Melissa's Adventures [Ch.1 v5] [CosmoK]

Well done. Stunning renders and Melissa is sizzling hot. But I get the feeling that the reader will eventually get frustrated by the endless teasing. And if the moment of truth ever does arrive, I can only hope that it is not a let down, and that the story can continue to keep it's momentum.

I'm okay with the sketchy 18 y.o. boy, however, it would be more suitable if the character did look closer to legal age.

Pros:

1- Stunning visual work.
2- Melissa is hotter than asphalt in august.
3- A very erotic tease fest.

Cons:
1- So much teasing you feel your dick might explode. And since there is no actual sex, or even nudity, I felt a bit disappointed.
2- The 18 y.o, young man, looks 15. Probably should tweak him a little to keep the morality police at bay.

VERSION: Ch.1 v5
SUMMARY: Looks good, sounds good, written and reads horrible, but then there is hardly any content so...
RATINGS: (out of 5):

1. Models: 5
2. Animations: X
3. General Visuals: 5
4. Characters: X
5. Story: X
6. Writing: 1
7. UI & Gameplay: X
8. Content (amount): 1
9. Sound & Music: 4
10. Fetish & kinks: X

Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

PROS:

1. Female MC looks very nice, too nice to be at all realistic IMO, but we wont complain

CONS:

1. Writing is attrocious, I don't think spellchecker and google translate or AI could fuck up the dialogue so bad, even accidentally. First 5 lines in the game already made we want to ALT F4 the shit. Oddly enough the dialogue afterward is already considerably better.
2. Hardly any content, takes you 10min to read and look at anything.

FINAL THOUGHTS & SUGGESTIONS:

• Poor release and its unfortuate because the developer could literally have produced 10x more content and called it a fair/good first release, but sadly here is next to no content.

As there is so little content, reviews will be very hard to do and its hard to give this a decent review, the only thing that is really good is the FMC who is beautiful.

he advantage of this game is undoubtedly in the stunning graphics. Appreciate the beautiful female character. Almost every picture can be placed on the desktop. The plot develops slowly, but this plus gives the opportunity to enjoy the views of the game. Good everyday humor, to the point and makes you smile. Spicy scenes are very erotic and executed with great taste and skill, very effective. The advantages also include the relatively small size of the game, given the quality of the graphics. Thanks to the author for the excellent work.

I feel like this game has potential, the renders are really good. The female milf is one of the hottest I've seen. I like the sexual tension between the two characters, and the VN format is good. My issues are the story is confusing as hell, and the damn transitions! There are way too many transitions and cutaways. it kills the flow of the erotic scenes and makes me wanna exit the game. Cut those out, and I think these scenes would be alot better. Other issue is short updates and not enough content. Hoping to see more, but we will see

All together I'm giving it 4 stars, I would have given it 3 but the renders are top notch, and milf is super hot. I also see potential hidden behind confusing story and bad scene transitions/cutaways

I like the teasing thing, if you're too you'd like the game. The visual is awesome, light, poses, models. The plot is going to be interesting (I believe so). So far I exited of this game, regards to the author.

a pre-teen/teen fantasy.
Very childish plot and interactions with the woman. Nothing adult about this game.

Said that the the art is good quality, the gameplay is linear and not grindy despite the overall childish atmosphere.

It is not a disaster for sure, lot of good things from the dev... but the overall idea/plot is unbearable for me, I was not dreaming those kind of situation even in my 12s..

Never read such utter nonsense from a main character ever.

The game looks quite nice.

The premise seemed interesting until the FMC opened her mouth the first time.
Half her sentences made either no sense or were worded so weird that I had to read them at least twice.

The boy, which seems to be the "LI" in the game, looks cute and behaves way more like a human.
Than you start to make decisions for him and you learn: he is the MC. Somewhat. Its confusing.

I will skip the extremely ugly and unnecessary husband, because unnecessary.

The story is utter nonsense as well, but since it is a porn story, still somewhat fitting.

Didn't think the simple premise of this VN could be ruined by the text. But it did.

Although it's a bit short for a first release, overall it's a great start to the game.

Melissa is extremely seductive without being over the top horny, and her character model looks fantastic. The kid is shy and innocent, doing his best and failing at behaving around her.

Renders are beautiful, and (hopefully) set the tone for the rest of the game. I like how the dev made excellent use of depth of field in the first renders, flowers and butterflies in the foreground, Melissa's ass in the back out of focus. Looks great!

I can't wait to see where this goes next.

Full of erotic energy even though still in chapter 1. The whole Melissa sun cream was outstanding and I'm happy that it's not all about grab and grope but rather seducing the mind and stirring up wishful thoughts...eagerly waiting the next update

the renders are great and the story is hot and spicy at first play it seems to play out like a incest VN without the incest it could be turned into in the future i see but i doubt that would happen but someone can hope though . the story is good and erotic in nature even though the VN just came out not so long ago but still from what it does have seems to be erotic the story is very interesting and captivating as well . i would say try this out what have you got to lose right

I thoroughly enjoyed everything that was there. Admittedly it wasn't a lot, but i really like Melissa's model and the images are nicely arranged and positioned. There are not many games with this slow, teasing progression between people in such a relationship. So, i would love to see this going somewhere in the future, and am highly looking forward to the updates.

I liked the game in general, the pictures are well made, the characters are beautifully made, but the main problem of the game is the text and the lack of pictures where there is only one text, well, not a ready demo, well, I didn't really like the game

Beautiful render and an insanely hot milf mommy. I hope the game gets an I-patch or someone who is good at it designs an I-patch. The figure and the skin are simply made for hot and dirty I-Patch fantasy and the story...we'll see what else is good besides the renders

Looks very promising for a start. The body morphology for the female character is outstanding. The developer is clearly an outstanding artist for sure. The character development, is good.
The rendering quality is priceless. The storyline is good. Some images are missing, but I understand the dev is currently working on it.
I hope the developer will make it perfect.

the game looks cool, a beautiful female character and everything else, but if the author of the game shows a demo, one should be perfect to call people and they went to buy it and play, but it's hard to say that this is a demo, it's so purely working without finishing the demo of the game from the author, it's just a nightmare

I have never seen a more beautiful garden. Not in reality or on this site! This early version has some artwork of exceptional quality. There is already plenty of subtle eroticism in the developing (love?) story between a Melissa and a sweet boy. I believe this project has great potential, and I hope the developer does not get discouraged by some heartless comments on this site, trying to stomp out a beautiful flower before it can bloom!

Wow... I try to give every game starring a hot, curvy milf its time of day, but Melissa's Adventures has to be one of the worst VNs I have ever played on this site.
First of all, let's address the elephant in the room: There are TONS of missing images and incomplete scenes. I know you're calling this "an Alpha", but this isn't even in that stage; this is like in the proof of concept stage.
Second, and very glaring, the dialog is absolutely terrible. It almost seems like it is either AI generated, or shoved through some sort of translator. People do not talk like this, and it takes you out of the experience immediately.
Also, what the hell is up with getting a game over, and the game immediately closes out? No main menu, or nothing, just flat out closes.
Sure, the model for Melissa is hot, but this game is littered with so many red-flags, and technical issues. I don't often say this so bluntly, stay away from this game!

the game seems to be good, but flat, dark and the text could be done beautifully and neatly, and the choice you make is a dark screen and text in the middle of the screen and then the text goes down and then there are no pictures what kind of not-ready game is a so-so game why was it shown at all