VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Mesmerized [v0.1] [KreiVN]

Total waste of time (but not a lot of time, because it's only like five minutes long.)

Even if you don't mind abandoned games, this was abandoned so early it is not even worth a glance.

Nothing to see here, move along.

It is a good start in terms of hooking and liking, the graphic quality is good, the women are beautiful and well designed and the dialogue is not heavy. The story has possibilities. But it's a bad start in that it doesn't delve into anything, it's too short for anyone to bet on this novel yet. I would advise that it take longer to deliver but do some weight to show something that is almost an advertisement.

Looks promising but there's no game yet. The models are nice. The dialogue is pretty choppy and there's no action whatsoever yet.

Maybe a page worth of back story at the most. I wouldn't even call it a 0.1 at this point....maybe a demo at most.