Ok so its not a finished game by an stretch, but i feel there is enough to give some perspective:
1. Too much text, the sex scenes you do get are extremely short and not worth it at all.
2. Even your paywall scenes are extremely low par ( I mean you expect better)
3. Introduce more characters
4. Make sex scenes multiple parts show a whole scene from making out all the way to orgasm make it worth the grind for it.
5. Your UI could do with a major overhaul having to scroll down to end month because of the amount of text at top of screen showing status, that could be moved to left side bar instead.
To be honest so far the tags are a bit of a con, you seriously need to add the tag TEXT BASED as there is an awful lot of Text it dominates the game yet no tag for it.
If you do not improve on the content i can see players getting really bored of this really quickly, the scenes currently are not worth watching at all.
I hope you prove me wrong i left this several updates thought it would get better so far it has not. 2 Stars at the moment because you have the chance to pull it back and make it a better game, to be honest i think you are being a bit harsh on your supporters as well, $10 tier scenes are not worth it you can get better scenes for free in may other html games.
I dont usually give bad ratings but i hope the DEV sees this as feedback not criticism the game premise is there you need better execution of that premise.
1. Too much text, the sex scenes you do get are extremely short and not worth it at all.
2. Even your paywall scenes are extremely low par ( I mean you expect better)
3. Introduce more characters
4. Make sex scenes multiple parts show a whole scene from making out all the way to orgasm make it worth the grind for it.
5. Your UI could do with a major overhaul having to scroll down to end month because of the amount of text at top of screen showing status, that could be moved to left side bar instead.
To be honest so far the tags are a bit of a con, you seriously need to add the tag TEXT BASED as there is an awful lot of Text it dominates the game yet no tag for it.
If you do not improve on the content i can see players getting really bored of this really quickly, the scenes currently are not worth watching at all.
I hope you prove me wrong i left this several updates thought it would get better so far it has not. 2 Stars at the moment because you have the chance to pull it back and make it a better game, to be honest i think you are being a bit harsh on your supporters as well, $10 tier scenes are not worth it you can get better scenes for free in may other html games.
I dont usually give bad ratings but i hope the DEV sees this as feedback not criticism the game premise is there you need better execution of that premise.