VN - Ren'Py - Completed - Midnight Terror [Full] [VisualNovels]

Why is it such a large download for so little actual gameplay? The sex scenes need to be improved and longer. Needs pregnancy as well if he keeps leving creampies. The island time was way too short to be honest. Left you feeling a WTF? when they are suddenly rescued. Also he goes from short hair to long so basically the Dev cut the entire time they were actually on the island out of the game. That is really shit to be honest. The time is cut and the stats frozen at what they were propr to the cut until after the cut is over. Then they begin to change again. Needs a lot of work. Just don't feel it is going to happen. The characters are a pleasant change. Just don't do like all the other Devs and suddenly an update occurs and she is suddenly no longer sporting a bush but shaved. Can't stand that!

It's a very good short game, with great graphics, a very promising storyline and a very realistic MILF.
I don't give it a 5/5 because, in my opinion, it fails to fully utilize its great potential due to its rushed narrative after the plane crash (I think that the time spent on the island could have been extended with more action without losing realism). Another reason is that the animations could be improved, but they're very good for the developer's first completed game.
And it must be noted that it was a great success to add sound and music.

I can't wait to watch the sequel of this game.

PS: If the dev is still interested in focusing on creating short or medium-length games, in this thread I have mentioned some ideas that I have put forward for any dev interested in creating one of those types of games.

Short story with good graphics and rushed narration.
I'm tired of bimbos and model looks of brides in VNs. So every game with natural body types attracts my attention.
Start was interesting with just a few shortcomings but in the second part after crash there was so many plot holes and many things were made as a formality. I have the impression author wanted to end this as soon as possible.
Animations is awful, ai filter on rendered scenes looks sometimes good but mostly irritatingly familiar.
I want to see progress in his works, because i like his graphic style and his view.

The game is very short, but I liked it. I LOVE the fact that "mom" looks realistic. She looks exactly like a good looking +/- 40 years old lady would in real world. It makes the immersion way deeper. Love her design and would love to see devs make "milfs" more her way.

If you're up for just a short story, and you don't expect nothing deep, give it a try if you like to experience new titles. A short, fun, one time game, that is how I would describe it.

It's very short , but if you change the relationships to wincest then , its a nice but basic playthrough.

They introduce some characters that I thought would have some purpose but I think the dev just wanted to work on something else.

I have to say though the DAZ scenes and models are very good

Had the beginnings of Potential. They Leave Tokyo, End up somewhere else. Introduce new Characters then it just ends. It's almost like the Dev threw their hands up and said. F this.... because they did.

The story is still to short to review but I like to encourage the dev to keep it up. I like the premises, it is a bit different from other stories.
The mother is sexy (not shaved) but far from a 10th, and that makes it more trustworthy for me. The focus is still on the two MCs and that is very good as a start.
I am also curious how the story with the natives will take of later.
Has a very big potential in my opinion.

Yo, this game is whack. The story jumps around with no logic, leaving you confused as hell. The writing’s a disaster—loaded with typos and sentences that barely make sense. Characters, especially the mom, look off; her face doesn’t even match her body, like they slapped it together without a care. And those choices? Pick the wrong one and you’re dead in a flash—total frustration, not fun. It’s a headache from start to finish, trust me. Skip this mess.

An extremely short sandbox esque game, with next to no storyline, it is just beginning so there is no point in judging it extensively, but from what I have seen writer have no flow as to what he wants worth the story he had an idea and promptly implemented it , but had no idea how to procced so he quickly resolved that scenario w/o any details and jumped to plane crash.

Frankly aside from character design and use of ambient music there is nothing worth judging in this game, because whatever was attempted was lack lustre so I need a big batch of update to truly judge the game for its merit.
For now its 4.5/10

This looks amazing! Finally, I found an author with excellent and correct taste in mothers, their bodies and appearance, bravo! Excellent renders, modest animations, a typical plot and a very modest amount of content for such a size of game. Let's hope for a good pace and decent content of the game in the future, in which I wish success to the author!

VERSION: V.1.1
SUMMARY: Most unlucky asshole MC on earth...
RATINGS: (out of 5):

1. Models: 3
2. Animations: 3
3. General Visuals: 3
4. Characters: 2
5. Story: 1
6. Writing: 1
7. Pacing: 2
8. Content (amount): 2
9. UI & Sounds: 2
10. Fetish & kinks: 2

Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

PROS:

1. Models are not too bad looking
2. General visuals and renders are also OK...
3. Able to set your relationship and affiliations but we all know its an incest game anyway.
4. Animations are not too bad either.
5. The characters are not totally bad, at leas how they seem to be written, they clearly have some scruples and are forced into something unnatural and bad, so that is at least done semi OK.

CONS:

1. Mothers face looks haggard for a 50yo with a body like hers, makes no sense really and that should get revised a fair amount. She has a 40-45 year old body and a 60 year old face...
2. Writing is just totally horseshit, the plot is so stupid it can only happen in a game, a badly written one.
3. The writing, spelling are bad, many typos.

FINAL THOUGHTS & SUGGESTIONS:

• While I listed some PROS, they are what is "good" about this game, not that they are in themselves good, because its really a low bar.
• The MC and his "mother" are very unlucky indeed or lucky, depending on how you look at it, I mean the MC gets to bang his mom (even if unwilling) and they end up surviving a plane crash right after and are stranded on an island alone, don't need more of a setup eh...they don't build Air Force One like they used to
• Total bullshit and cheap game IMO, skip until the developer rethinks much of it and produces quality work...

Not as terrible as the first review would lead you to believe.

Visuals are ok. They've made fairly good attempts with lighting and angles. Should get better with practice. Models aren't great, but also not terrible either. And it's certainly nice to see a model that shows their supposed age in the face, if not the boobs.

Pacing isn't overly fast IMO. If some confirmed nutter breaks into your place with a knife and threatens to kill you, you will probably do as they say. Bloke does get hard a bit fast though, but I'm betting it's hard to 'thumb in a softy' in CG like this, so porn plot rules will take precedence.

Just a shame it ends so abruptly just as things were getting good.

Has potential. Definitely needs a proofreader. But could be a decent game if the dev puts a bit of effort into fixing a few things.

The premise isn't bad but the execution simply isn't there. The boy and woman of the story give in too quickly and too easily.

The writing needs help, a lot of it.

It's very early so it can still be salvaged. If the Dev sees this here is my advise, take it or leave it.

First find someone to assist in the writing. Sentence structure needs help but so does story creation and also creating good characters. The boy starts off as such a douche that you really don't care what happens to him. Also the reasoning this "maniac" targets him is weak, it needs to be more in depth.

The title is Midnight Terror so don't be afraid to make it darker. Show that this maniac is ready and willing to resort to violence. Some smacking around, yanking by the hair and also maybe some forced punishment. Forced deepthroat with gagging, spanking, tie me up, tie me down, etc. You want the boy and woman to feel a sense of hopelessness.

They are supposed to be feeling fear above anything else, you don't want it to seem as though this maniac is simply bringing out their repressed desires and they are feeling horny above anything else. They don't want to have to do what they are being forced to do , so when they give in it's reluctantly and not without a little protest. Maybe have the maniac insist the boy impregnates the woman so they have a lasting memento of a night of humiliation and shame. There are a lot of possibilities.

Good luck Dev.