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VN - Ren'Py - Milf In Space [v0.1] [Lockstar Games]

  1. 1.00 star(s)

    DIKHammer

    I deleted the given MC name of Alex typed in my own name for MC and it reverts back to Alex. If you can't even get that working you shouldn't be releasing anything.

    MC looks like a dweeb.

    AVN looks like it was built with Artificial Intelligence.

    Its very early but at best I see 2 stars maybe
  2. 3.00 star(s)

    N0madS0uL

    VERSION: v.0.1
    SUMMARY: Typical young guy with MILF hangup, just in space. AVN feels rushed and incomplete with its inconsistencies.
    RATINGS: (out of 5): ⭐⭐⭐

    NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally, scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be introduced at a later point.
    1. Character (Model) Visuals......... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
    2. General (World) Visuals........... : ⭐⭐⭐
    3. Animation Quality................. :
    4. Character Personality(Persona).... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
    5. Story & Dialogue.................. : ⭐⭐⭐
    6. Writing & Grammar................. : ⭐⭐⭐
    7. UX/UI, Game Type & Mechanics.......: ⭐⭐⭐
    8. Playtime & Pacing..................: ⭐⭐
    9. Music & Sounds.....................: ⭐⭐⭐
    10. Adult Content & Fetishes.......... :
    Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

    PROS: (y)- See my opinions section for details.
    1. Visually looks really good, characters are well designed and MILF looks voluptuous and sexy.
    2. Writing is fairly decent, structured and reads well.
    3. Dialogue is decent and realistic enough, does not feel stupid and characters seem fleshed out fairly well.
    4. Music is not bad either, fits the scenes, but also gets a little monotonous.
    5. Story is weirdly interesting and compelling in its porn logic way.
    6. Interface is solid, dialogue box is not obtrusive or in the way, but...see cons.
    CONS: (n)- See my opinions section for details.
    1. Right off the bat, first issue is naming the MC, this is broken and doesn't accept user input despite typing custom name.
    2. Choices have no score system to measure against. Do choices have affect? Love, Lust etc? Or anything else, between, practical, empathetic, fatalistic etc, a guide or walkthrough would be nice.
    3. Dialogue box can use opacity setting and more text settings like making text larger etc.
    4. Some scenes make no sense at all like the crystal hunt and where they find some doesnt match the theme. See comments
    5. Some flow in story, scene, transitions issues from one moment to another, almost like skipping time but the transition is done badly. Even ending is so sudden...See Comments.
    6. Events feel shallow and not really meaningful, see comments.
    7. No H-content of any note, no animations of any kind.
    8. Short lived for first version, added to the list of issues, doesn't really sell me on this AVN. Here really isn't much "content". But it works I guess...
    OPINIONS, SUGGESTIONS & FINAL REMARKS: :unsure::coffee:

    NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer. (Read them or don't)
    • A personal gripe, ignore if you want, but I don't like the MCs hair, it somehow does not fit well with him at all.
    • Choices and point system need to be more obvious, if there is even points, but I feel that some choices will net you better result with the LI, but you just don't know yet...this system needs more detail and to be fleshed out better IMO.
    • Per Con, the scene where the MC finds another crystal in the box, this is not found on a space ship, this is found in what looks to be either a warehouse, old building, maybe a school. THIS is a major inconsistency and speaks to poor quality and revision prior to releasing the game.
    • In one scene when the MC and MILF fix life support, they share a moment thinking of family, the scene hardly changes yet they immediately greet each other, implying a day has lapsed at least. The dev did the first day in space well with narrative info, but not here. This again points to quality issue and inconsistencies...
    • Events or scenes that should have profound moments feel short lived, like the restore of the life support, the "training" of powers. The ideas are there, those are good, but they feel hollow, unfulfilling like a formality, but the way they go about it, go through it (the journey) doens't feel profound, the dev fails to capitalize on this moments, yet went to the effort to create them. They just feel short and unfulfilling IMO...
    TLDR:

    Not a bad AVN at all, good start and has an interesting premise, but not 4 stars yet, close but not there yet and not 5 stars at all. There are simply too many inconsistencies and issues that break immersion for me.
    I will keep an eye on this one and amend my review, I am sure with a bit more polish and work this one will be a good AVN overall, for now I will err on the side of caution to rate it too high, its just not THAT good "yet"
    Likes: c0mh1x
  3. 5.00 star(s)

    Aleks Mark

    I think this game is a model for games made with AI. Gorgeous graphics, beautiful, realistic models, and a unique storyline make it a true gem among similar games. I hope this project continues to develop and recommend it to everyone, if only to get a sense of what AI and human imagination are capable of (y).
  4. 5.00 star(s)

    svn32

    Perfect game. Really impressive art, models. I like this type of VN. Also dialogs. Everything looks soo cool for me. Great thanks to creator! Please, don't stop your great project - it'll meet many followers soon. I wish you luck and fast development, friend!
    Likes: ts7348