VN - Ren'Py - MILF Obsession [v0.1.9] [DanGames]

Nice job, all the caracters are sexy, maybe some GILF in future could be interesting. i'm waiting for the next update. I know the work behind all this, so hope the next episode. I'm french, so please excuse my poor english.

(Game Version 0.1.2)

Initial impression is- it's promising.

I don't have anything negative or cynical to say about the game, my only criticism is in that I did not really see much variation in tit size other than Big & BIGGER, would love to see some contrast there.

I enjoyed the writing, however so far it is completely linear- I would love if there are segments where you get to explore as that's one aspect I enjoy most from DG's works, exploration. I forget which, but I recall at least one game where he went all in and exploring was rewarded with bonus scenes. IMO that was more fun/satisfying. When it becomes predictable or there really aren't bonus scenes and as a player you're just unlocking dialogue options to play scenes- the game develops a stale feel to it in my experience.

This game has a lot of potential and I'm really looking forward to what twists and turns in the story will be coming in future updates!

The game’s pretty decent for a first version. I like how the MC is written — he’s not some badass god, but he’s not a dumbass either. I think there’s good potential for development. The only thing that didn’t really hit for me were the limited animations and how little dialogue there is during them. As for the girls — they’re all hot as hell. I’ll be keeping an eye out for updates.
Also, a little bit of netori — stealing other guys’ girls — wouldn’t hurt either."

game version: 0.1

It definitively too early to judge the whole game, but the early version already shows its promises.. or not.

In fact, I did not enjoy a single minute of this game. The MC is an unlikable douche, the women (yes, MILFs all over) do look hot (especially the boss), but that's it.
Dialogs are bland and forgettable, animations are limited and mediocre in terms of quality- at best.
The story/ concept also doesn't feel fresh or unique.

Atm, there are no signs of a good game.

VERSION:0, 1
SUMMARY: Pretty good start, not awesome, but decent.
RATINGS: (out of 5):

NOTE: The following categories and scoring method are my own criteria and may require more context. Additionally, scoring is based on the state, and what is in the current version and not what may or may not be.

1. Model Visuals..................... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
2. General Visuals................... : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
3. Animation Quality................. : ⭐⭐⭐
4. Character (Persona)............... : ⭐⭐⭐
5. Story Quality & Pacing............ : ⭐⭐⭐
6. Writing Quality & Dialogue........ : ⭐⭐⭐⭐
7. UI & Game-play Mechanics...........: ⭐⭐⭐
8. Playtime & General Quality.........: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
9. Sounds & Music.....................: ⭐⭐⭐⭐
10. H-Content & Fetishes.............. : ⭐⭐⭐

Average: X of 50 possible points giving a X% rating i.e. X stars.

PROS:

1. Nice looking models and potential LIs
2. Generally visuals are not bad at all, high polish and quality
3. Sounds and music are good, the ambient, environmental sounds are great.
4. Writing is actually not bad, its structured and reads well.
5. Animations are not bad, but could be a bit better.

CONS:

1. Dialogue can use a little tweaking, sometimes the MC is thinking but it uses the regular text box so seems like he could be saying it, little things like that need polish.
2. Sometime there are scenes that wont progress until you push the ONE AND ONLY button on the screen...why bother?
3. Bit inconsistent in the way the plot unfolds and some questionable dialogue and choices.
4. Lewd sounds are a bit silly, like when the MC final cums, its sounds like someone pressing grapes or something like that. Same with some of the squeltching sounds, its almost comical its so bad. Moans are ok, not like there are many.
5. The lewd scenes are also pretty basic, nothing fancy, some angles and close ups are not bad, but overall not mean, no cum shots, nothing remotely kinky or exciting in the slightest.
6. Animations are slow, they don't feel very smooth, not as polished as the renders themselves.

FINAL REMARKS, OPINIONS & SUGGESTIONS:

NOTE: The following remarks are my personal opinions and thoughts, which may provide more context and could be useful to the developer.

• A bit much internalizing and thinking on the MC's part for me, its not a big deal or an issue really, its just sometimes I find it annoying that he has more thoughts that I need to read than actual interactions...though I guess this could be realistic, its just not something I enjoy in a VN too much, at least not too much of it if you catch my meaning .
• MC has a lot of clever little quibs and some are pretty good actually, though I do wonder if its not a little too much and could use some toning down, these are just thoughts but its one of the first things I noticed he does in a very short spans of time.
• I find it strange at best but simply hard to reconcile the MCs attitude and deposition to when he is asking a successful business woman (MILF) out like its the most ordinary thing ever. The whole VN till then he is going on about how much he is a loser, the somehow out of the blue it casually goes and talks to this woman who he clearly sees as a strong and successful mature woman. He this 22yo "kid" goes and asks her out...OK...not at all what I would have thought, considering the writer goes to the extent they did to set up a "loser" beta MC to flip a switch and go all Alpha...whiplash eh? Plus this scene is so weird coming from the MC and he acts almost desperate to convince this older woman on a sudden date, he even acknowldeges he likes her but only shared 4 sentances with her and he comes over so strong, its almost off putting...thats my 2c.

TLDR:

Generally a decent game and good first release, the quality is pretty good overall and its well worth the play and support. There are some inconsistencies for me that stand out too much for someone like me to just ignore. If you can look past some of those then it wont bug you. The sex scenes look overall pretty good, the animations are not really smooth though and the whole scene is fairly boring...Still not bad and worth checking out.

Not 4 stars really, closer to 3.5 but had to pick 3 or 4, and I am gonna give the dev the benefit of the doubt here and hopefully the game gets better as it progresses. Will review again in the future.

hey love the renders and animations are good but... is there anything unique about this game? story isn't that interesting, sex is rather vanilla (by F95 standards). only thing i find unique about this game is how it zooms on MC's cum face (very bold choice since he looks like the protagonist from Bully all grown up).

MILFs are hot, but again they aren't hot enough to carry this game alone (especially with the 'vanilla' sex scenes).

im not trying to be mean really. i like the art and just wish in future updates there will be something more interesting to get me hooked. visuals are good, but there are many games on this site that have better renders so there needs to be something else.