Story feels like a one that was hidden in a women magazine in 1960´s. Replaced by steamy romance novels after sexual revolution. Short enough that housewife´s could deny ever reading it, as it was part of the main magazine.
In current era, it feels like a cash grab, demo or basic test of skills. What ever it is, it has very little meaning or use for us readers. Too basic, too empty and too short. Supercharged attempt to create sexual situation as fast as possible.
This could work for those that are sexually really frustrated and have no time or chance to experience longer story, but for the rest of us, it does nothing.
Writing and visuals are ok.
In current era, it feels like a cash grab, demo or basic test of skills. What ever it is, it has very little meaning or use for us readers. Too basic, too empty and too short. Supercharged attempt to create sexual situation as fast as possible.
This could work for those that are sexually really frustrated and have no time or chance to experience longer story, but for the rest of us, it does nothing.
Writing and visuals are ok.