REGUser
Member
- Jul 5, 2018
- 449
- 1,945
- 351
Excellent, just to be clear I don't want one more than the other, what ever you feel strikes the right balance to the scenario but having more dirty talk is always a bonus and saying their thoughts out loud too each other at the height of passion is always erotic.No problem, thanks for the feedback - I'll try to include more inner thoughts from both parties. Maybe some more dirty talk too.
To clarify, I felt the inner dialogue the MC was having was too disconnected from the situation he was in and in a way not connected to Caroline in the hotel scenes. I mean they were fucking...yet they both were having full on conversations with themselves instead of being in the moment in lust. Sexy time is sexy time, they can work through the logistics later, I honestly don't care if Caroline wants to buy a dog and move in with MC whilst they are in the middle of it. Their minds should be on one thing and one thing only...creampie! (we all pick the option, the other option are for the sadist that want a vanilla game).
I hope you get what I mean, I feel the taboo is missing from it considering they are the "main girls" and not some side chicks. Even though we patch the game we all know who the landlady and "best friend" really are.
Last edited: