I think this game is worth you time. It's not perfect, but you'll have a good time playing through this, if the premise appeals to you.
Two points of criticism: Firstly, it's not made clear how your mind control power works exactly. Your power is as strong or weak as the story requires, which to me is not very satisfying.
The second main issue I have is that I don't understand Rosie. Why is she in this story? Is she meant to be a grounding character? The story pushes you to chase after Rosie, but you're not given a reason why you (the player) would want that.
An interesting question in adult games is always: what do you do with other male characters? How do they relate the PC and how do they relate to other female characters? Do you want to give the fantasy of letting the player 'collect' all the female characters, or can you only pursue one? Since this is a game about Mind Control, the answer comes naturally.
The story could have been a lot simpler if there weren't any supporting male characters. So the inclusion seems to be a deliberate choice. I'm not sure if that choice is paying off yet.
Personally not a fan of familial relations, that always feels awkward. I did enjoy the setup for upheaval, that felt refreshing.
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Two points of criticism: Firstly, it's not made clear how your mind control power works exactly. Your power is as strong or weak as the story requires, which to me is not very satisfying.
The second main issue I have is that I don't understand Rosie. Why is she in this story? Is she meant to be a grounding character? The story pushes you to chase after Rosie, but you're not given a reason why you (the player) would want that.
An interesting question in adult games is always: what do you do with other male characters? How do they relate the PC and how do they relate to other female characters? Do you want to give the fantasy of letting the player 'collect' all the female characters, or can you only pursue one? Since this is a game about Mind Control, the answer comes naturally.
The story could have been a lot simpler if there weren't any supporting male characters. So the inclusion seems to be a deliberate choice. I'm not sure if that choice is paying off yet.
Personally not a fan of familial relations, that always feels awkward. I did enjoy the setup for upheaval, that felt refreshing.
Based on 0.21b