Mind Control: Twisted Thoughts [v0.25 Beta]
This VN makes a solid first impression, though I doubt it will ever become one of my favorites. Why? Overall, it delivers decent quality, but two key elements are missing for me: a captivating story and natural-looking skin textures.
I wouldn’t say the story is boring, but it lacks a real hook. We’ve got a young male MC who’s still a virgin and suddenly gains supernatural abilities - the power to read minds and control people around him. This setup is basically used to let him experience as many sexual encounters as possible while competing with others. Small story spoiler: He’s not the only one with these powers, which makes the plot a bit more interesting for me.
To the dev’s credit, it’s a clever way to give the player believable control over the MC’s actions and his sexual adventures, especially with the wide variety of fetishes on offer. In addition to choices, the player can also influence certain outcomes in erotic scenes through attribute points. However, this system definitely needs some rebalancing, since stats hit their max far too quickly. It also doesn’t feel fully integrated into the story or the lewd scenes yet. Real branching isn’t present in this VN - your decisions simply unlock or lock certain encounters with LIs.
Most characters’ behavior feels a bit off and lacks believability. Still, since it's fiction, I can let that slide. It’s not a dealbreaker, but overall the story just feels too shallow to stay engaging for long.
As mentioned earlier, the flawless skin textures are another weak spot. The “plastic look” of the character models takes the visual quality down a notch. The skin is too smooth and perfect, giving everyone a doll-like appearance - a shame, because otherwise I have no complaints about the renders.
I’m also not a fan of the MC’s design, especially his hairstyle. His face lacks masculinity, and with that hair he looks like a mix between a creep and a nerd. Maybe that was a deliberate design choice, but dear dev, please let him change his appearance a bit in the future, so I don’t feel completely turned off by him.
On a more positive note, I really like the selection of female characters. They’re not those flawless, overused supermodel types you see everywhere, which I personally appreciate a lot. They differ in body shape and size, look more natural, and each has her own charm. Beauty stands out best in contrast, after all.
I can’t recall seeing any animations - only still images that you click through at your own pace. The scene composition and framing during erotic moments, however, are very well done.
The sound effects fit nicely, and the moaning during the sex scenes is tastefully used. The background music wasn’t quite my style, but that’s probably just a matter of taste.
Overall, this VN comes across as a well-balanced package, and for its current stage of development, it’s solid. Unfortunately, it doesn’t really stand out from the crowd of AVNs on this site. I’m giving it 4 stars, even though for me personally, it feels a bit less than that.