VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Misary Lake [v0.2] [johannes89]

Cons
Renders : 0 Effort poses, Creepy expressions, 0 physics
Characters : Only bar girls looks normal others ugly and common
Logic : Game says ; we dont do that here, like mother much more younger than her daughter .
Story : Cliche not interesting
Dialogue : If you can understand the engrish you get nothing more than childish sentences
Sandbox : Bugs...

Pros
Exit button

Ok. Here my take. A very short demo with hopefully provisional renders. Warning plot spoiler.
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I wouldn't mind if the dev went in a sexy Lovecraft direction. Love them slippery fish folk! Haha. The main female render is sexy, Mom a bit flippy(or flippery??), but the renders are rough. They need longer baking and touch ups. Dev has promised betterment. From story side. Could be intriguing. Aliens in human form? To the dialogue, was pretty short on wit. No spice or humor. Bland. Also seems the dialogue has been changed since the renders were made. There's a convo between sexy woman and Mom which comes off weird with each first staring off into space and then the later facial expressions at odds with the content of their dialogue. Still quite a few grammar mistakes.

All in all, 4/5. Hoping for some weird plot with lots of sexy elements.