Ren'Py - Mobile of Desires [Ch.6.46.9] [QuantumBunnyNovels]

This is the buggest piece of shit game I have ever played,this is cheap slop renpy ai game,dawg even the dialogues are soooooo cringey and dumb.. like yakk,i would like to rate this game 0star.. but I can't, please please guys don't waste your valuable money in cheap shit slop like this,this is total scam...god.. the dialogues are so so cringey,cheesy and unreal that it makes my boner dead.. like I'M GONNA win NNN,thanks to this game,the dev clearly has 0 irl experience with.. women...even the "art" is just mid, This deserves to be forgotten lol 0/10

[Ch.5.41.91]

The text exchanges are full of inconsistencies and logical errors. They are saying stuff, but it doesn't really make sense, and the story doesn't flow with a consistent narrative. One moment they are acting like they are falling apart, then it's quickly forgotten and they are lovey dovey in the next text exchange, then they plan all excitedly for dinner with the MC looking forward to it, then you pick the NTR option and have the MC inexplicably flake out, then they fight, then she goes off and does NTR stuff, then they are lovey dovey and mean the world to each other. The entire thing is a series of set pieces that is loosely connected but not consistently matched.

It's clearly written by AI. As someone that has gooned to LLMs a lot, I don't think AI smut is inherently bad, but clearly, the dev didn't bother fixing inconsistencies in story logic that was generated by the AI, just like they didn't bother with the details of the images. Also, the cringe and overly dramatic "base ChatGPT" prose style is on full display here.

The pictures are completely nonsense and random AI slop that the dev didn't make any effort to fit the situation. They are texting, and within the span of a single text exchange the girl changes locations and clothes like 5 times. What the fuck is even going on?

Code is sloppy and references things that never happened based on your choices, even for extremely major plot points that change the entire dynamics of the story. The more I play, the more I think this game is coded by AI too lol. The points you get for bond/willpower/lust/corruption/etc for various choices rarely make any logical sense (looking at the script file on RPA extractor online). It's pretty much randomly assigned, as far as I can tell. I'm looking at the point distribution for every single choice, and I literally can't understand the logic to it.

Give it a pass man. No one can be this desperate for another dime a dozen NTR phone slop. There are a few that stand out in this genre, but this definitely isn't it.

Entertaining and high quality pictures, not so slow as other ntr phone games, characters are good and the main girl is lovely hope to see NTS and LOVE branches of the game. You must enjoy NTR to enjoy the game by now.

Review for [Ch.4.34.91]

A great NTR game with hot scenes from text + social media to build the picture. Worth playing for any fan of these phone style games. The MC is a oblivious idiot to the "censored" photos clearly being his fiancée. Would have like to see MC's thoughts to the photos or some kind of dialogue with his GF about them. Still hot.

However like others have said it is a bit all over the place from the dialogue. Sometimes the pov of the text is wrong. Do not change route even though the games lets you with enough points. The dialogue starts making zero sense and hard to follow as it thinks things have happened which have not unless you played that route from the start.

Just pick the corruption and obvious choices and stay on the NTR route and it's a good game. I ended up skipping most of the friend chat and just skim reading the context of the choices I made as it does tend to repeat the same convos.

Decent amount of content so far and one I will be hoping to see updated!

I want to like it but the game is a mess. I feel like the pictures the describe aren't the pictures I'm seeing. Sometimes I find myself talking with a character about a conversation I had with another character that I haven't had yet. It feel like the game gets confused on who is saying what and suddenly they are saying each other's lines. Like there was a point when th MC was mad at his girl because she forgot to text and then the excuses for why she didn't call was coming from the MC side. There was a whole convo thread where I had to keep switching between the girlfriend and the best friend because the covo with the best friend would only advance when I was on the girlfriend's page. On the whole, it feels like a mess

there is really something bad about this game it's boring and unarranged the chat between the MC and his girlfriend is shorter than the chat with his friend and Most of the talk between him and his girlfriend is cheesy and repetitive

The only good thing about this game is the Gf she is hot

definitely a VN with a very stupid MC, it seems ironic, programming VNs with AI, only to end up with brainless characters, a real paradox, I don't find anything erotic, the images are nice, but an AI rarely produces ugly ones, it's not worth the time spent

I feel conflicted about this VN.

I think there is a great story in there somewhere, but in its current state, it feels very disjointed. Scenes feel out of place or misordered, messages don't correlate to the image that's been sent, etc. You'll be talking about being in love and doing stuff together, despite just having an argument about that very thing. I really like the female character designs, but I think the story itself needs reworking.

I will keep checking back as it updates, though.

The game has a good potential. Good writing, nice looking actors, marvelous story line. Overall, it's great. Keep up the good work! Looking forward for future updates. Games like this must no be completed too fast.

I played the game, and as I mentioned before on the forum, the girlfriend is absolutely gorgeous and definitely gives off that hotwife vibe. AI phone/NTS-style games are quickly becoming one of my favorite genres, so I was excited to try this out.


That said, I have to be honest — I didn’t really feel any strong NTR or even NTS elements while playing. Sure, the girlfriend is being posted on Hornygram, but there’s no reaction at all from the MC. No internal thoughts, no jealousy, no curiosity — not even confusion. The girlfriend herself doesn’t drop any teasing hints or show suggestive behavior either.


For example, there’s a moment when the MC’s friend makes a comment about the photographer tearing through the girlfriend’s wardrobe — and yet, the MC doesn’t react. No expression of concern, discomfort, jealousy, or anything. It just passes by like any normal line.


Another issue is when the MC views the Hornygram posts — I honestly couldn’t tell if he even realizes it’s his girlfriend. There’s no comment, no reflection, no reaction. You check the post, save the picture, and move on like it means nothing. That really breaks immersion, especially since these moments should be key points to build tension, either from an NTR or NTS perspective.


The dialogues overall need a lot of work. Many of them feel disjointed or lack context, and it makes the flow of conversations feel unnatural. The writing needs to be more cohesive and immersive to really bring the story to life.


Since the MC sometimes mentions feeling aroused, I’d suggest leaning more into the NTS angle. Let the girlfriend tease him more, joke about other guys, and be bolder in her behavior. That would really add flavor to the dynamic — like during the scene with the photographer, where the MC had three possible reactions. That’s a good start, but it needs more depth and consistency throughout.


Also, I think the Hornygram posts should only appear after the current dialogue ends. When they pop up in the middle of conversations, it breaks the pacing and, again, there’s no reaction or follow-up from the MC, which makes it feel like a missed opportunity.


Finally, adding a bit more dialogue before the choice selection would help a lot — give the player more context, more emotional build-up, and it’ll make decisions feel more meaningful.


All in all, I see great potential in this game — and that’s why I’m giving it four stars. The phone interface is really well done, it's good to see that this won't be a 2 year slowburn game, and with a few improvements, this could evolve into a very hot and immersive experience. You’ve laid down a solid foundation — now it just needs stronger writing, better reactions, and more character interaction to really shine.


Best of luck, Dev. I’m rooting for this one, and I’m looking forward to future updates!