VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - Mom is a Model [Ch.5] [kirsESS ]

I like the genre a lot but the author leaves a lot to be desired when making the game and always makes the same mistakes that make me pass away when I see that it is done by him


defects: - image does not match the text
-repeat many images for many things
- sex images used previously he uses them after
- history gets very confused with the image repetitions of previous things
- the penis is so big that it is bizarre on the woman's side.
-history is not linear and progressive, it is in one place after another without warning, it simply changes
-there are so many mistakes or laziness, it makes you nervous just to look
- made so many games and always the same irritating mistakes that always seems to be the first game of someone inexperienced

As other reviews have stated Kirsess is the best when it comes to maternal cucking, you might even say it's his specialty and with this he does not disappoint. The story has a unique premise and slowly builds to a hot payoff. The dialogue is great and the graphics top notch. Recommend to any NTR lover.

It's our boy kirsESS back with another variation on his eternal theme.

I sincerely admire his monomaniacal intensity; he is F95s Ahab, forever chasing the white whale of bully induced maternal cuckolding sublimity with his mostly black harpoon.

In this iteration, Mom is a model and the bully is white. The NTR is heartless. To be continued...


P.S.: I believe the low ratings are proof of the game's quality- just read the reasons some reviewers profess, they are the most threadbare of rationalisations. "It's not a game, it's just a story". Well duh, that's why it has the Visual NOVEL tag.
"It's unrealistic". Lol, that's like watching porn and complaining that plumbers never arrive as punctually in real life.

Nah, understand what they're actually trying to express with those criticisms, if you read them attentively: in those reviewers, the game created specific negative emotions . It hurt them, frustrated them, made them angry, made them feel powerless to intervene in the course of events. Humiliated, degraded by a categorically superior Bully and a treacherous, callous and unloving mother/figure of affection.

Which is exactly what a good hard NTR game is supposed to do.

Ok

Artwork: 5/5 I love the style of the design especially with the mother

Story: 1/5 While I won't lower this part because it is NTR I am lowering it due to the fact that sadly it is the same one trick pony with said author. Plus sadly the author tries to hard to show how pathetic the son is while at the same time tries too hard to make the bully seem superior.

Gameplay: 0/5 This isn't a game at all it is story being told. A game would have it where you could make choices to change the outcome

Overall: 2/5 had there actually been some choices within this novel even if they had only lead to the son being NTRed but on different levels or even if the creator just let the art tell the story without trying to hard to make the son a wimp and the bully a superior alpha male I could have given this novel a higher score.

As mentioned before I don't have a problem with Netorare no matter what form it takes since it is one of my favorites. however the artwork and the fact that it is one of my favorite tags alone won't save it here.

Since this is a VN, I didn't expect to have much of a choice in how story progresses and that's how it is in "Mom is a model". The problem with this VN is that NTR is too harsh in it, the bully (Landon) literally fucks every girl out of your life and makes you to watch it and even threatens to use them against you and makes you his bitch, so maybe try to change the story in next parts of the VN and make him avenge himself and punish the bully. (and his mom in the process)
Other than that the renders are decent (cum renders are surprisingly satisfying)

I don't mind games with cheating but not the biggest fan of humiliation. Landon already broke the friend Abby by getting her to admit things in the throes of passion. Like the MC is a looser. I wonder how long it will be before he gets the mother to say shit like that. The MC should have shown the mother the video clips of Abby and that he was tormenting him with them. If she was a good mother and not a complete slut and whore she would have cut Landon off right then and there but he MC is a weak timid cuck and did not do that. One thing I never really understood if a rich guy like Landon has the charm to get any woman he wants why would be bother tormenting someone that should be beneath his notice. I know its about power and exerting dominance over others but it seems like a lot of effort for a minimal gain. But I guess the world is full of assholes.

The character models are all good. The two featured women Abby and the Mother are well done. Would like to see some animations. I guess I was interested in the game because of the artwork but the story is not very good.

Kirsess games are both amazingly deviant for those who are in the whole NTR+mommy fantasy, of which not enough games unfortunately provide for, and really fucking bad. This game in particular is one of the better ones. Its not completely deviant like Hosting the Quarterback (which really takes the genre to an extreme), and character building is fair enough.

Good points:

-hot mom, pleasant to look at.
-nicer renders than other Kirsess games.
-As in all Kirsess games, nice screwed-up NTR fantasy
-characters seem to actually look at each other more...most Kirsess have these games with characters looking blankly away from either POV camera or their partners.

Bad points:

-Not enough renders. Empty scenes, too much text for every render. The dev should concentrate on one or fewer games and focus on renders more.

This game still at beginning. Wish dev could have at least one of his games have direct mom-son sex, even if involves humiliation, etc.

I wonder why only two of KirsESS games are on this forum. I advise My mom is a meteorologist and Cool mom Sofia for other better-than-average games by this dev, even if they have many of the problems stated above.

script is good, gets the ideas across with more or less flawless english and without stretching the text too much. renders are good enough, both women we have come across so far are cute and sexy. their characters being a whole different matter of course. there are no bugs or other technical inconveniences. there are transitions though and you have to be a bit patient to see the next image and/or text. it is much more tolerable than some other games i have played though and here i didn't feel compelled to turn off transitions. i'm not an experienced player of NTR games so i may have a less than educated opinion about this, but the MC being an absolute, total, incredible loser really felt unrealistic. i mean that level of loser doesn't exist in the universe, right? if he were not a ridiculous caricature of a pathetic loser and were a somewhat more believable character i'd give this 5 stars. i hope he somehow gets his act together in the future and seeks out revenge from everyone if only to help out with the space-time continuum he has disrupted with his dangerous level of loserness.