Ren'Py - Completed - Monkey Business [v1.0] [Lazy Monkey]

  1. 3.00 star(s)

    EyeWish1

    Another incest fest whereby the irresistible stud fucks just about everything breathing. This was tolerable for a while, but the story changes dramatically about half way through, and it becomes a bit of a farce from that point on. The game is also too long and I really struggled to make it to the end.

    The only aspect of the game that really kept me interested was the rivalry between the MC and his sister. She was damn hot and I loved her look and her attitude. She was the only reason why I continued clicking.

    The animations were also subpar and the English translation was purely awful. It seemed like different people were editing the text, with some dialogue actually well written ( Sibling banter) and the rest a garbled, broken word salad.

    I cant really recommend this game to anyone unless you like the characters appearances. There are many other games that do incest better.
  2. 5.00 star(s)

    Xx_Gamerdad-69_xX

    I've had the privilege to experience ths game in it's original language, so I don't know how bad the English translation is, but looking at other comments it seems to be subpar to put it mildly. Since there seems to be some misunderstandings, I'd like to clarify:
    • MC is not written to be dumb or dimwitted. He may sometimes be put into awkward situations for comedic effect, but no more that that;
    • MC and his sister ARE NOT actually arguing. They just have this "best friend" flavored way of sarcastic communication. I personally find it kinda cute, since there are no mental barriers between them, and they're really open to one another;
    • Nobody said that dad has lost an eye, I think it was just a Snake Plissken reference (maybe, idk);
    • Time skipping is appropriate, there is nothing to be shown or explained in these time periods. Although scene transitions at the beggining are a bit disorienting;
    • MC DOES care about getting his teacher pregnant (if you decide to impregnate her), he just reacts in a composed way and respects her decision, not to mention that, at the time, he's already concerned with other more pressing issues;
    • There is no fuckfest. Sex scenes are plentiful (which is to be expected of a porn game) but not abundant. There is no oversaturated harem, all girls are memorable, and there are no "wait, who's that?" scenarios.
    • Overall dialogue is well-written and I did not feel like skipping much of anything, but, again, can't say the same about translation.
    This is a linear VN with no sandbox what so ever, so idk why it's tagged as one. But linear doesn't mean kinetic, there are quite a few choises to make: mainly which girl interest you the most and whether to impreg or finish outside, but there are some that will change your ending, which there are 3 in total, I believe.
    Visuals are ok. Animations are basic and images are poorly compressed hence the grain effect and some graphic artifacts. But the scenes are still hot and backgrounds are comprehesive and somewhat organic and not immersion breaking.
    In conclusion, this game is literally a Jojo reference - 10/10.
  3. 3.00 star(s)

    xa0

    Another incest oriented story about some young dude trying to bang his mom, sister, cousin and some other girls. There are many games with this theme, but only some of them are really good...

    PROS:
    + Nicely looking, sexy girls with bunch of hot positions and sexy scenes, some are even animated.
    + Even if main story is fixed, there multiple ways of developing relations with girls and that leads us to different endings, so game has some replayability value to offer.

    CONS:
    - It's not a sandbox. It's just VN with choices appearing from time to time.
    - No sound.
    - Renders quality is average at best with lots of grain in them. I'm not sure if this supposed to be some artistic effect or just low-res pictures flaw but it doesn't look great.
    - Sex scenes are very short and only mom and sis have some decent amount of them, other girls got only few.
    - MC and his sister are constantly bickering. And I mean it. They don't have single normal conversation. I can understand some siblings rivalry but here like 1/3 of all possible dialogues in whole game are MC and his sis arguing about some totally random crap on every fuckin occasion. Seriously just WTF? Reading this is simply tiring and far from being funny.
    - Main story is complete mess. I think I can spoil a bit as a warning. Whole main plot circles about MC's father doing some shady business and dragging his family into it. One time he just does some shady things, other time he's some small criminal, then almost like some mafia boss shaking whole city and earning millions, another time he looses eye during some mysterious attack, only to get it magically back later and no one asks about it.... Well I'm sure you get the point. We have also some random characters that seem to be important but we never now who they are - they just appear without explanation for some scenes, do some random stuff, and then disappear and never return. Another thing is sudden time jumping - something is happening and then game plot suddenly jumps week forward and continue like nothing happened and we're left without clue how that thing even ended and what impact it had.

    As sandbox this game is terrible because it's simply not a sandbox. As VN it's average at best (irritating characters, messy story). As sex game... Well this part is actually not that bad but it could be without doubt more developed to be considered good. Overall it's not a bad game and it's even playable but at the same time it's also far from great. You can play it if you're fan of incest and like looking at some sexy pictures but don't expect anything amazing.
  4. 5.00 star(s)

    KabooZ18

    If you like I*cest , then this is a great game, just install the multimod for a way better translation and some fixes.

    It's a quirky story but it's a lot of fun.
    Loved the Mom and Sister routes, played both twice.
  5. 2.00 star(s)

    BurekBeats

    It's an extremely quirky story and the translations are weird and at times buggy (you'll encounter some random Russian from time to time). The characters are somewhat obnoxious. Personally, I didn't find it funny either, but that may just be me. Oh, and there was no sound at all.
  6. 3.00 star(s)

    redoubt27

    Overall, not bad, but not quite 4* "good"..
    Decent enough story with good renders, scenes, and models to give it a chance, but unless you're looking for incest stuff, this is just an average story with average execution. Good enough to not be poor, but falls short of that 4th *...

    Maybe a bit is lost in translation, but the flow of the story is abrupt, jumps around a bit too much, and never really seems to settle into a good rhythm with the available plot(s). Kinda like changing positions too often, can't quite get into that groove. And just when you do, oh, time to change positions again... :ROFLMAO:
  7. 3.00 star(s)

    HugeBeef

    Pretty okay game if you like dense AF MC, 90% of times this motherfucker only says "huh?" "what?" "what do you mean" its getting annoying, after he fucked them both he acts like a retard when they try something, could not sit through this braindead mc :)
  8. 5.00 star(s)

    H3XA

    The amount of times I have replayed this game means I have to come back to this thread to give it a 5 star rating, there's something about this one that draws me back to it every time...

    The mom is my favorite character by far, well designed visually as well as very well crafted in terms of her personality.
  9. 4.00 star(s)

    Fantabulous

    Monkey Business is one of those AVNs that make you feel like they could have been extraordinary, the state of the art, but fail to shine as they should because this or that. You have a hell of a good time with them, yet you are left wanting the developer had gone the extra mile and made this the masterpiece it deserved to be.

    In this case we have a good enough story, with some plot holes here and there but just good enough not to spoil the overall experience. Also, maaaybe after a certain point the plot takes a dive and it becomes too much of a fuckfest, like some other reviewer pointed out. Animations are decent - kinda short'ish and sketchy at times. Continuity among scenes also sometimes leaves something to be desired. There's virtually no sound, sometimes character titles are wrong, there's a significant amount of typos and English is subpar at times. I played this with the multi patch installed btw.

    What does make this an outstanding adult game for me despite all those flaws is the absolutely sexy situations you find yourself in (it's the situation itself or the camera angle what gets you going more than a killer render) and how gorgeous -while still realistic- the LIs are. Mom is a red head (a plot hole in itself, since neither are you or your sister) that becomes raunchy after drinking some wine... She makes you want to bang her since the first time you ever lay your eyes on her. On the other hand your sis is your typical pushy and annoying older sister, but probably the one that better plays the part in an adult game. You get to decide if you want to follow a love (maledom) or corruption (femdom) path with her, leading to different situations. Mom gets a similar treatment. Now, the experience is satisfying as it is... but if only facial expressions were more varied, you feel things would be so much better. Yet you can't help feeling that some renders are missing, seeing as sometimes a long talk is staged with less shots than you'd expect. Or, you don't read the dialogue that you'd expect at a certain moment. Such as the MC not having a care in the world that he got his teacher pregnant, like that's as irrelevant as what foot you step on when you get up.

    As a final thought I'd dare say this game is a hell of an incentive to learn the ropes at least enough to "fill the holes" (no pun intended...) and really turn it into one of those games you would never want to remove from your computer no matter what. As it is, it's not quite that good yet, but almost there.
  10. 3.00 star(s)

    Requiem131

    This one has good and bad things all together. The story, to start somewhere, is all over the place. It tries to create some tension and buildup but quickly transforms into a fuckfest with other plots intermingled in a bunch that didn't work for me. But on the plus side, it does have a lot of choices, some of them very impactful, and it is complete which is also a good point to it, and a rare one at that.

    Character models are fine, and pretty different from those seen in other games all the time. But animations are rather poor and sex scenes are very brief. And at least in my playthrough there were no sounds, not sure if that is a bug or not.

    So, all in all, can work for a quick fap but I don't think it manages to create a compelling story or characters.
  11. 5.00 star(s)

    superseveneight

    This game surprised me in a really good way.
    I know some people complain about the renders but I personally had no issue with them, on the contrary. I think the game looks good, and most importantly the LI look great. The mother and daughter look amazing, and also very different from the usual models you see. (Bonus points for freckles)
    The story is wacky at times, but paired with well woven relationship dynamics, it makes for an extremely interesting and entertaining experience.
    The game has impactful choices, memorable scenes and a satisfying conclusion.
    Also if you're into taboo, this is most likely a must play.
    I'd also like to mention that this developer works hard and diligently, his new project "Imperial Chronicles" is already extremely promising and I look forward to follow its development.
  12. 5.00 star(s)

    cjindi

    It's awesome! Just completed it and read through all the dialogues . Art is great, story is great, mom scenes are excellent only wished it were harem but still amazing game. Thank you for creating this game.
  13. 5.00 star(s)

    Deleted member 7535968

    best *cest game on f95, because the story in very detailed and have different paths and endings, the sister is the hottest girl on f95. i really hope that Imperial Chronicles can be better than this (the mom and Cassandra are really hot too)
  14. 3.00 star(s)

    123dmnxhrsx

    It's been a while since I've "finished' the game but I randomly came across this thread again and decided to drop a brief review.

    The story was somewhat interesting in the beginning, it's nothing too special though, nothing that got me like "Okay, that's something new that I never have seen before". And to be real honest, I even skipped most of the story the closer I got to the ending.

    What I did like for sure, were the scenes/animations and the models being used. That's why I at least just skipped to all of the different scenes once I got bored of the story.

    If you're looking for a game with some decent incest scenes, you could probably go and check it out. If you're looking for a great and a somewhat new story, this isn't the right one imo.

    But that's up to you.
  15. 2.00 star(s)

    Boweniscool

    2/5 I really tried, a handful of times, But I just couldn't get into this one
    Some honesty here; This review is being written a little while after the last time I tried to play through, was gonna try again but decided leave my opinion instead :/
    Im not sure if it is the story or the writing but I can't get into this story! Some of it is funny but not enough of it to get me in further. The story just doesnt grab my attention soon enough to keep me going. With those last two statements I have then just skipped through to see the naughty bits, and gotta skip a lot sometimes, but even then I don't think it's worth it cuz none of it matters without the context imo so I just quit
    + Looks ok, Characters are good looking i think (MC kinda puts me off and idk why but still looks good)
    + Runs well, Cant think of any issues/bugs/glitches that i noticed
    - The rest of it? I know that's not super helpful but I dont know how else I feel
    -Meh story
    -Writing is ok, Has some funny points but I found the majority to just fall flat
    -Characters do have personalities but I never got to the caring about anyone part so I wouldn't say it's a positive

    2/5 I tried it, Tried again, and again a few more times but just wasn't for me. Sure it would be fine or even great for others
  16. 3.00 star(s)

    Dimsey87

    The writing to begin with was bad but in a way that was at least humorous and that you could get the gist of what was intended, but after a point it becomes kinda gibberish. Maybe the quality picks up again later, but as a stickler for consistency I suppose I'll never know. Pity because until it became painful to read I was otherwise enjoying it.
  17. 5.00 star(s)

    imDazey

    Great game, played it all the way through, read everyline. It's awesome! I wouldn't change anything about it, besides more mom scenes of course. Thank you for creating this game, I appreciate you so much!
  18. 3.00 star(s)

    jhonnyoctosa

    not a sandbox game, more like VN..
    skip all the way to the ending..

    really like the art tbh but sister look way older than mom and aunty..
    not much choice of sex position, it'll be good if you can give a little more freedom to the mc
  19. 5.00 star(s)

    Beduin123

    This game isn't without flaws (well, which is?) but I have to give it 5 stars even if just for one reason (and there are more than one) - the nylons. I love long legs in stockings and pantyhose and this game has plenty.
    The story is also not bad at all and the girls are very hot. One of my favorite games.
  20. 5.00 star(s)

    FAT_D4DDy

    If you are a fan of taboo or , this is imo a must play.
    Taboo is the main focus in this game. The models are aesthetically pleasing. The writing is not half-bad. The graphics are great. Animations are also good.
    8.5/10