VN - Ren'Py - Moonlit Devotion: A Paladin's Harem [v0.03a] [SilverWingBastion]

Great characters and an interesting story for only being two updates in.
Only thing keeping this from being 5 star for me is the script bloat. There is WAY TOO MUCH descriptive dialogue.
The worst case of this is the beginning argument between the MC and Vlad where for almost the entire scene there is descriptive dialogue between EVERY spoken line. It even gets worse at the end of the argument when the MC's thoughts are also added in.
The bloat honestly had me skipping most of the non-dialogue.
I would say do more show not tell, but oddly enough the game does do a pretty good job at showing with constantly updating character models during dialogue.
I’m still really enjoying the game overall and look forward to future updates. Just hope the writing gets a bit tighter so it can match the quality of the characters.

Game is nice, the characters are nice, the story is looking good so far.
But there's something about the script feels off...
like if i was reading a c.ai conversation, its just the way the things are written and explained in very detail... its almost like a.i generated, that's what made them feel a bit off for me.
I might be wrong though, but overall... Great game keep it up!

I'm a man of simple tastes and this game hits nearly all of them. (Sheep girl, bat girl, cat girl, only missing an oni girl)

The writing is decent, MC feels like a character and not a cut out. The LIs are adorable, Anna's part in the story is great. And the story is interesting, I'm looking forward to where it goes.

The renders are average in the begining, but get better as the game goes. Their quality jumps by the end. The characters look good. MC looks like he hasn't escaped a kindergarden like most koikatsu males look, Vlad is punchable and the girls are great.

The game has potential, and I'd like to see more updates. I hope the devs have a plan for this project and can deliver consistent updates, and not just abandon it after 1 or 2 updates.