Ren'Py - Completed - MWNeus [v1.0 Fix] [CLLGames]

When peeps review and say the story is terrible, I take that with a pinch of salt. I can always follow a story thread however tenuous it may be...!

But, in all the games I have tried on this site, this has been the first one that I had no idea what was going on.

Forget going from 0-100 too fast, this starts at 99 and oscillates between 97 and 102! It's confusing and I had to drop it faster than 981cm/s.

On the positive side, the LI is cute. I appreciate a small cast. This could be good.

I wish the Dev all the best. Current version is 0.9, and I do know that the last 20% of a game's development is 80% of the work... so maybe it will be worth checking out soooooon....

The writing in this game is ABYSMAL. Do not trust the opinions of anyone who says otherwise.

• The syntax and grammar? Bad
• The dialogue? Awful
• The character development? Atrocious
• The world-building? Poor
• The story? Lousy
• The pacing? TERRIBLE

Honestly, I could go on, but I'm getting tired of coming up with synonyms for "shit".

So why, you might ask, am I not giving it a 1 star review if it's so dreadful? 3 stars isn't even that terrible, you might say.

Well the reason is simple: This game is hot as fuck.

Put another way, if you ignore all the writing and just watch the sex scenes, this game is genuinely good. The renders are gorgeous. The LI looks amazing and she has a dozen hot outfits, different makeup and hair styles, etc... The animation starts off solid and gets better as time goes on. The sex scenes have various positions, locations, and angles.

Genuinely, if I could rate this game on the sex scenes and visuals alone, it would be an easy 4.5. But the writing is so bad that it drags everything else down with it.

TLDR; Do yourself a favor and pick this game up when you want nothing more than fap material. Skip ALL the dialogue, just pretend the game is a slideshow and you'll have a better time with it.

This next part is for the dev: Please, for the love of god, work with a writer. Your visuals are very good, and you seem to be improving even more. If you worked with someone who could write believable characters and even a half-decent story, you could make something genuinely great here.

The only good thing about this game is the model for the LI. There is no story at all it moves to fast. This is just a porn game with sandbox grind and there are better animations in other games if you want a fap. It's okay for what it is I will still check out future updates but it's a bit boring for me to rate any higher than a 2 star. I'd really give it a 2.5 if I could cause the renders do look nice for the effort the dev has put into it but I can't give it a 3 yet.

The story could use more scenes, flashbacks of sorts, depiction of how they grew and how they got to the point they are in life during the story, could use some more sadness, something that keeps you intrigued.. but hottdamn sex scenes are veeeeery good.

This is super nicely done, nice animation, interesting plot and mc is not a weakling, a joke so many others. Obviously, the girl\s is/are cute as hell ...and the story is almost full - well at least it doesnt feels like is cut in cliffhanger...

Simple story, executed incredibly well. I hope to see what else the dev has plans for next. But I do hope the next game has a more intricate narrative. I think the games biggest asset would be it's renders.

Mechanically a simple game, but executed well. The strong point of this game is definitely the renders. The user interface, and how your interact with the game feel straightforward simple and is well done (this deserves mentioning because it is certainly not always the case, and creating a good UI is deceptively hard). I'm giving it 5 stars, not because it's a perfect game, but because it's worth your time.

The premise of the game is that you're corrupting your roommate to breed her. I like that this game is not grindy at all. You can play through it pretty quick and get to the 'ending'.

Now the ending deserves some mention. I played the 0.8 version and after some endings there is more content. It even seems like the game is set up to continue play. I don't know how I feel about that. I enjoyed the ending sequences. However, I don't think the game needs a continuation after that. I also wasn't sure if I got to see all the content because after some endings the story branches and branches again. I would have been happy with just 2 or 3 ending sequences and a return to menu. Perhaps a tip for the developer: sometimes less is more/better.

Interesting game, great renderings, the girls are very good despite their crazy personalities it's still excellent, mc now has a lot of mouth to feed .

Congratulations to the developer with his project.

This might be the best example of this style of game I've ever seen. No grind at all. For all it's rough edges Neus feels really likeable and endearing and the scenes are all really hot. This game seems like a real passion project.

Simple review because I love pretty much everything about it. One star off for the really really terrible grammar. Half the time i have no idea what they are saying. But I get the overall theme. Get a Translator to fix the dialogue and you have a winner.

Short form and accomplishes more or less precisely what it needs to. Other than the occasional uncomfortable or awkward face from Neus, the art and animation are good. The writing is (intentionally?) very goofy and hard to take seriously. Frankly, this one is so short that I don't see any reason NOT to play it unless you specifically don't like pregnancy.

Animation: Very good, a fine combo of sound and animation.
Scripting: Needs a little bit of grammar work, but i like the direction
Story: Entertaining and fun
This is a short and enjoyable game with well crafted visuals. The main game is mostly complete but I look forward to what else this creator will do in the future.

Not a bad game, story is not great but its alright, it is a small and pretty short game though with a single LI so dont expect to much, it do have a few fun moments as well.

Well game got a bit better as of 0.10, now its more like twins or even possible triplet, still the same girl though just times 3 but alot of sex scenes, outfits and some pregnancy scenes, game is not a slow burn but a very fast one but i kinda like it, so many diffrent endings which is quite fun.

The LI looks good, it has pregnancy, decent music/sound effects and even though its sandbox style there is no real grind and everything feels easy.

The animations are also decent not the best but good enough to enjoy, and there is plenty of them, alot more then you would expect for this size of a game.

Aslong as you dont expect a full blow long story its good, so for what it is it does deserve 4 stars.

It's a very good game, beautiful graphics, good story. It should be encouraged to do more. If there are a lot of scenes it will be great. I love the creampie scene. I want there to be a lot of scenes like this. Asking for big breasts, asking for many women would be good.

I really enjoyed this. The story was great and I enjoyed the character design. I especially lover her natural looking eyebrows. That was a great touch and what drove me to download the game. The dialogue could use some cleaning up. There was a little problem with the odds he vs. she but it was clear enough.

I do and I don't know why this gets high ratings. She looks great. But the progression is almost robotic. So is the dialogue. If maledom corruption, or any kind of immersion, is what you're after, look elsewhere. This is just some alien MC with a bizarre motivation perving all over and quickly conquering his flatmate.

One of the best games focusing on only one girl. Tons of content, nice looking models, big opportunities for more content in next updates. Everything (almost?) is repeatable. There is no grind, no cheating is required to play it. Truly great.

Version 0.7

Awesome game: straightforward MC - no bullshit, no school-level bizarre jokes, no extra dialogue lines. Tons of animated scenes. Skippable mini-games. Fluent UI. I like it all. Even some lewd outfits. Looking forward to the story progress (for the split and all) and more content in that regard.

Dev has proper understanding of sandbox - it's not the grind it's the repeatable content (from the game itself and not from the gallery of some sort).

Score!!! 5/5

Great game, its good for people who like corruption and focus on one person instead of dozens of women that you barely connect to, wish more games like this could be made instead of all the harem games that release mostly.

This game is the proof that you can have a good game with satisfying amount of content without having 30 different girls.

There is only one girl and the game is about romancing her. You unlock more scenes and outfits like a corruption game, but this time it's wholesome.

There is a walkthrough and the game isn't grindy at all.

There is a gallery, daily repeatable scenes aren't in the gallery. You can easily access the scenes from the previous level, which is a feature missing from many sandbox games I have played.