The writing in this game is ABYSMAL. Do not trust the opinions of anyone who says otherwise.
- The syntax and grammar? Bad
- The dialogue? Awful
- The character development? Atrocious
- The world-building? Poor
- The story? Lousy
- The pacing? TERRIBLE
Honestly, I could go on, but I'm getting tired of coming up with synonyms for "shit".
So why, you might ask, am I not giving it a 1 star review if it's so dreadful? 3 stars isn't even that terrible, you might say.
Well the reason is simple:
This game is hot as fuck.
Put another way, if you ignore all the writing and just watch the sex scenes, this game is genuinely good. The renders are gorgeous. The LI looks amazing and she has a dozen hot outfits, different makeup and hair styles, etc... The animation starts off solid and gets better as time goes on. The sex scenes have various positions, locations, and angles.
Genuinely, if I could rate this game on the sex scenes and visuals alone, it would be an easy 4.5. But the writing is so bad that it drags everything else down with it.
TLDR; Do yourself a favor and pick this game up when you want nothing more than fap material. Skip ALL the dialogue, just pretend the game is a slideshow and you'll have a better time with it.
This next part is for the dev: Please, for the love of god, work with a writer. Your visuals are very good, and you seem to be improving even more. If you worked with someone who could write believable characters and even a half-decent story, you could make something genuinely great here.