Story is very familiar without being cliche. Easy to jump on and get to know the characters. Serves its purpose.
Characters could be interesting, but it is made clear very fast that every woman is just a slut to be fucked by other men. Too fast in my opinion. Girlfriend was shown to be tramp before we even get to know that MC has a girlfriend. Other girl did seem cute too... "she made clear that she is not interested 5 years ago", or something.
I personally think that we as readers too should feel something for the women, before they get fucked by other men. Random slut getting fucked and MC crying, "why is this happening?", is as exciting as MC fucking unknown woman and telling, "I love you."
Visually game is good. Women show lots of skin in normal conversations and that made more fun to read the base story. Sex scenes were kind of short, but what little there was, was well made.
Characters could be interesting, but it is made clear very fast that every woman is just a slut to be fucked by other men. Too fast in my opinion. Girlfriend was shown to be tramp before we even get to know that MC has a girlfriend. Other girl did seem cute too... "she made clear that she is not interested 5 years ago", or something.
I personally think that we as readers too should feel something for the women, before they get fucked by other men. Random slut getting fucked and MC crying, "why is this happening?", is as exciting as MC fucking unknown woman and telling, "I love you."
Visually game is good. Women show lots of skin in normal conversations and that made more fun to read the base story. Sex scenes were kind of short, but what little there was, was well made.