Good in the beginning, then falls off.
Up to version 0.3V, the buildup has a great pace and makes sense (porn standard). What I really like is how that blonde elf really seems to be set up to be the instigator of the NTR. The FMC and the elf are well written. The redhead I find boring. So far, I give it 5/5 stars.
Then, unfortunately, the dev makes, in my opinion, a kinda bad creative choice. He decides to implement a feature where the FMC has to drink a potion and enter an area that makes the FMC more horny. Instead of having this already corrupted elf incite the FMC and MC to develop a NTR fetish, he decides to cut corners by implementing the potion and this new "area".
I believe the dev has great potential in making NTR games. Here, I think he made some mistakes that he should learn from.
Up to version 0.3V, the buildup has a great pace and makes sense (porn standard). What I really like is how that blonde elf really seems to be set up to be the instigator of the NTR. The FMC and the elf are well written. The redhead I find boring. So far, I give it 5/5 stars.
Then, unfortunately, the dev makes, in my opinion, a kinda bad creative choice. He decides to implement a feature where the FMC has to drink a potion and enter an area that makes the FMC more horny. Instead of having this already corrupted elf incite the FMC and MC to develop a NTR fetish, he decides to cut corners by implementing the potion and this new "area".
I believe the dev has great potential in making NTR games. Here, I think he made some mistakes that he should learn from.