2D Fan Art My artworks progress

[Xenoga'me]

Hi,
I want to know your opinion on my progress in drawing my artworks
This is my first artwork for the Magical Gene game,2 years ago. without tablet
And this is for 1 year ago:

with a xp_pen tablet






And this is for 2 weeks ago:

 

[Quintilus]

On the last picture fingers looks....off?????

 

[Xenoga'me]

On the last picture fingers looks....off?????

Yep, It can be better I know
I, ll fix it. this is for next version

 

[Gabriele D'Annunzio]

no effense you gotta work on proportions quite a lot

 

[HankX]

The opinion ahead is of someone that only seen the screenshots of your game.
The art itself is okay, the proportions need work but looking for references in photos can leap you ahead in this regard easily.
What put me off is the core of the game (repeating, as someone that only seen screenshots), when i see something called "Magical Gene" i immediately think of it applied to females and but from what i seen there's no such thing.
Basicaly i expect something akin to Corruption of Champions, in regard body modifications.
Body types like the Chaixas Games, in regard to THICCNESS.
+ Extra kinks into the mix.
Opinions of a moderately degenerate gentleman.

 

[ParkG]

The new artwork, based on your game's screenshots, are a good progress from this. I like the more natural looking breasts, as opposed to many artworks that just slap two big circles and call it a day. Only problem is probably the faces. They have different styles, like they're done by different artists with different methods. Other than that, you art definitely nailed the thick-MILF part. Not sure if you're still updating this progress thread, but looking forward to it!

 

[somebodynobody]

Very hard to tell since a comparison of old/new should always be of the same character in same pose, etc. This helps the viewer to notice the detail changes. I can see that at least your clothing looks better.


My normal recommendations.

Recommendations for materials of people who want to draw 2d better.

Andrew Loomis: His books are considered pretty cornerstone for an artist's education primarily "Fun with a pencil" for a beginner "Successful Drawing" and "Figure Drawing for All it's Worth" for intermediate, and "Creative Illustration" for Advanced. Other books can be woven in, but make sure the ones you take on are in your correct knowledge bracket.

Burne Hogarth: He was a master of Dynamic poses and his books on them really help to illustrate movement and action.

Bert Dodson: Keys to Drawing

If you want to spend some money. This is an online lecture program that has a huge amount of information.

You must be registered to see the links

You must be registered to see the links

Has a lot of book suggestions for drawing of all types.

You must be registered to see the links

Of course youtube has tons and tons of courses and videos from both professionals and amateurs on learning to draw, finding art style, etc.

 

[Xenoga'me]

The new artwork, based on your game's screenshots, are a good progress from this. I like the more natural looking breasts, as opposed to many artworks that just slap two big circles and call it a day. Only problem is probably the faces. They have different styles, like they're done by different artists with different methods. Other than that, you art definitely nailed the thick-MILF part. Not sure if you're still updating this progress thread, but looking forward to it!

Thank you so much,
I'm the only character artist in the group. I'm trying to be better. I've done some new characters but I want to upload the next version characters to seen the differences between them.

Very hard to tell since a comparison of old/new should always be of the same character in same pose, etc. This helps the viewer to notice the detail changes. I can see that at least your clothing looks better.


My normal recommendations.

Recommendations for materials of people who want to draw 2d better.

Andrew Loomis: His books are considered pretty cornerstone for an artist's education primarily "Fun with a pencil" for a beginner "Successful Drawing" and "Figure Drawing for All it's Worth" for intermediate, and "Creative Illustration" for Advanced. Other books can be woven in, but make sure the ones you take on are in your correct knowledge bracket.

Burne Hogarth: He was a master of Dynamic poses and his books on them really help to illustrate movement and action.

Bert Dodson: Keys to Drawing

If you want to spend some money. This is an online lecture program that has a huge amount of information.

You must be registered to see the links

You must be registered to see the links

Has a lot of book suggestions for drawing of all types.

You must be registered to see the links

Of course youtube has tons and tons of courses and videos from both professionals and amateurs on learning to draw, finding art style, etc.

Thanks a lot bro, for this great information
I'm trying with proko and Andrew loomis right now. Proko is great.