VN - HTML - Abandoned - My Corruption Story [v0.1] [dr.maker]

It had a good start, MC's character was strong, there was no lewdness and everything else was good

As long as MC became a prostitute in one second! It means that it is illogical and boring, no one plays the game because it is porn, if we want porn, we go to pornhub!

In the future, I will check the game again, if it has been reworked and slow-burned, and if it has increased the sexual tension, I will correct the score.

Gameplay:
Chat Novel, linear
Interesting concept. I've played a chat game (Emily is away) which was absolutely incredible. It's quite engaging actually. But there is a big problem with conversations and temporality.

Story:
The story is straightforward, with one only path. The way it is told is very funny and well written (not boring). It's quite short.

Graphics/Animation:
Simple porn pictures. It helps well to the context of the story which is the core of the game. Nothing more.

Overall impression:
There is potential here. But it requires better coding. I'm not sure if the engine is able to manage that kind of complexity.

Good start.

I like the texting and the coruption side

Only critics that i have is that you can already talk with someone before you are there in the story it should be locked.
And that you can see from a mile away who the guy in the bar was with anna and who the milf was from the fist sneak pic

I really liked this game. There are a few bugs, but they do not interfere with enjoying the process. Personally, I would like a slower corruption than here and some more obvious branching of the story, but I believe that the author will succeed

v0.1
Well written, effective use of images, interesting interface that works pretty well. Several hours after finishing the available content I find myself still thinking about the characters/story and where it will go next.

Definitely has some flaws (too easy to read chat messages out of order) that need to be ironed out, but filled with promise and hope for the future releases.

Has potential but if you want to make a game about text messages exchanges over several days you need to be able to set it up so you can't progress future conversations, because right now it's really dumb

This VN is pretty decent for a first release. I like the aspect that the story is told via text messages, I've seen a couple of games like these before here. The story of corrupting the Main Protaganist is told often before, but because it is told with text messages it feels more original. the story is easy to understand and it flows well. If you expect anything special this is not your game. But if you like the corrupting the Female Protaganist kind of games give this one a try.

Only real complaind I have is that all text are received at the same time. It is confusing when you text with the boyfriend and they talk about things that didnt happen yet, because you should be texting with the girlfriend first before texting the boyfriend. It get's a little confusing if you are texting with the wrong person, so the dev shoul make it that it is impossible to do so.

In the end if you like this kind of story, the game is worth a playthough even in this early stage. 4/5 for me now hoping the mentioned issue is solved in the next release or soon thereafter.