VN - Ren'Py - My Dorm [v0.23.1 S3 Ch.3] [Tropecita Games]

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Its the try to compensate lack of lewd and sexual fantasy/imagination with loads of characters thrown at the MC to fuck. And when I say fuck, its all plain vanilla! It gets so boring very fast. The teasing of anal and the 2 anal (plug) scenes is not realy worth mentioning. Lactation is merely teased. The squirting ist passing by fast and the cream looks like plastic. It feels all so dead and atifical never natural, the lewd scenes are mostly repetative and all screams lack of a perverts imagination but of the pope lecturing about sexual intercourse in a harem.

What I liked was the incest or the family relationships, wich in the end I realized kept me going because of expectations to see them realy realy come to life but never do, because - lack of imaginative writing skill and sexual perversion - .
It becomes a huge dissapointment at the start of Chapter 2 as one finaly realizes: there will never be more than what were already there in C1. And C1 was only a tease. This VN nowhere in the lewd scenes goes all the way, its so boring!

And yes there was a plot, I lost because I got to remember who was who and what/why 20 woman ...

Still I recommend it... as it is a tease to waste your time.

Graphics: 4/5
Writing: 3/5
Plot: 1/5
Lewd: 1/5
Audio: yes

Final verdict: not fuckable if your in for kink; but vanilla

One of the best VN's I've played in the last twelve month The story line is a bit of a push, but few if any are "believable" renders are very well done and refreshing to actually see a vast selection of body types

Cute girls, each one with her own personality, tastes and fears. It may not be the game with the deepest story but I like the situations around each girl and the interactions between them.
So, as I said, it may not be the deepest game, but if you want a cute game with a well written story to enjoy and pass the time, I think this game is great

Honestly the scenes and the renders are top notch. If you're looking for something to fap to then this is a 5/5 guaranteed.
It's a fuck fest. MC fucks literally all of the girls. If they show a hint of jealousy he tells them if they don't like it then they can bounce. Then they proceed to bounce on his dick anyways.
While there is a somewhat interesting background story involving mega corporations and elite assassin ass kicking clones, which MC also fucks, the updates are pretty constant buy also very small.
I've become very bored with this story because it takes forever to progress. All of the girls are either pregnant or trying to become so. Maybe I'm just tired of the same old tired ass incest stories. But this is one of the better ones. The animations also improve drastically as the updates move forward so that's fuel for the fappers.

Just Completed Season 1 - Overall I like the My Dorm setup of Girls and (2) Mothers in particularly. I have enjoy getting to know each of the Girls

Pros:
1. BEAUTIFUL Renders of the Girls and Enviroments including the Stills Rendering of Lewd Scenes.
2. I like the Story about getting to know the Girls and Helping them in Various Situations they encounter and being A Loving Big Brother to all of them
3. The Different Women that we Meet in the Game all have varied backgrounds and different stories. I found them to be Very Belivable and Genuine
4. Fun Parties, Opportunities to play the Hero and The Over-Arching Story is a bit of mystery as well.
5. I LOVE the New Students (Particullarly, Debbie) in the house at the End of Season 1 really added to the enjoyment (and MC's Juggling Ability...lol)
6. Currently recording and playing for 2nd Time, Season 1 is really Shining now

Cons
1. Animations
A. Too Short in duration with 2 Second loops - They need to be lengthen to at least 10 - 15 Second Loops and Slower, More Sensual
B. Have Glitches in the the actual Animations
C. Needs work some were Uncanny Valley feeling.
2. Too Many Words - Dev You need to reduce the number of words significantly and move the ACTION Along. A Lot less talk and More Action!
3. MC lectures TOO much and is too Prudish at times. Too many times he is pointing is finger at girls.
4. More Player Agency by adding more choices and Less of the MC making Choices for Us.

I hope you will look at this and implement them because I have Overall enjoyed the Story and Premise of "My Dorm"

Thank you for Your Hard Work Tropecita and Keep Going! 5/5

SEASON 2 REVIEW (Game In-Progress)

LOVING It and the evolution of the Main Story is VERY Good and integration of the many Girls is WELL Done!
Fun times on the Beach.

An AMAZING Nite-Out with One of My Favorite and Most Incrediblly Intelligent of the Girls. Delicious and HOT Scene with Her that was Really Well Done from Start to Finish.

Looking forward to more of Season 2 and Now Back to it...

I started this game by chance, I had mixed feelings at first because some things bothered me morally. In fact for a while I had the unpleasant impression of having an MC acting like a former Ayatollah and building a harem as was done in the past. Fortunately, by continuing the game this feeling went away.

Unlike others I must say that I appreciated this AVN more from the end of season 1. The third part being a little too short.

I wonder if at some point the Family will run out of space because there are so many girls but I must say that I am now impatient to see the rest.

The characters are good, the MC's direct family is very well done and we get attached to the LI because they are really well done. Special mention for Eileen who is magnificent, and Maddison who I also find superb. Grand prize for ZEUS BRAVO! by far one of the best moments and I really hope to see her again in the rest of this AVN

4.8/5 stars, rounded up since 4 is too low.
Character designs are actually REALLY good and also varied which i find important.
This is one of maybe 5 games that I've played from here that actually made me literally laugh out loud at some of the funny parts.
The character writing is solid with decent variety to personalities.
I am sincerely looking forward to updates and will likely find my way to the paid method to support the dev.
Most of the time I can say "X is best girl, Y is second best" type thing. Not here! I have like a 6 way tie because each of my favs are there for different reasons.

tldr; top tier game, play immediately.

Finally finished Season 2. I loved it, more character bonding. Hope to see more Kim content.

Each character has a unique thing about them, its sweet. I say there's something for almost everyone.

Looking forward to starting Season 3 and more content moving forward.

So much fun! Can't wait for new content. Can't decide my favorite between the sister or goth cousin... I'm a little worried that we'll get so few scenes with the "main" girls with a whole load of new ones coming soon. But I'm curious to see how wide a variety the girls could be.

[SPOILER FREE]

You know, I was THIS close to give this game five stars. But updates after updates, I had to lower it to three because of some reasons. Before that, I’m going to give some positivity of this game. It has good graphics, not the best but they’re still good to look at. Sex animations are not that janky and robotic, it’s actually pretty great and almost flawless. The story is also quite interesting, even if there’s a little nonsense here and there. There’s also plenty of girls you can chase around, this might sounds like a plus for some people, but to me it’s like a double edge sword.

Alright, here comes the negative ones. My Dorm is perhaps one of those very rare games where sandbox actually would’ve worked better instead of using a typical VN progression. Remember what I said about “multiple girls”? yeah since this game isn’t a sandbox, it lacks of personal progression of each girls because you need to keep the main story going and going, and what makes it worse, it lacks of intimate moments with them. Season 1 was GOATed, Season 2 was alright, until midway of the season. Since that, it just goes downhill. If this game was a sandbox, it wouldn’t be much of a problem at all.

Another problem is the MC’s age. He should’ve been around 24 when it comes to his face, so using a mature model would justify the whole thing. Graduating from college at 24 isn’t that uncommon in real life, you know?

Last but not least, playing this game with the incest patch is a MUST. Not because I love incest or something, but without it the main story doesn’t make any sense. Also, Emma is one of the most beautiful girls I've seen in any adult games so it's a huge point and kudos to Tropecita.

EDIT: One more thing that I forgot to add in my initial review. Trope95 if you see this, please add more quality times with the girls instead of going around back and forth about acquiring the company. It's getting more and more tiresome since it's been the main topic for a few episodes.

very nice realization, no unnecessary drama or padding / lengths. amazing redheads, and a few nice lingerie/glamour scenes.
original 'family relations' take, one can play as vanilla or as... alabama as one want. all girls are optional too.
good amount of content, numerous animations increasing immersion - even if the foreground ones are often playing too fast for my taste, making it impossible to appreciate all the details of the renders.

I loved the game when it started, the girls look great, there's barely any unattractive women at all (except for those older ones, just not my cup of tea).

Problem is, there's too many of them.
First, six relatives and a friend.
Then there's two in his friend's family, exgf, singer, salesgirl, cop, and two more who are watching this building. Fifteen total.
Then there arrive four students, the fifth person and grandma. Twenty.
And then there are some more girls I have no idea who they are since I got tired of trying to play and just checked the pictures.

To make the matters worse, now there's long talking with barely any plot movement or hot scenes at all. At this point there are so many women and the game is so diluted that now the content for specific girls is added in homeopathic doses.
I really liked Emma, but after it started raining women, there were how many scenes with her in Season 2 (eight updates)? One or two? Can't remember.

Also, the number of renders/still images in each updates is a joke. Wow, 1937 still images in the update! You can just divide it by three, because there are so many pictures that are just variations of the same:
1) Person with eyes open (*a.jpg),
2) Person with eyes half-closed (*b.jpg),
3) Person with eyes closed (*c.jpg).

UPD: Since the offended dev calls me a liar with bad maths, here's the maths:
Update 17: 1168 blinking images (*b.*, *c.*) out of total 1599 still images. 1168/1599=0.616 (62% of junk renders)
Update 18: 789 out of total 1293. 789/1293=0.61 (61%)
Update 19: 1168 out of total 1915. 1168/1915=0.61 (61%)
Update 20: 908 out of total 1532. 908/1532=0.593 (59%)
Update 21: 1015 out of total 1690. 1015/1690=0.601 (60%)
Dividing by three equals to removal of 66.6%, which is pretty close to the results.

The game is quite good, the animation are really good. There are a lot of characters and most of them are quite attractive. There are good choices of kinks and general corruption of the girls is as well really good. Big dislike is about horible long conversation and too much side story. Maybe someone like it, but this just calls for skipping.

I do love this game. It has excellent graphics and really beautiful girls. Nice animations. No need to think too much how realistic it is - a harem of 15+ girls and growing - but the story is at least stringent and the characters have their unique habits.
Only boring part was the extensive DnD-session without connection to the story. But all in all excellent.

A fun and fluint read with a girl for everyone's taste .
A good linear story that is easy to follow but with enough choices to have some deviations.
The animations are quite solid and some clear improvements over the time with the updates.

The writing in this game... make me want to punch myself in the head. Mediocre verging on moronic. Decent renders of a bunch of different types of women. Bad actual animations, they're stilted and jerky. If you don't care about the writing then enjoy the harem collecting, I guess, I couldn't keep playing.

Great rendors and harem game. Who needs to reads too in depth into a f95 game plot. So much content and great slow burn that ramps up fast. Keep pumping out content and will be following. All characters are well written bimbos, so its great. Clones are interesting too and the clothes and outfits ar etoo.

Well... I have to give it the developer for giving us a crap ton of content. Doing all of this is a lot of hard work and we should, at the very least, thank them for their efforts.

Unfortunately, despite all the love and hard work they have put into this, I can't really give this better than an average rating. I will admit I may be influenced a bit by the harem approach as I am not really a fan of it in these games, but I think I am being pretty fair in my review.

To begin with, it's way too easy. I mean, there is no effort necessary for the MC to land a LI. Sure, there is some implied resistance when the "sister" who is not really his sister struggles with the idea of having the hots for her "brother" who she doesn't know is not really her brother. This is the only barrier preventing these LI from being with the MC. They all admit they want him, but they struggle with the morality of it. Okay... fine... but my point is, they already all like the MC so there is no work the MC has to do to win them. They all just line up and wait for the chance.

Of course, the "sister", "cousins" and childhood friend are all virgins... bleh... whatever. The whole "kissing lessons" scene was just silly. I mean, the MC was actually giving them pointers on how to kiss... erm... okay... like that even happens and yet it turned out to be "the best day ever" for Scarlet. Right.

And while the MC is not a complete Gary Stu, he does say all the right things to all the women. After awhile, it just gets tiring as an MC to always say and do the right things. He is always sweet and caring and in love with all the girls. It just gets old to never wonder what is going to happen and to never worry about how a LI is going to react.

I don't know, it's just a combinations of it's too sweet, all the LIs just fall in line whenever he walks into visual range. For me, the game alternates between boring and silly.

There are some good things about it. The humor is okay and I liked the way the MC deals with his feelings about everything with the little dream sequences, but that's about it. All the women are attractive and each are unique and there does seem to be some kind of underlying mystery going on regarding his father, but I am sure it will be "Oh no... MC! Please save us. We know you always take charge and always protect us as we are just helpless LIs who are so enamored with you we act like a bunch of pre-teens. How did we ever function without you!!!" Or something like that.

Again, the dev is talented and I really appreciate all of the hard work it has taken to get to this point. It is too late to go back and change anything so we will have to see where it goes.

Good luck to the developer!

UPDATE: I have learned all LIs are avoidable, but the routes for some of them are not obvious and are choice based, so I removed that comment from my review. It still does not change my overall rating.

Test version 0.12

I tried to give this story a go, but I had to stop... the MC is really not to my taste... The scene where Emma wants her first time, fulfilling her fantasy with her maid costume, the MC's reaction at this moment is just stupid... Not to mention that just before, after giving Erika oral, she falls asleep, and our hero kindly covers her with a towel before leaving ... Except it happens in a fucking sauna!
Nonsense all the time.
Plus the protagonist's face is just not to my taste. Moreover, stop the attacks against French people... A hairdresser would never do such a horror...
The lewds scenes are meh, unnatural animations.

On the good side we have the hotties, some of them are quite pretty.

But that's not enough, and sorry, I really would have liked to get to the 2nd part, but it's beyond my best efforts.

(By google translate)