VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - My Father's New Family [v0.05] [OnlyGoodGames]

No logic to the plot; the MC's and other characters actions and dialogs seem to be the product of the fantasies of a 12 year old planning his evening wank in his head before bed.

Might get better; but the DEV's seemingly monthly release schedule probably doesn't allow him to develop the story to a higher standard. I can see this one getting pulled and coming back as a "Reloaded" with a more coherent plot.

Renders are ok , if a bit wooden (poses and expressions of the models)

I was dumb enough to sub to this game only to find out I was still behind the pay wall and the game was still censored. deleted games will ignore it moving forward.

The game itself if it had sex scenes was not very good but I was curious so I took the bait.

Note to Dev, you should be a hell of a lot clearer on your tiers and let folks know they will only have access to the censored version of your game. I cannot see myself ever subbing to any game you create moving forward.

2 stars cause renders are not bad...(still that is only "good" there)...

I will take it by tags firstly.

3DCG, Male protagonist, Text-based, Mobile game, Big tits, MILF, Dating sim, Humor, Romance,Incest

did not played it to the end (all characters anoyed me thrue story and kinda made mi sick on some progress... this is probably for v 0.2

MC...yep u play as male

text based...probably yep most of scenes are just ended and jumped to other without making sence.

mobile game? idk who play porn on phone?

Big tits included.

Milf to...

dating sim?...wel it is kinetic novel so....(no it is not there)

Humor...yep definitely this game have some humor at least realy well hiden

Romance ...yep nope there....nothing romancable there

and lastly but probably why most of us are here Incest - no it is not there :-(

u will play game when u r surrendered by whores (step-mother-stepsisters....driven with desire to fuck all man)dont expect deep story just fuck fest with skipped scenes and "black" screens..

Honestly I don't even know where to begin. I've played all 3 updates posted on f95, and I'm kinda surprised at how chaotic and just all over the place this game is. I'm happy I read the spoiler description because the game literally starts with you watching your step mom doing yoga, in like the middle of a scene. All the characters are basically nymphs Monica's so people who want innocent story building are SOL. All the women are literally almost competing for biggest slut prize, while seducing and simultaneously denying the MC any kind of sex, besides the eldest sister who lives up to her and as the most sluttiest nympho "I fuck everything my mom marries that moves". My biggest gripes the scene transitions, you'll be talking to a girl and then she grabs your cock, and is all like"imma suck you off now" and then BAM outside on a park bench talking about how her moms so slutty in 1 mouse click. NO SEX SCENES WHAT SO EVER. According to the posts by the dev, all sex scenes are patron only AKA PAY WALLED. And based of what I've played so far, it's not even worth any kinda support to see what could be only like 3 renders for sex. Frankly it would transition far better if he just put a black screen in with "patron only content, next scene starting".

Honestly this games given the biggest migrain I have ever had. Far worse then any Enrish game I've played on here. The grammar and sentence structure is shockingly really well done, but the story itself feels like a 14yr old virgin would write, in my honest opinion.

It's clear this the devs first ever VN, but I can honestly agree this feels more like a kinetic novel then a VN, mainly because every "choice" in dialogue its like a single sentence and a rebuttal. And then the story continues as if nothing ever was said. No changes in characteristics or interactions between characters that I have seen so far.

Ok lets get this out of the way first...as I am reviewing this its at .02 very early many things will likely change. first offf kudos to OGG for get this out there and working. second off I like the way he is approaching the plot, no subtlety strait to it, butttt a porn game without porn is kinda lacking. if a girl in her undies is inviting you to her bed you don't jump scene to your homes kitchen. speaking of girls..... the team does make some pleasantly arranged pixels I like how the mom/wife isn't a 20 year old super model. all the girls are pretty and believable except younger sisters friend she is just too perfect . another thing is not being given a choice to act on desires, like above or when in kitchen with ida or your room wioth mom... no nudity and no choice to act... those are the weak points in this game... I love the idea they came up with and the permittivity of the family... yes I will d/l next ep.

I'll rub one out to pretty much anything, but damn. Poor renders, horrible dialogue, rushed story, ridiculous premise, etc. Honestly, other than the huge boobs on step-mom (that's a man baby, yea), I can't think of a single redeemable quality.

no sex scenes, always skips to after, need to work on the grammar and story, its a little sophomoric, good concept I get this is a start but each release has more issues than the prior. I would stop and give your audience a little treat once in a while