Others - My First Time! [v0.269] [Ashley Ratajkowsky]

this is a waste of time.
A very poor story and dialog that makes all the characters and unrealistic.
This is far from a demo, just bits and pieces with patreon promos for the author.
Nothing good about it and never will be, it´s the nigerian scam of porn games.

Ufff, where to begin?

- No new story. Little sis is in love in the MC. MC dont care for now (but well, later for sure)
- There might be incest in future but nothing in the first release
- The writing is pretty bad, Some sentence doesn´t make sense
- The overall ui is plain sh...t. No rollback - No preferences - no chance to get it to fullscreen
- To much advertise for the devs patreon. You got a lot of buttons you can click on, but 95% doesn´t work instead you get a text which reminds you to support the dev on patreon. Feels like a beggar
- MC looks like a drug dealer idiot with no charm but everything he says gets the others to laugh a lot

pro:
- Render are kind of nice

Version [v0.123) review:

Just played through the content that's in this game thus far:
- The conversations are very cringy, nonsensical and in broken English. For example MC gives the characters an alcoholic drink and they're like "HAHAHA IT'S SO GOOD!" -- It's like a bad C-tier movie script where the actors (also C-tier) read their lines in a monotone voice.
- Scroll back only gives you a log of what was last said, can't revert a choice nor is it clear if any of the few choices are simply for flavor or have any impact on the story. At this point it seems more like a kinetic novel than anything.
- The graphics are decent/basic/generic DAZ models.
- Within a minute of starting the game you're already given the choice to go to the Patreon page of the developer, few minutes further on you receive another reminder to visit the developer's Patreon.

Then at some point you can scroll through the available characters and pick to 'talk' to see their story about their first time, of which only 2 (or 3?) characters have a partially finished story so it gets cut off. Then again you're confronted with a reminder to visit the Patreon page, the characters that have nothing developed give you a Patreon reminder immediately.

It's almost as if the developer is begging you to support them through Patreon considering the amount of mentions of their Patreon is in there. If this were a fully developed game with a lot of content a few reminders make sense, but in it's current state it's bare bones and constant reminders of Patreon serve as an annoyance to the experience. It's like getting a constant cookie reminder on a webpage.

Great characters and an enchanting story. If you have a desire for a touch of innocence, a touch of incest as well as a bit of a romantic story then this one is right down your alley. The only improvement I would suggest would be for the Main Charater to be a little bit better looking.