Ren'Py - My Girlfriend Fulfills My Netorase Dreams [v0.3] [Fanorase]

great build up so far. the story is progressing in a believable manner and the nts scenes have been decent. The gf lacks a bit of personality and agrees to cuck the mc pretty quick, but the design is decent.


So far the routes don't seem to affect each other at all, which is a bit odd. could change in the future tho.

5/5 for the story alone. This game is very well written and captures the sharing aspect of an open relationship excellently. This will appeal greatly to the voyeurs who fantasize about watching their gf's or wives getting it on with other men. The pace is good as well. Many games either take way too long to get to the action or they jump in instantly. This is balanced well in that regard.

2.5/5 The graphics are decent but I usually prefer something a little more realistic although this is fine. I do wish there was animations. Hopefully as the Dev learns he'll be able to add some.

I can see the potential of where this game can go and if it keeps the progression on pace with how it is now, it'll go far and provide many levels of detail to the sharing/voyeur and maybe NTR kink. (there is no real NTR at the moment, it's all been sharing with the full encouragement of the MC who watches)

I'm looking forward to creampies, DPs, multiple partners, gang bangs, girl on girl, coercion, blackmail, cheating, that this game can eventually offer. This one is definitely on my watch list.

This review is based on update 0.3
The game’s score feels unfair, and it misleads people into thinking it’s flawless.

Pros:

• The art.
• The FMC is very pretty.

Cons:

• All the male characters look way too similar.
• There are bugs in the art. For example, there’s cum on the FMC’s face in one dialogue, then it’s gone in the next sprite, and then it’s back again in the next one. There are also other random bugs in some scenes.
• The FMC isn’t a good person. The MC said something to her out of anger, more like an uncertain suspicion than an actual accusation. It’s obvious he wasn’t trying to blame her for anything; he was just frustrated in the moment. Still, she NTR’d him, knowing full well that he loved her. Even after realizing later that it was wrong, she kept doing it for a whole month.
  I guess I better not say anything bad to my girlfriend in irl lol
• The MC isn’t great either. He said something rude to the FMC and didn’t even apologize afterward. Like, come on, dude.
• So yeah, we’re not dealing with a top-tier MC and FMC like in some other great NTR games.
• The sex scenes all feel super similar. There’s no creativity; it’s like the same scene over and over with slight changes in position and dialogue.
• There’s a bug at the end of the update where clicking on a character sends you straight to the main menu, and you lose your progress. You have to load a previous save to continue.
• I checked the difference between the two routes, it’s like 30 lines of dialogue and maybe one sex scene.
• The sex scenes in update 0.3 have really basic backgrounds, Neither tension nor excitement
• The town feels empty and lifeless.
• ETC

Overall, it’s pretty clear the dev isn’t putting much effort into the game. Everything feels rushed and shallow, from the relationships to the scenes. Oh, and I almost forgot, there’s no real story. It’s just a game about one horny guy and a horny girl. That’s it.

The game has good potential, but it is, as 0.2 a little tech demo/ish. Kind of bittersweet taste.

It is 1 hour 30 minutes of gameplay if you read the story.
The writing is nice, it takes time building up the characters and the relationship which in the end is what gives strength to the payoffs later.But with this fetish thing some times it is a little on the nose, specially that netorare part, that part hurt my eyes. And the fact that after the "confession" all of the sudden it is a flood of situations with guys.
In an ideal world I would prefer that some sort of reputation thing was put in place that attracted or "unlocked" guys or girls, whatever, something that feels more organic.

Regarding visuals this AI anime can luck details, also depending on the model you use, but things looks too clean, too staged and flat. That can be fixed but it requires experimentation. For instance the guys during the scenes all seem to be the same, I dont see much difference between the assertive guy and the shy guy in the way scenes are portrayed, and the last event of both is the same. This game in complete version can be very good, lets be real the japanese versions of these types of games have more effort in the tittles than in the games theselves, there are so many ultra low effort games mass produced out there and the amount of content in this 0.2 is way more than the majority of those. But all the games that depend on stills for the scenes need very good stills, and most dont have them, and this is no different.

I pay too much antetion to these things maybe but that is my analysis. I agree that there are not many games of this kind that aim for this quality.

So far there's not a lot of content at all, but what's there is great! All characters are at least interesting, the art is very cute and most importantly, consistent over time, and it's clear that there's a decent amount planned for the future. I look forward to it!

First review on this site!! Was not sure what to expect from this game at first but was surprised what this game has in terms of writing and characters and being so new! Unlike most in this genre some of the male characters here are actually likeable... I personally like the woman for once being the aggressor and this fills the void. Very much hoping for the best to the creator

First time I'm bothering to write a review.
While I usually don't enjoy RPGM games, I decided to give this one a try because I liked the art.
To say I was not disappointed would be an understatement. Aside from the art, this game has some of the best writing I've seen for NTRS, coupled with excellent use of facial expressions during the different acts.

Things I enjoyed:
- The GF seems to genuinely love the MC and (so far) has not been turned into a cock hungry whore. I am hoping it stays this way. Also, it's nice that the initial decision for the NTRS is not financially motivated, though I am not opposed to the idea of prostitution later in the game.
- The MC is not just a useless cuck, but rather just has this fetish which the couple indulges in.
- The art and, as mentioned above, the facial expressions. Those little winks and the like add a surprising amount of excitement to the game. It is also to be commended, that I almost didn't notice that the art was AI generated. Had to actually check the tags to be sure.
- The progression speed. The GF doesn't immediately jump to sex with other guys. In fact, at the time of writing, an actual NTRS scene with penetration (that isn't the MC's fantasy) is yet to be added.
- This is probably the main selling point: the writing. The storytelling is great. I won't say its realistic per se, but it is as believable as it probably gets for this kind of game.

Things that may be a minus later:
- The lewdness system is something I'm not sure about here. Hope this doesn't eventually turn into a grindfest.

Things I am hoping for eventually:
- The game stays purely NTRS and doesn't go into complete NTR , i.e. without the MC's consent. The only exception would possibly be some sort of rape scene.
- The breaking of formerly established taboos (like sex only with condoms)
- Some scenes with other female characters. Even better if the GF also develops the NTRS fetish over time.

Overall, this game shows a lot of promise. Good luck to the dev, looking forward to future updates!

Came (pun not intended) for the porn, stayed for the story.

Seriously - apart from it's art (which deserves credit in its own right), this game has a story that's not just deep, but also makes it seem somewhat believable with flawed characters each with their own individual personality that isn't just a flat "fuck this hole". Not to mention the gradual corruption gameplay and naturally evolving nature of the NTR relationship - it almost feels like you're there, exploring alongside them. Looking forward to updates on this!

At face value, this may seem like another generic netorase game. The art style itself I would consider average and the gameplay mechanics are nothing revolutionary when compared to other games who have a unique gimmick.

So, then why is it that I'm giving this a 5 star review. Well, simply for it's story, writing, and characters. This game authentically nails the pacing of what an netorase relationship would be like, giving noteable agency to the player to speed up or slow the pace of the game. Throughout my experience, the tempo was always spot on, and the main heroine is just an absolute treat when compared to others within the genre. The game recognizes where it's weak and where it is strong, and through that manages to capitalize fully to its advantages.

I look forward to the game's development and seeing how this story fleshes out. As this is one of the few games that has made me personally invested into the characters I interacted with and played.

A really good dialogue based game that doesnt fall under the tired trope of "big black dick destroys someones wholesome relationship". I would recommend for fans of the corruption genre. Keep up the good work!

Game is great, a lot of content compared to when it was released.
There's not weird hidden mechanics or grinding stuff, just enjoy the story and choose what you want.

The writing works well, the scenes are really good. Can't wait to see more.

v0.1

Fan of the NTRS genre, the game is well written and dialog is great so far, the relationship between MC and GF is done well, some good tease here and there (flashing, dirty talking) but a bit worried about the direction going forward. It felt really rushed towards the last 20% of the prologue...and have a feeling it might turning into one of those games, where the GF turns into a complete slut and just fucks everything that moves.... dev needs to be aware, it's the tease and emotions MC and GF experiences together that makes every NTRS scene meaningful for the player. GF to retain some prudeness is also desirable I think. 4.5 stars on just the prologue itself.

v0.2 update

The dev dialled it right back in this update, and it's perfect....loved the teasing, the dialogue, the progression, and lots to look forward to. Adjusted score to 5 stars.

Pros:
-MC and Kanade very dearly love each other. No stealing here.

-MC isn't useless like in most NTS games. He still gets to have sex with Kanade after she has sex with others, and yes, he can still make her cum. Multiple times in one session, too.

- Yes, it's AI, but it's done well, and I didn't notice any typical AI faults like 6 fingers or anything.

Cons:

- The build up to corruption is at breakneck speeds. Instant sluttification. Kanade already has two guys go raw and creampie her off the bat. This might be a pro for some people, but it's a con to me. I like a good build up and this has almost none.

Since this is a demo, I do hope that eventually some changes to the prologue can be made so the build up is slower. I'm totally ok with some denial play here with other guys getting to go raw with her but MC can't, but it feels like it's done way too soon.

Looking forward to more!

It's early doors but a large amount of content for just a prologue, it doesn't quite have the slow burn aspect that a lot of other Netorase games seem to have but I don't see this as a flaw, and given the setting I think it makes sense for the story.

My only concern is where do you go from here, but the girlfriend character is super hot and very assertive so I can see her coming up with creative ways to satisfy her boyfriends fetish.

A solid proof of concept from a first time developer. We will watch their career with great interest!

this is a diamond in the rough
the girl is perfect, not one of those giant tits girl I hate so much.
the only thing is the story progressing so fast, but anyway,want more. waiting for the next update eagerly.
this has so much potential.

Great first release. Really fun characters, the writing is very hot, and it genuinely leaves you wanting more. Hope the developer keeps it up and continues this because it's one of the most promising netorase stories on the site.

Amazing netorase game can't wait for the next update but only lacks a save system and recollection room if these are added the game would be perfect
And the due main character are great together the girlfriend is extremely hot the sex scenes with her are amazing and doing everything for the boyfriend now thats something else

In Short...A fantastic Game.
Loved every minute of it...
Great Graphics, no senseless walking around.
Hot damn Scenes, in which I loved every minute of it.
Even as a Prolong it was damn long....
Just wants you to see more.
Great Job Dev.
Highest Rating I ever Gave a RPGM Game.

This game is very good, it has a lot of content even though it's just a first version. Furthermore, the game, even though it has AI images, is very well done and the plot progresses very well in a short time. All in all, I'm looking forward to more content, and if this game is some kind of open undo it will be even better

Review for v0.1


So, we've got our hands on a RPGM netorase game. What I always like to pass as a question at any game is why is it on any given engine, and so far, atleast for the prologue it might've aswell just been a VN, the UI is generic, the movement is generic, the OST is generic and it doesn't even let you save properly as the game is spent in talks 95% of the time so far. Not detracting a point though as it's the first version for heaven's sake.

The art is AI, we've seen enough AI games recently to know that AI is both capable of 6 fingeredfused hand monstrosities and consistent pleasant looking art, which doesn't necessarily feel generic. I'm inclined to say the chips on this fall towards the more generic end, but it certainly isn't bad.

As for the writing, the legs of any NTR game. The author is fluent in English, I haven't spotted any errors and the conversations between the characters feel believable enough. The inner monologuing tends to get heavy on information dumping.

These two mix into what? How's the actual content? I'm going to get into spoilers, the game promptly reveals our two generic protagonists who both live alone?, next to eachother?, but also go to school?. They're both generic, protagonist is a self insert cuck and your girlfriend is the bubbly social whore.

Older versions of the game really missed the mark in what makes good netorase, for everyone, I'd say. But recent versions have patches this up, the progression is steadier, the MC is in control much more and is brought into the dynamics of what happens much more.