I want to say that you’ve got all the foundations for a truly great game — what you need now are the small details and polish that bring everything together.
What I see here is someone with real potential. Keep going — you're on the right path, and I’m excited to see what you create next!
- Let doubt grow gradually, building tension as you approach key moments.
- Pace those major events with care, giving the player time to absorb the atmosphere.
- Improving both the gameplay mechanics and the user interface could make a huge difference.Enhance the sense of wonder and the feeling of true freedom of choice.
What I see here is someone with real potential. Keep going — you're on the right path, and I’m excited to see what you create next!