VN - Ren'Py - My Girlfriend Tapes [v0.1] [Lostworks]

  1. 2.00 star(s)

    N0madS0uL

    VERSION:0.1
    SUMMARY: Not good, avoid.
    RATINGS: (out of 5):
    1. Models: 2
    2. Animations: 2
    3. General Visuals: 3
    4. Characters: 3
    5. Story: 2
    6. Writing: 2
    7. UI & Gameplay: 2
    8. Content (amount): 3
    9. Sound & Music: 3
    10. Fetish & kinks: NA
    Average: 22 of 45 possible points giving a 48% rating i.e. 2 stars.

    PROS:
    1. Models are not totally horrible but not good either.
    2. Choices sure...but done amateurish.
    3. Music, OK...
    4. Animations are present, but they not really good...
    CONS:
    1. Models are not really great looking, ones forehead looks big, like she is kinda bald, the MC "girlfriend" looks like a MILF and not a young girl despite her body looking young, her face just had a mature, older look.
    2. Can't name the MC
    3. Dialogue choices are too vague, not enough info is conveyed to the player as to the choices. Make it simpler, like yes no style, simplify and make the choice and the result obvious to the player, the way the choice is written is like jargon or speech. Provide the player with the intent and not the actual words (if I am making sense.)
    4. Very short and conclusion ends mid "jerk off" which in itself was weird considering the MC just blew his premature load...just bad...
    FINAL THOUGHTS & SUGGESTIONS:
    • Game generally is nonsensical and makes no sense, there is no story here that's interesting, events are random and poorly thought out, it at all. From the very start of the game, with a friend who looks like a shaved Mario from Mario Bros. Its just poorly done in most way. I honestly didn't even want to review it but fuck it, rather say something and warn players :D