VN - Ren'Py - My Girlfriend Tapes [v0.6] [Lostworks]

The story is kinda of stolen. The art is meh. The texting is meh. The only thing logicial is a stolen Intellectual property of another dev. the rest doesn't make any sense. IF you are going to pick someone else's story, ask them first and demand permission to let you use their art. It went from a good story, art to a mediocre quality

the renders look poorly made.
the story is pretty nonsensical, the MC may act like he has a spine but he folds to the first girl insulting him.
there is no saving the relation like these devs like to say in their description, your girl will still be hanging around other dudes and doin other sh**, your friend just pop in your room in the beginning for some reason, a total weirdo, the girls can only talk about cock, there is pretty much 0 story in this, i trully dont know where is the romance in the game also...
the dev puts in there a few choices for you to think you have any kind of control of most situations, but you dont. sure you can deny outright the annoying "friend" (hailey or smt, wich btw is supposed to be his long friend, but "turned into a slut" in the mc words, she just bullies him trough the game and calls him cucky), but thats where your control ends.
the cellphone will get stuck in your screen right at the beginning of the game, and wont leave your screen anytime soon, meaning is poorly coded as well...

anyway ill just follow suit and warn players, there is nothing good around here.

VERSION:0.1
SUMMARY: Not good, avoid.
RATINGS: (out of 5):

1. Models: 2
2. Animations: 2
3. General Visuals: 3
4. Characters: 3
5. Story: 2
6. Writing: 2
7. UI & Gameplay: 2
8. Content (amount): 3
9. Sound & Music: 3
10. Fetish & kinks: NA

Average: 22 of 45 possible points giving a 48% rating i.e. 2 stars.

PROS:

1. Models are not totally horrible but not good either.
2. Choices sure...but done amateurish.
3. Music, OK...
4. Animations are present, but they not really good...

CONS:

1. Models are not really great looking, ones forehead looks big, like she is kinda bald, the MC "girlfriend" looks like a MILF and not a young girl despite her body looking young, her face just had a mature, older look.
2. Can't name the MC
3. Dialogue choices are too vague, not enough info is conveyed to the player as to the choices. Make it simpler, like yes no style, simplify and make the choice and the result obvious to the player, the way the choice is written is like jargon or speech. Provide the player with the intent and not the actual words (if I am making sense.)
4. Very short and conclusion ends mid "jerk off" which in itself was weird considering the MC just blew his premature load...just bad...

FINAL THOUGHTS & SUGGESTIONS:

• Game generally is nonsensical and makes no sense, there is no story here that's interesting, events are random and poorly thought out, it at all. From the very start of the game, with a friend who looks like a shaved Mario from Mario Bros. Its just poorly done in most way. I honestly didn't even want to review it but fuck it, rather say something and warn players