This is in general quite competently made but it is not really anything that sticks out for its quality either.
It is very vanilla, the renders are good but nothing fantastic, the animations are simple. The sex scenes are super short and lack in options. There is a good cast of LIs that have some defined personalities even if they are very porn-oriented.
All of them fall for the MC in seconds, most of the conversations are about the MC and how awesome he is... etc.
The MC himself is one of the biggest drawbacks of the VN. He is a "nice guy". All women are goddesses, amazing, fantastic, he is sooo in love with all of them, they are all flawless... there is not a single time when he says anything wrong or bad to any LI, and they all lap it up without question.
The latest update even gives us a reasonably upset customer coming to his place of business and being upset (again, with a very valid reason) with the MC's boss, so he calls her a bitch.... what follows is one of the most cringe inducing conversations I have ever read. It feels like a 14 year old's image of what a "gentleman" should behave like, and, again, is full of "nice guy" vibes. Complete with a full dose of homophobia towards the customer for no reason at all.
The way the dev has of making the MC "dominant" is behaving like a total simp towards every single woman.
So yeah, if you can read this without thinking too much, have a couple hours to spare and want to see a competently made AVN that has no glaring issues with lightning, composition... etc, then this is ok. But is also totally forgettable and perfectly average.
I do not think this deserves more than 3/5 all things considered.
It is very vanilla, the renders are good but nothing fantastic, the animations are simple. The sex scenes are super short and lack in options. There is a good cast of LIs that have some defined personalities even if they are very porn-oriented.
All of them fall for the MC in seconds, most of the conversations are about the MC and how awesome he is... etc.
The MC himself is one of the biggest drawbacks of the VN. He is a "nice guy". All women are goddesses, amazing, fantastic, he is sooo in love with all of them, they are all flawless... there is not a single time when he says anything wrong or bad to any LI, and they all lap it up without question.
The latest update even gives us a reasonably upset customer coming to his place of business and being upset (again, with a very valid reason) with the MC's boss, so he calls her a bitch.... what follows is one of the most cringe inducing conversations I have ever read. It feels like a 14 year old's image of what a "gentleman" should behave like, and, again, is full of "nice guy" vibes. Complete with a full dose of homophobia towards the customer for no reason at all.
The way the dev has of making the MC "dominant" is behaving like a total simp towards every single woman.
So yeah, if you can read this without thinking too much, have a couple hours to spare and want to see a competently made AVN that has no glaring issues with lightning, composition... etc, then this is ok. But is also totally forgettable and perfectly average.
I do not think this deserves more than 3/5 all things considered.