Ren'Py - Abandoned - My Happy Family [Ch. 2 Intro Part 1] [SayWhatProdutions]

This game is, unfortunately, a complete disappointment on nearly every level. From its poorly executed narrative to its technical shortcomings, it fails to deliver an enjoyable or coherent experience.

The story attempts to push controversial and poorly handled interracial themes, but instead of presenting these in a thoughtful or engaging way, it comes across as both tasteless and unrealistic. The narrative lacks depth and any sense of nuance, leaving players feeling alienated rather than intrigued. It’s clear that very little effort went into crafting a compelling story.

The models are another major drawback. Rather than being visually appealing, they have an unsettling, doll-like appearance, reminiscent of something out of a horror movie rather than a game meant to be enticing or enjoyable. This poor design choice further detracts from the experience.

As for gameplay, it’s almost non-existent. The linear structure barely qualifies this as a game, as there are minimal choices or interactions for the player. The writing is riddled with errors and lacks polish, giving the impression it was done in haste or by someone inexperienced. Worse yet, the game is plagued by frequent crashes, adding technical frustrations to an already subpar experience.

Overall, this game feels like an unfinished, unpolished product that doesn’t respect the player’s time or expectations. Avoid this one at all costs. It’s simply not worth it.

The models in the game initially caught my attention, so I decided to give it a try. Unfortunately, my experience left much to be desired.

The story begins with a very familiar and overused premise: a widowed MILF mother, a bratty older sister, and a cute younger sister. While this setup might appeal to fans of the genre, it feels uninspired. There is some attempt to build relationships between the MC and his family members, but it heavily relies on clichéd tropes such as sleep-related non-consensual scenes and shower voyeurism. These elements fail to add any originality or depth to the narrative.

The plot takes a strange and jarring turn when the MC decides to go on vacation. While he is away, the story shifts focus entirely, and the mother is inexplicably drawn to an overused and offensive portrayal of a BBC character, reinforcing harmful racial stereotypes. This development is not only completely out of the player's or MC's control but also feels abrupt and unearned within the context of the story. To make matters worse, the older sister, who is initially portrayed as man-hating, suddenly becomes infatuated with the same character, further emphasizing the lack of consistency and thought in the storytelling.

Overall, the narrative lacks originality and cohesion, relying on tired pornographic tropes wrapped in poor writing, riddled with continuity errors, and delivered in subpar English. The inclusion of harmful racial stereotypes only detracts further from any redeeming qualities the game might have had.

Sadly, I cannot rate this higher than 1 star, as it ultimately feels like a missed opportunity to create something engaging or meaningful.

Oh my god this was amazing. There were so many moments where I felt like it'll turn into a shitty C grade NTR cash grab but it kept on surprising me. The black NTR main guy is actually a good dude and so far a good step father in a porn games standard. The girls look hot and the actual NTR plot is being set up really well. I'm excited to see where this game goes!

Multiple years of development, and still no real sexual content (not counting jerking off on your sleeping sister - who cares about that?). Embaressing.
There's currently no choices, so in other words: No gameplay. The story may have potential, but with no sex or gameplay, I can't imagine it's worth anyone's time.
It does perhaps have some potential if you're into incest and NTR. Maybe one day this'll be good, but judging by the rate of development, I'll wait a or two year before checking in again.

The intro just dicrive the rest of the "game", where the player is a secondary character and the creator made "the netflix indi velma" to become the stepfather; i mean, the plot is good for the crator and the player is worthless. There is no game, no fun making you harem or like "Power of vacum" dilema.
Don´t waste your time whith this "game".

I'm already loving this game and I really want to see it finished I'm going to sub to the creator and might even donate to see this game finished I like every aspect of it from the models to the story and the flow of the story and the relationship

Game had promise, but it was sadly only a vehicle to convert that "promise" into subscriptions that could be slow-burned on various spinoff short stories.

1 year and 3 months of "development" later and a single update is produced with basically no content... indeed the word count of the excuses provided over the same timeframe was likely higher than the dialogue in the update... after which the creator felt themselves bold enough to beg for more money for a new computer.

There have been games where the developers have become, let's say, "demotivated" after some amount of success, and while I've heard of just straight up demo-ploys to get subscribers and ride it as far as possible... well, this is the first time I've experienced it... In Soviet Russia, game NTRs you.

playing the game makes you think you are going to be the MC but so far you're being sent away to Japan and the girls are being plowded by other guys. Not really fun for my opinion. What are we going to expect of this kind of game. It just gives you bad vibes. You dont want to play this kind of MC.

Ok so first let me start by stating the obvious, All reviews are biased to a point so do with that info what you will. This is actually one of the Better VNs out there. the renders are above average and the writing is definitely better than the average high school fiction writer (for the most part ). In this visual novel they have a black man as the main love interest for most of the females in this VN. I know what you're thinking "oh man here comes some low life who's main purpose in life is to cuck the mc" but no, he actually genuinely loves the mc's mother and want to marry her because his feelings are true and thinks he's lucky enough to be a step father to her daughters. So that's everything I love about the VN

Now I would like to state that I have a love/hate relationship with NTR/cuckold porn. On the one hand some chick is being dicked down by a big dick (which is always hot) but on the other hand there's always some pathetic mf who's getting turned on by watching some dude get it on with his love interest, It's especially worst when he's in the room when it's actually happening in front of the mc and he's wearing women's underwear (I don't meant to kink shame) and they make him lick his girl's vagina with someone else's cum in it. That's where the mc comes in. I get that cuckold/NTR porn is suppose to have a pathetic MC that is probably the biggest, pathetic human being to walk the earth but at some point it does break my immersion (remember, reviews are biased). It was a good time Where the potential step father was going to have an inner conflict with himself because he has to deal the feelings of his potential step daughters that seem inappropriate to him but seem natuaral to them. Until I realized that The MC would eventually be written back into the story, just to be written as a little pissant.

My minor remark about the writing is that one of the MC's love interest hates men and suddenly when another man is introduced into her life she automatically want to sleep with him just be cause the guy has a BBC? At least have her deal with her emotions of her hatred for men then have her need for male approval, even for a bit.

The only reason I'm giving it 5 stars is because too may people are giving it low scores due to the amount of time it took for new content, otherwise it would definitely be 4/4.5 stars.

ch.2 intro part 1
I gave this a 4/5 even though I will not be continuing following.

I love the models. They're cute as hell and look really distinct from each other.

I enjoy the user input for ages, allowing us to be the creeps we are.

The few choices have fun potential bad ends that I liked.

The dialogue was a bit frustrating as it boiled down to whiny girls that don't listen. But somewhat realistic too.

The part I hated started suddenly and picked up hard, becoming a core theme: the NTR.
If you don't like NTR, just don't. It is not avoidable and it almost feels like the MC changes.

Now, I rated this excluding my bias of ntr. I liked it otherwise.
But alas, not a fan of ntr so that's it for me.

Also, there is little actual sex unfortunately.

I wanted to play the game, and this is a regular visual novel. The male characters are drawn dreadfully. There is almost no "family" theme. And the game is extremely short for "second chapter". That's why I give it 2/5

I mean no dis-respect to anyone but overall i really don't like this game i mean the plot is terrible there are so many stories like this with same kind of plot and i have played the previous game of dev and he used the same model ( tbh no harm in that ) BUT this dev also abandoned his first game after it did not grab as many attention this game is similar to that one & mostly everryone can agree on this that there are many many & many games with similar storyline ike this i mean it looks like he had copied someone else game's storyline and just changed a little bit for copyrights reasons......i think & know that somewhere i have seen the game VERY similar to this one and it's the completed version i played way back before covid i just can't pinpoint i........so overall this game is dead one for me.

All good whit the cuck and the bbc, its not my thing, but saying male protagonist and being a game where the girls are the literal protagonist its something i cant let pass. Good art, promising in all, not my thing i will know it if the people use the correct tag, like (Multiple protagonist or directly female protagonist) because this is pure catfish to get the major group of people. The y put the start of the game whit the mc only to get more public because the mayor of the comunity like: vanilla non ntr games with no bbc. i dont kink shame, is perfectly normal if you like that topics, but in the over all they are not the most searched o reliables. and the start of the game is nothing like that only to end being a girls making ntr on black cocks. and that catfish is disgusting

Current state of game is quite bad.
The game is super short with multiple choices but not a lot of paths to follow. Models and renders seem to be quite good, but at the same time they do not look right for their age of body shape, hence scenes become weird (assuming that the Dev wanted to explore Loli/Shota aspect is my only assumption).
Waiting for more development done as currently the game serves as a demo with not much content, will revise the rating in the future if we will get any updates.

I'm usually quite lukewarm towards NTR, but this one just kind of "clicks" for me. I think what makes this game different is that the "bull", is actually written with some depth to him. He's not just a douche looking to fuck the MC's girls. He is a grieving widower who wants companionship, and is (as of chapter 1) struggling with his attraction to his girlfriend's daughter. He isn't out to humilate the MC, he doesn't even know him. If the MC is gonna feel "cucked" its because of his own misaligned feelings of "ownership" to his family. See, the MC is self centered kid, but not in a onesided way. He does have some reason to feel the way he does, but he largely alienates his sisters by his own actions. He shouldn't have any say in who his mom sees, yet he feels like she should ask him if its ok to go on a date. It's so nice to see an NTW scenario with a BIT of EFFORT in its writing to make the "stealing" happen in a way that doesn't just boil down to "cruel alpha fucks women to belittle the wimpy cuck". Brendan doesn't do anything that a regular MC wouldn't do in a non-NTR game.

Sadly, up to this point the development has been slow, but as I understand the Dev has been hit with some family crisis, which we should all sympathize with. These Devs usually have actual jobs and personal duties, and make these games in their spare time. I've enjoyed this game a great deal so far. I wish the Dev all the luck and that they'll be able to continue on this very promising game.

If you're into BBC, or just big dicks and cock worship, regardless of color, like me, and enjoy petite girls, but DON'T enjoy NTR, I'd still tell you to give this a try. This may be the excpetion to the rule for you, as it has been with me.

Very short so far... But the ending of V0.0.8 has given me a new possible fetish .. something about the way MC sister and girlfriend interact during video call made me feel something new and exciting. I wish there was a specific word for that content/genre (cant just be ntr) cuz id love to find something similar with more content atm.

not much content but it has potential. hot renders and good characters.

it goes straight for the bbc as big as an arm trope but still it can potentially be interesting depending on where they go with the MC and remaining male characters.

Not much to the game at this point and doesn't look like that will change any time soon. What is there could be interesting though the female characters could use some work and the story could have more realistic options.

Review Chp.1

The models look nice, so I thought I'd give it a go.

The story starts with the stereotypical incest setup: widowed MILF mom, bratty older sister, cute younger sister. There is then some build-up of the relationships between the MC and his family members, including the standard tropes, like sleep rape and shower peeking.

Nothing surprising so far.

Then the MC decides to go on vacation, and while the MC is gone, the mom suddenly decides to get some of the stereotypically racist BBC. While MC is on holiday so neither the player nor the MC has any influence on this, it's completely unavoidable. To make matters worse, the apparently man-hating older sister is also suddenly smitten by the BBC.

In short: the "story" is paper-thin and consisting of done-to-death porn tropes, covered in some racist sauce and delivered in poor English with a lot of continuity mistakes.

I can't really give it more than 1 star...

I like this game. The poses of the ladies are really good, especially the 2 loli girls, they look so charming. The appearance of Black Big Guy creates a quite new game experience. However, this will probably make the game less attractive because this guy has too much advantage over the MC. Still looking forward to the next interesting things in the new chapters. Good job