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La Dani

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I couldn't agree more! And the example is perfect... I never liked the art and aesthetic of PH, but the plot was going really good until it became a mess of characters and places... I really don't wanna go down that path, and please call me out if somewhere down the road I start to lean that way... Remembering PH, I especially liked the calls, where there was always a 'surprise', progressively absurd... Fuck, that was peak! Sadly, it went downhill after that...
Bravo.
Keep a few numbers of characters, well written, and the focus on the wife.
If the story stay simple, we players play better.
 

Xocopin

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There are a lot of games that get lost in this idea of including hundreds of characters to please everyone. There's no need to rush and please everyone. I see some people get into this game development thing and I feel like they have tons of ideas and don't execute them well because it ends up being a mess. A lot of developers are pressured to please the audience, the audience likes the narrative style and the art of the game, and they want the developer to bring in a woman they like or a plot that doesn't fit the idea of the game.

I'm not against suggesting ideas, but they should at least make sense and be coherent with that universe and the proposed narrative. Where does it make sense to put a character to compete for attention in this game? The name of the game is My Italian Slut Wife, not My Slut Women. Even Doug's ex-girlfriend is clearly secondary, she serves to enhance Raffaela.
 

HornyDogStudio

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I wasn't sure two or one...So I copied the original post on this thread :unsure:
Also... My god, I love your sig... Your stories look amazing! I just glanced a little bit because I'm crunching to finish update 0.5, but I have already saved your profile to go back and read everything... That "Only Ten Days" and "The Four Horse" both look incredible (although I barely passed the first page)... Would you be okay with an adaptation of your stories for a game or comics?
 

kaceylove

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Also... My god, I love your sig... Your stories look amazing! I just glanced a little bit because I'm crunching to finish update 0.5, but I have already saved your profile to go back and read everything... That "Only Ten Days" and "The Four Horse" both look incredible (although I barely passed the first page)... Would you be okay with an adaptation of your stories for a game or comics?
Thank you! And yes!!! I would absolutely love a game or comic adaptation of a story one day :devilish:
 

Lolzeirinho

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I am happy to know that! Thank you... All the best for him! I hope he succeeds. The game has a very interesting premise!
At first, this game was really good (I'm not even referring to the graphics, but rather the premise, the story). The dev presented the couple's situation well, initially developing the relationship between the main characters well. However, I think that over time this dev ended up losing its way in the story. It introduced many characters and arcs that didn't touch me that much. I think that if the game was just about the couple and the old man, it would already be perfect.
 
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