VN Ren'Py My Italian Slut Wife [v0.6] [HornyDogStudio]

[SinisterPortal]

Again, thank you for the amazing feedback!

Thank you for taking it into consideration and for making this game! (especially for the blue route in the third part, hehe)

I just want to give a little context, and maybe the problem is more with my delivery of the story than your understanding.

thing is that this is all new to both of them; they don't know what they're doing. So they will make mistakes even tho they think they have a plan...

I understand it, but to clarify, I was talking more about the fact that the Raf from the second part does and says a lot of what the Raf from the third part would never do (in the blue route). Like, in the third part she asks if she can kiss Brucie. In the second part she eats his cum without asking and then just presents it to the MC as a fact, without any confusion or remorse. This is just one example

 

[Adamska]

Che pensavi!? Surely she wouldn't do that with just anyone...

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She's several whiskey shots deep and chugged out of the bottle right before that scene, so we're not working with a level-headed Raf. I'd chalk it up to being drunk and horny (porn logic).

 

[SinisterPortal]

Che pensavi!? Surely she wouldn't do that with just anyone...

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She's several whiskey shots deep and chugged out of the bottle right before that scene, so we're not working with a level-headed Raf. I'd chalk it up to being drunk and horny (porn logic).

this is why I mentioned that she didn't show any confusion or remorse after that. Like okay - a mistake, happens, but the Raf from the third part would be deeply remorseful afterwards

 

[Adamska]

the Raf from the third part would be deeply remorseful afterwards

The couple has already discussed boundaries and there was a big scene earlier where Raf was regretful of possibly going too far and hurting Doug. I thought it was cute and set a good foundation for the couple's attitude on the blue route:

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I'm not sure they need to have a regret scene like that after every interaction with the guys, as the spice of the game is coming from Raf's boundary pushing and teasing. Raf and Doug both confirmed to each other that they like the play.

 

[Eleanorduval]

You said so well but is there will be any bad or good ending. Good ending like '' Raf and Doug continued their journey happily after discovering themselves.'' or bad '' Raf continued without caring about her husband's feelings and what he had put her through.'' ETC...

Btw picture quality getting better indeed. That shiny booty ahhhhhh

Isn’t a game with bad ending,for me it don’t fit the plot.Hornydog have already explained why she act like that in the red pill.

 

[Eleanorduval]

this is why I mentioned that she didn't show any confusion or remorse after that. Like okay - a mistake, happens, but the Raf from the third part would be deeply remorseful afterwards

I think u missed a part the where she say "no no Bruce" for the cum scene.Why she should have remorse when she was more or less forced by Bruce?

 

[SinisterPortal]

The couple has already discussed boundaries and there was a big scene earlier where Raf was regretful of possibly going too far and hurting Doug. I thought it was cute and set a good foundation for the couple's attitude on the blue route:

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I'm not sure they need to have a regret scene like that after every interaction with the guys, as the spice of the game is coming from Raf's boundary pushing and teasing. Raf and Doug both confirmed to each other that they like the play.

it's not like the MC gave her a greenlight to everything during this dialogue, on the opposite, he set boundries, and she roughly violated these boundries after that (with Brucie), so of course they should have addressed that somehow

and by the whole logic, she got somewhat ahead right after the first encouragement from the husband - even too much ahead and the MC told her about it, she showed remorse, he set the boundries - after that things should have toned down, not doubled down. And they indeed tone down in the third part, but there's no 'serious talk' between these parts, so it feels disconnected (from the story perspective)

 

[Adamska]

Isn’t a game with bad ending

Hop in Red Doug, we're going to

an inevitable wreckage

FYI, I am team Blue Doug.

 

[Eleanorduval]

it's not like the MC gave her greenlight to everything during this dialogue, on the opposite, he set boundries, and she roughly violated these boundries after that (with Brucie), so of course they should have had addressed that somehow

I agree the scene where she put the cum in her mouth before asking was a little bit against the blue pill.

But a least HD was smart to not repeat sames mistakes in v0.3,unlike some dev he was open to player feedback.

 

[SinisterPortal]

Also skimming through comments I found several translations for the game - French, Russian, maybe there are more, but they are burried under tons of textwalls (like mine). Wouldn't it be better to refer to them on the first page so that people knew about their existence?

 

[Eleanorduval]

Also skimming through comments I found several translations for the game - French, Russian, maybe there are more, but they are burried under tons of textwalls (like mine). Wouldn't it be better to refer to them on the first page so that people knew about their existence?

I think u mistaken there is French one and Italian,I don’t think there is Russian translation.
Yeah some dev put them in the extra in the op.

 

[SinisterPortal]

I think u mistaken there is French one and Italian,I don’t think there is Russian translation.
Yeah some dev put them in the extra in the op.

MyItalianSlutWife-0.5.2(rus) by Rexus - 'Моя Итальянская Жена-Потаскушка'

Pixeldrain

here

 

[Eleanorduval]

here

a okay I didn’t saw it but I agree better pin them on 1st page (and mentioning it is made by a fan).

 

[dylan93]

In 10 year's time, with the relise of AI Dolls that resemble real woman, I take it most of you will have you dolls custom made to look like Rafella, or Sophia or Vivian.

 

[Adamska]

In 10 year's time, with the relise of AI Dolls that resemble real woman, I take it most of you will have you dolls custom made to look like Rafella, or Sophia or Vivian.

I hope cleaning products of the future will have advanced enough to handle the task...

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[dylan93]

I hope cleaning products of the future will have advanced enough to handle the task...

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The future is almost here, image this AI sex doll being able to behave like an actual human but designed to look like Anna from APM

A Perfect Marriage - Anna Sex Doll

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My Slut Italian wife - Rafella Sex Doll

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[Erastto65]

The couple has already discussed boundaries and there was a big scene earlier where Raf was regretful of possibly going too far and hurting Doug. I thought it was cute and set a good foundation for the couple's attitude on the blue route:

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I'm not sure they need to have a regret scene like that after every interaction with the guys, as the spice of the game is coming from Raf's boundary pushing and teasing. Raf and Doug both confirmed to each other that they like the play.

This is required by the logic of the blue path. Raffaella says that she will stop any action at any stage if it becomes unpleasant for Doug. She shows that she is very afraid of losing his trust.

 

[HornyDogStudio]

i just hope atleast in the blue path we can ignore or ultimatly can cuck Erick cause he has no respect for mc , sure we don´t know what Bruce thinks but he don´t say´s it out loud atleast it would be fun when he is the only one thats get nothing from the tasty Raffaela

Erick will ALWAYS be deniable ON THE BLUE PATH, directly with an explicit choice, or indirectly with game choices. BUT, remember their deal? If Doug allows something one time, she will assume it's okay, and might not ask for permission for it again... Remember that, it will come back to bite you... Haha
As for the Red Path, you will have a hard time restricting access to Raffa's goodies... Just enjoy the ride!

You said so well but is there will be any bad or good ending. Good ending like '' Raf and Doug continued their journey happily after discovering themselves.'' or bad '' Raf continued without caring about her husband's feelings and what he had put her through.'' ETC...

Btw picture quality getting better indeed. That shiny booty ahhhhhh

Thank you, my friend! And so far, I have 4 Endings planned: 2 for each path. Of those 4, two will be considered 'canon', so there will be a canon ending for Blue, and a canon ending for Red. And SO FAR, 1 alternative ending for each path, but there may be more if I feel like it along the way. TLDR; there will be 'good' and 'bad' endings, they are even written already!

Also skimming through comments I found several translations for the game - French, Russian, maybe there are more, but they are burried under tons of textwalls (like mine). Wouldn't it be better to refer to them on the first page so that people knew about their existence?

Yes! I apologize for that... I really need to organize this and give credit to the guys who made the translations. So far, there's French, Italian, and Russian. And also a Portuguese on the way (at least he told me he was working on it).

 

[HornyDogStudio]

Also, Adamska defended the point very well... I don't know if you missed it, but up until noon of the second day, she was still suffering the effects of the drugs Erick slipped in her drink. So yeah, her decision-making was being HEAVILY affected by substances (drugs and a LOT of alcohol, which she can't handle). Also, she showed remorse for going 'too far', but maybe I could've addressed that better in that section anyway.

 

[Eleanorduval]

Thank you, my friend! And so far, I have 4 Endings planned: 2 for each path. Of those 4, two will be considered 'canon', so there will be a canon ending for Blue, and a canon ending for Red. And SO FAR, 1 alternative ending for each path, but there may be more if I feel like it along the way. TLDR; there will be 'good' and 'bad' endings, they are even written already!

he mean u should collect all translation and put it somewhere here https://f95zone.to/threads/my-italian-slut-wife-v0-5-2-hornydogstudio.225161/