Ren'Py - Completed - My Little Princess [v0.4 Final] [Perv2k16]

A real rough diamond this, as in a little gem, in places somewhat raw and uncut.

My conclusion is that the creator was really only cutting his teeth here and therefore my only real criticism of the piece would be that I think the mc is a little too underplayed i.e. a little too timid at the start to have done what he did in the end and the lolita-esque daughter on the other hand a little too overplayed i.e. a little too emotionally rough and ready at the start, although I appreciate it did serve, by contrast, to really heighten the eroticism of the closing scenes.

For me, this creator most certainly pulled it all off beautifully in the build up to and the ultimate conclusion, during which he really distilled and fused the couple's emotions and primal urges superbly into the power of the final union. I thought the eroticism in the closing stages ratcheted up exceptionally well and I left this beautiful little tale feeling extremely and unexpectedly impressed.

All opinions are, perforce, subjective and if you, the creator ever happen to look in again, I would just like to say to you Mr/Ms Perv2k16 how wonderfully I thought you did and how equally sorry I am that your artistry and efforts have not been given anything like the degree of attention or, as a result, positive appreciation that "My Little Diamond In The Rough" truly merits.

For me, this will always be one of my all-time favorite AVNs for which I thank you most sincerely.

She is very pretty and seductive. I love the eyes. Fionna Apple back in the day. ...... I need 200 characters so her goes...... Kordel Stewart did not commit a lewd act in Schenley park/ It was a hoax.

Thanks for reading.

I liked the design of the female character, and her personality. But I think the game only does the basics, it's cool, but nothing grand. The size of the work is also very short, I know the idea is to deliver a small story, but I prefer it when we have more hours of gameplay.

Game delivers on its promise, nothing more nothing less. Renders are good and the daughter is attractive. The game is very short and there are no large choices to make. Some flirting scenes before having sex and the game ends. There are some grammatical and spelling errors, but not enough to really annoy. Would recommend!

The daughter returns from college and seduces dad, that is the extent of the story for this game.
translation/ writing could use work.
choices don't matter so it's a kinetic novel
I liked the daughters model
Length ~20 minutes
overall not bad and not good, decent if the father x daughter is your kink, mediocre otherwise.

I feel like the dev could potentially make something great one day, though that is not this game.

quickly..(18/50) poor game

story(3/10)
render(6/10)
animation(3/10)
sexscenes(5/10)
decisions(1/10)
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total(18/50)


for more details
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playtime: 20 - 30 minute

story (3/10)
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we all know about Dating my daughter ?? yes it's something like it
Dad-daughter incest (but no romance or felling) just fucking
- quality of the story (2/5) - duration of the story (1/5)
total(3/10)

render (6/10)
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great render
- quality of render (4/5) -amount of rendered CG (2/5)
total (6/10)

animation (3/10)
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here is the problem the animation (only 2 frames) not good
-quality of animation (1/5) -amount of animated scenes (2/5)
total(3/10)

sexscenes (5/10)
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about 3 sex scenes (i wont spoil them)
-quality of sex scenes (3/5) -amount of them (2/5)
total(5/10)

decisions (1/10)
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this game really contain no important decision the only decision you make choose to kiss her or huge he in the beginning of the game
-quality of decision (0/5) amount of decisions (1/5)
total (1/10)


# porn game more than adult game
# another virgin girl with no blood during first sex (really!)
# short game with simple animation and simple story
# no romance or felling or decision making
# give it a try you wont regret it

my rating system
(41-50/50) excellent
(31-40/50) good
(21-30/50) average
(11-20/50) poor
(0-10/50) terrible

Very short and choices don't seem to create any consequences. Good for a 15 minute playthrough.
As I wrote the choices don't seem to matter in the least and are fairly pointless it would do better to remove them all and leave it as just a short story type VN for a quick playthrough.
Not very realistic unless you assume quite a lot of things about the characters - the daughter must have always been extremely attracted to the father and the father must have always been weak-willed towards his daughter to just accept things. In fact by the epilogue (second in-game day) he just abandons all sentiment of struggling against what's happening.
Basically this is a short VN with no buildup at all to what would be the "endgame" of most other VNs of a similar vein which is good for some people but bad for others.
The daughter does look fantastic and isn't overly sexualised like many games with randomly giant FFF tits bigger than her head and the animations are spot on especially the small details like *spoilers* her nipples perking up in the shirt scene.
If this were developed more into something much larger and developed more slowly with increments in sexual interactions between the two rather than everything happening within the span of the second game day, as well as choices having real consequences, then it would be a very interesting game to support.
Is it worth it? Yes but don't expect to play it more than once, or like me twice to check the different, useless choices that appear only on the first day.

I'm gonna be fair about this and say that it was just a short game and not much to do but click through the story and that is it. It may be the creator was just using it to learn how to make games.
I do say try it out for a short little story!

Art 8/10'
Story 6.5/10 way too short
Sex 5.5/10 only one
Characters 5/10 again not much in the game.

A perfect example to all developer of how to make your games NOT like this. There's big difference of a game and a porn movie, that is story matter in a game.

If this the final moment of build up story between a father & daughter, I can accept it. But no, this is how to fuck your daddy in 2 days. Tease your daddy with the most slutty behavior you can think of, and daddy cock for you.

And plot twist ! Slutty, dirty, cheap whore daughter turns to be still virgin. WOW ... AWESOME ! (Sarcasm)

Remember, only adult people can play this game, but what we get from this, is a sex story for teenager. And it's appear, a lot of games developer thinking the same. This has to stop ! Stop making games like this.

If only I can give 0 star for a review, I would do it.