Sorry to give this one a bad review; there's no way around this.
The renders are mediocre at best, the same goes for animations.
Further on the English is awful, tons of errors made. My educated guess is the author is a Spanish-speaking native, some translation errors seem like Google-translated Spanish to English. On top of that, there are several inner monologues, but they're not marked in any way. There is no cursive, parenthesis, or headline.
The plot is barely existent, rushed in general, and the switching of situations, locations, and topics at hand is erratic, putting it mildly and friendly.
Some cliches are used badly like secretly loving best friend, some demon-girl and MC is as dull as can be.
I'm not exactly sure if this is salvageable with tons of work and improvement in any given aspect - or if it's worth being salvaged.
There are far superior alternatives available here in any given aspect.
The renders are mediocre at best, the same goes for animations.
Further on the English is awful, tons of errors made. My educated guess is the author is a Spanish-speaking native, some translation errors seem like Google-translated Spanish to English. On top of that, there are several inner monologues, but they're not marked in any way. There is no cursive, parenthesis, or headline.
The plot is barely existent, rushed in general, and the switching of situations, locations, and topics at hand is erratic, putting it mildly and friendly.
Some cliches are used badly like secretly loving best friend, some demon-girl and MC is as dull as can be.
I'm not exactly sure if this is salvageable with tons of work and improvement in any given aspect - or if it's worth being salvaged.
There are far superior alternatives available here in any given aspect.
