VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - My Milly [v0.7] [ZL-Games]

Games pretty clearly abandoned just like 2 of the other 3 games the dev has under his belt, so figured it was time for a proper review. Not that there's all that much to review.

The games basic in concept. If you've played Dating my Daughter, you've played this. Petite blonde family member of unkown age with a tiny frame but somehow with huge tits moves out to stay with basic male protagonist father figure after a long time apart.

English isnt the best, not sure if the dev is from a country with another primary spoken language, but if not then damn. You can entirely understand whats being said of course, but all the characters have a distinct lack of any sort of personality and very strange spoken grammar. They're basically all untrained AI.

Again, next to no content, so the plot is non-existant. You meet your daughter, see her tits precisely 0.2 seconds in, she sees your dick, and then after avoiding about 3 indecent interactions with her, shes all of a sudden sat on your lap shirtless and smothering you with her funbags. That's the game.

Aint worth the bandwith to download. It's basically a proof of concept. That concept being he knows how to hit "Build" in Ren'Py

Also I'm used to huge dicked protags, but what the hell is that?

0.7 Graphic? Ok. Animations? Barely any. Sex? Yes. Plot? Almost not existing. The only character worth watching? Milly. Big unnatural dick of our protag? Yes. Is it a pro or a con? Con. No question asked. Ist it unpolished? Heck yeah. Does it have any promise for the future? Barely any. Nothing in this game makes it stand out from the crowd. The only thing hard not to notice is lack of quality in most of this game. Barely any choices to make in our seventh installment. Hard to like this game as it does not know how to tell a plot. Tease players or satisfy their itch. Milly is lovable but unpredicatble. That is it. I will wait 10 updates to see if it improved. If not then there is no hope for it.

The author probably likes peeping and smooches only, and no more than that. seeing other of his games doesn't have actual vaginal nor anal sex.

though the story are some what decent and the art and models are above average. but still just teasing is only killing joy of whoever play his games.

Mc being a pervert if you get caught or do somthing pervert you lose relationship points
But near the end of the update
Milly suddenly started giving mc a blowjob
Then why did i lose point for being a pervert ?
I expected more for 0.7
Story is bad
No bugs

TL;DR: Not much. Not high quality. Hopefully there would be more fun in further releases, especially if the dev(s) would take into account the feedback.

Models are not bad, but not remarkable either. I've seen Mery in many other games, even with the same stupid fringe. She would look much better with bob cut or something else. Sophia's hair defies gravity. In real world those strands of hair alongside her face would just fall down on her eyes etc. I guess the developer(s) just didn't have much resources, and used whatever they could get their hands on. In general, I'm not a fan of large boobs, so next time try to put a bit more efforts and make a bit sexier faces please. Well I like Sophia's face though it could be better polished maybe.

The story is as cliche as it could be. A (not) niece comes to her beloved (not) uncle after years of separation. Next day she reconnects with her bestie, and they all go clothes shopping. That's fine with me, I don't mind simple "usual life" stories if they are made well.

Dialogs are rather bland and unremarkable.

Animations are not bad, but they show mostly an erect elephant-sized cock getting rubbed. Show more of girls faces in ecstasy or something, will you?

Choices are mostly for losing friendship points for being pervert, but thankfully there's an info screen to see the impact of your decisions, so it's OK.

[v0.6]

v0.6
The models are fine considering the render quality but anything else is debatable.
Instead of keeping Milly a secret from his girlfriend it would've been wiser to tell her about Milly's arrival, that would've had much more potential, not to mention that since Milly ain't in her high school anymore there's nothing to fear anymore.
The content itself was bad. Like all we do is watch TV with her or her friend.
She comes home and after we eat we watch TV, she sleeps, we eat after waking uo to once again watch TV. We haven't seen each other for a long time and we watch TV?
Not to mention the dialogues themselves. Why does a man giggle like a girl? Why do we get dialogue choices if - in most cases but one - we can't decide to neglect some choices? In that case we can only influence the order of dialogue which is useless.
Also some actions like inviting the waitress into our home but keeping our bath towel on rather than quickly going to change are questionably lazy.

Like I said, the only positive thing I have to say about this game are the models but if one blowjob, one ass job and one fantasy jerk off that's being blue balled is all we get after what seems to be six versions, I'd say this game has nothing to offer.

The story uncle/niece (+ probably harem) is common.

Dialogs feel clunky and are primitive written (translated), MC has absolutely no depth and acts like a hormon driven teen. No real inner conflicts about the relationship between Milly and MC. No twists, no surprises.

Like others mentioned: Boom, Milly arrives, no questioning of MC, no conversation about her plans or what's with her parents (aka MCs brother or sister). Parents don't contact MC before or after Milly arrives.

For unknown reason MC hides niece from girlfriend and girlfriend from niece. A very questionable decission, feels like a loose end. There shouldn't be problems with the gf-niece relation. I would expect more of a mildly, maybe positive reaction between gf and niece because the 3 parties know each other well.

Girls models are okay. Milly is kinda cute. Sadly the typical melon proportion party and MC has a penis with size slider at 170% of normal.

Development progress is very slow. The most (All?) actual input actions have a single option to click. Content amount is disappointing short for a 3 years old project and a promissing version number 0.6. 20min, maybe 30 min when reading slowly.

I keep it on my watchlist for now. I wanna see, if it progresses in quality/pace.

English: 4
User Interface: 4
User Experience: 4
Art: 5
Dialogue: 2
Story: 2
Opinion: 2
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Avg: 3.29/10

This is just not good. I don't know how it reads in Italian or Russian, but the English is Google Translate garbage. And the entire premise is pretty much copying another game (about a Daughter Dating her dad) So this will either speedrun all those events, or just completely stagnate and be abandoned like most of the other projects this dev does. Even if the English were better, all the dialogue is stiff idle pleasantries and MC being a creepy uncle to his niece, that acts like a child. That just feels gross, I don't get why this continues to be a thing. Does no one else find it weird these love interests act like 8 year olds? I don't know about any of you, but intelligence is attractive.

Anyway, the story is MC took care of Milly for a while when she was younger? It says a year has passed, which makes this feel a little weirder seeing as she was barely a teenager in the "before" images. And while she went to school MC dated her teacher. But her teacher didn't like that MC had Milly for some reason? It's never explained why but MC constantly has to hide Milly from Linda (in the 25 minutes of "gameplay" that there is right now.) So Milly shows up, without warning, and now lives with MC again. And.... They watch TV, go to a diner, and watch more TV. Outside of them visiting Milly's old school for no reason, NOTHING HAPPENS. And I don't even mean. or care that. no sexual stuff happens. It's all trite garbage. When they go to the diner, the waitress FINDS THEIR HOUSE somehow, and "flirts" with MC. By that I mean she asks if Milly is his girlfriend and sucks on a straw. Well, fumbles to put a straw in her mouth. And Sophie, Milly's friend, shows up with an open invite, then immediately "Maybe I should go." And really she should have left, because MC proceeds to shove his hand so far down her pants, you'd think he'd reach the floor. But she giggles it off because she's as braindead as Milly. Not to mention just before that MC also can "ogle" Milly. And by that I mean pull down her shirt while sleeping to grope her. Then it ends with the tiniest peck on the lips between Sophie and Milly. So fun.

I wish I were lying to you when I say that is literally everything that happens to current end of content. But that's it. Spoiler Alert. The English sucks, if you're not even gonna hire an editor just don't even put it out there to be read. The UI/UX is mostly default with one extra screen to track the 4 points of love you can get. The art is just kinda "Meh." And the one animation is grainy. The dialogue and story are just nothing and I hope if nothing else it gets a total rewrite. Instead of one year, make it years later. And make Milly, I dunno, not a braindead child? Instead of assaulting a girl in her sleep, maybe don't do that. And give more of a reason for Linda to not like Milly around? That one is the weirdest story point to me. But yeah, boring, uninspired(or maybe too inspired?), and overall not worth the time.

Very short VN with not much content yet.

It doesn't look too bad outside of another MC with a penis size that enters into the realm of ridiculous. The girlfriend model looks average, Milly and her friend both look better.

The writing is the low point. The dialog feels stiff and unnatural plus parts of the story felt lacking. Milly shows up unexpected at uncles door the first thing I would be doing is sitting her down and asking what her plans and intentions are. Is it just a visit, is she wanting to move in more permanent, etc.

The MC is all worried that the girlfriend won't like Milly being back which is weird to me. What kind of girlfriend would be upset that his niece is there? Why even keep the whole thing a secret from each other?

Another downside is having to click on a choice when there is only one choice given.

It's not that there isn't potential but the writing needs work, the story line thought out more and fleshed out better and it wouldn't hurt for the dev to learn to make models that are anatomically accurate.

The "incest" is the POSSIBILITY of getting a kiss on the next to last choice that you make during the game. (And that only IF you have made the correct choices up until then, also.)
If the dev ever adds vaginal sex, then I will revisit my rating. But for now, this should be named "Blue Ball Simulator."

I do like this game so far even the graphic of the characters could be a bit better. The storyline proceed slowly and build up a nice tension. Hope to see in the future updates some more sexy scenes too. Anyway so far this game doesn´t have many fap scenes at all. The game have a big potential but it is still a bit short. Hope to see many more updates soon... 4 of 5 stars from my side so far.

Not sure why others have rated it so low ( I didn't bother to read them)

Story -- Typical story for AVN's out there. I don't understand why he is so worried about Linda. She is no longer her teacher so there is no reason to keep it secret. It seems to me that there also might be some translation issues. The only time I see somewhat boring text is if that is the case. 3/5

Renders -- I'm a sucker for eyes and they eyes are great here. 4/5

Animations -- not many but the few are good 4/5

Other -- The dick is a little big for a white guy. Even white pornstars aren't that big.

Overall -- 4/5

-- Rannell

Linda, sophia an milly are more or less the same bimbo. Development speed is really slow for this one. I played months ago until Day1 breakfast, i think, and now theres like 10 more minutes of reading.
At this pace, the game will be worth in 8 years cause its like 20 minutes of gameplay so far.

2 years later the game is stuck, maybe is projected for the long term cause I dont understand all these side chracters coming into the house unavoidable to do nothing and Sophie having 0 relationship gives you more than milly having 4rp
If you make the right decisions the game is a borefest and I guess you get the interesting stuff if you go rogue
Terrible and short

My analysis of 0.3 Keep working on it! It's an interesting start for a story and has some nice renders. Lots of menus although some are not needed with a single choice. Milly is a cute character. It has the potential to be great if you put in the hard work.

It is silly to bitch about a VN in version 0.2.
Still, I feel bad for downloading this game.
The only plot is MC trying to hid his niece from his
girlfriend (an old and plain-looking lady). It's
never explained what for. There is about 5 minutes of
content, the art is very ordinary, the plot is essentially
non-existing, there is no erotic tension, the only
sex (with the old lady) is fairly disgusting and
avoidable. I don't like this game.

** Edited for v3. Update again is short. I get the Dev is busy with another games but honestly he/she is sitting on a gold mine with the game but just isn't mining it. That's frustrating from a player stand point. I'm knocking off another star and leaving it at two. If the Dev ever puts 100% of their effort into this game I will gladly come back and upvote this but right now I just can't say it's worth your time to DL. IDK what kind of return the Dev has on his other game but man it's a waste to let this gem sit and spoil. Come back in a year or two.

*Edited for v2. Update is VERY short so I am knocking off a star. Also, just not a lot going on.

I don't usually rate v1 but I really feel like the game has great potential. The one star rating is BS on here IMHO. I'm knocking off one star just b/c its v1. I will revisit later and adjust accordingly.

Cons:
-One choice menu items.
-Short,no...VERY SHORT.

Pros:
-Milly is fabulous
-I get to be a perv and corrupt an innocent little Milly.

Unfortunately, one more game with bad writing and fake choices.
Speaking about renders, most of them are passable. Main female model looks way too young, and that's unforgivable, since it seems that she'll be unavoidable in terms of doing funny stuff with.
As said about writting, another poorly done cliche nonsense. Could use a lot of improvement.
And there are are also those monstrous fake choices.
Deleted and ignored. Would not recommend to anyone.