Within the current version of the game (1.5), progress past the first few screens is unachievable due to a couple of bugs just teleporting you to other rooms. As such the game is in an unplayable state which is a shame as there could be decent potential here.
VN - Ren'Py - My Muscle Slave [v1.4] [FMG-Smug]
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Anerion
The game looks promising, there is a mix of things, styles, locations that at first glance seems inconsistent, and indeed it is. There are really so many graphic styles, in one scene the protagonists have light skin and in the next they are super tanned, the son seems skinny and calm, a second later he appears muscular and impatient. Let's say that there is a lot to review. It is clear that the author does not have a final style in mind, he is experimenting, he is trying various things, I am sure that in the future everything will appear more orderly and coherent, for now it is almost a good thing that everything is so chaotic. Almost. The story is intriguing, there is a moral dynamic behind it that is not obvious, I love the idea of having various points of view, but this also needs to be better defined. It is a demo, and it is fine that everything is like this. The game has great potential, and the graphics are not bad, the scenes are well-crafted, the writing is captivating and never superfluous. There is some work to be done, but over time this game could become very good.
4/5