VN - Ren'Py - My Netorase Obsession [v0.3] [DrusasNTS]

• Plot: Good. Really got into reading all and feel it like I was her.
• Textures/Graphics: Good, some bugs but not immersion-breaking.
• Updates..: may be the only flaw in this project. Lots of waiting time just to see some little content (well elaborated tho, but little).

FINAL SCORE: 50/100.
As a programmer myself I can say that the time needed to release an update was poorly implemented but you've done an excellent job so far.

One of the best starts to a Netorase game I've seen. The writing is a bit amateur but good, as the couple loves each other and sets boundaries. The dev clearly knows how to build up a Netorase plot, which is the most important thing. It's very slow burn so far, which is ideal for Netorase, as it is Erika's job to gradually test the waters more and more with the teasing as she begins to enjoy it and get into it herself, while the MC continually wants more. Erika is also incredibly attractive. Like, incredibly attractive. Good job on creating this absolute beauty, dev. She has a literal perfect bubble butt and body. The UB, Diego, is hilarious in this game. It's actually funny how goofy he looks. Most importantly, he has a much bigger cock than the MC, for plot purposes. So far, it's slow, and there isn't all that much content, but as this is the dev's first game, it's been great watching him develop his skills with each update, such as adding the first few animated scenes as of version 0.3. There is no sound yet, and there is room for improvement, but all in all, this is great, especially for a first release. I'm here to support this dev as I think the game has great potential. Erika is an absolute baddy; I will end my review by reiterating this again.

I would wait for this game to be worked on a little more. This first update however is very promising. I look forward to the sex scenes and the writing as this progresses.

The art is very good - the FMC is super hot, but also well-written to the point where she's not porn-logic minded, but feels like an actual person who you have very little control over.

The bull is a little bit too dumb for my taste, but as long as he gets the job done, I'm wiling to overlook it.

MC is boring enough to be relatable, but not stupid or anything.

There's very little content in this first update - but the sex scenes are still rather very good. The little details are what I really enjoy - and how the eyes are drawn are very sexy and alluring in some scenes for the FMC, and the camera angles and poses are very well-thought out.

I look forward to future updates.

It has potential, is obvious that is done by a newbye, mainly the writing, but I think this can get better and be good, so keep pushing forward, good luck and always have in mind that with practice you get better, I'm excited to see where this potential goes.

This actually is NTS. Should include screenshots of Edward's POV so new players can understand that it's not netori/netorare.

English isn't the creator's first language, but it's easily understandable and gets the message across. Seems like a traditional hentai manga with NTS incorporated. Good start.

It is a promising game. The design of attracting characters and this kind of payment to them is interesting.
The future towards which the story goes seems attractive and interesting. Looking forward to seeing the hottest scenes in the future.
I really like the corruption of the female character to be discussed in detail and to see her corruption slowly.
And finally, thank you for making this interesting game.

Lots of potential! There are some grammar mistakes and the intro could be cut out to let us settle into the world first, but generally speaking, this game is heading in the right direction. We'll see if the developer is able to deliver!