The story is not bad at all. English writing is passable (the grammar is not perfect, but I'm assuming the dev's mother tongue is Russian, so I won't judge them too harshly here). I've checked the Russian writing too, however: the grammar is fine, but the stylistics leaves a few things to be desired for someone trying to position themselves as "a man of culture". Anyway, enough of my linguist's rant... The renders are kind of crude, but the dev admits as much openly, so: fair is fair. Somewhat disappointed with the "femdom" tag, since it was the main reason that made me inclined to try this game in the first place; from what I've seen so far, the only type of "femdom" in the game seems to be the kind where an assertive girl makes a reluctant guy cum, and I'm getting an impression this is the only type we are going to see (not exactly what I would personally call "femdom", but a few others might, I suppose).
