VN - Ren'Py - My New Daughter's Lover Reboot [Ch.1 v1.02] [DerketoGames]

Wow, I really, REALLY don't know what to make of this! There is some seriously strong erotic goings-on -- but at the same time, you're wondering WTF?
First, and most positively: the young daughter of the MC's GF and her erotic play with the MC -- a 5. Such desire, such submission, such newly-discovered Sex! Very exciting.
Okay, now the weird-ass downgrades --
The story, as it is, is all over the place, and I do feel that I am not really qualified to judge, because:
1) You've got an MC who has a proven track record of constant violence and abuse -- from HIM;
2) He just so happens to be found by not one but TWO adult women who take him in, not caring that the fact that BOTH of these women, at separate times, have young, attractive daughters would be a problem...
3) MC has NO impulse control, so he doesn't mind groping his LI's in public;
4) The guy from the movie "The Professional" with Natalie Portman is Brad Pitt compared to our LI here.
5) Is it the culture? We have people living on the street who also deal with people with fancy cars and apparently a lot of cash -- where is this place? Favela Land?
6) MC was taken in by a woman when he was young, and her daughter developed a crush on him, and then -- ? We're missing a crucial part of whatever "story" is being presented -- why did he leave? Did they have sex? WTF, basically.
Ultimate: Hot scenes, terrible plot; AWFUL translations. -- 3

one of the best loli daddy games i ever played. i felt like the dev make this one with heart, because its easy to see the desire between the middle age guy and the girl, and when they go alone the things become more and more delightfull

good story, when all girl meet and understand each other may will be the best scene, Angelina didnt know her dad miss her so much. The sound and scene also good. But need more choise
All i can say: This is great game, cant wait chapter 2

Needs Pregnancy and better sex scenes. The ones that it has are not too bad but they seriously need to be fleshed out better. Way too short.

Choices need to have more merit. There also should be more of them.

All these waitresses and this player only fucks one?

Sure there is "supposed" to be some kind of story here, aside from fuck everything with two legs and a pair of breasts, but what the hell it is I have no clue. Was hoping this useless degenerate would actually acquire a real job. Something productive. Maybe buy a place and a set of wheels (Good God not that busted ass rusty old Nova they give in every damn game though. The old stepside truck wouldn't be bad though.) Then they can add the harem tag and Miranda can complain as the Player here bangs her Mommy and all her classmates as well. Maybe one of the girls will break down and buy the bum a razor and show him how to use it too.

But hey, if you want sex with no work to get it and with every girl around plus no real storyline then this game is for you. Good for a quick FAP! Would be even better with even more sex added.

I will check back at least once more to see if it gets better or worse.

The story is light and fun, and the ideas are very sexy... I'll keep an eye on this one, I wish the developer all the best, and I hope they keep up the good work! Speaking of the girls... They're very hot, with interesting relationship dynamics. The renders are on par with the best in this genre. Overall, it's a truly captivating game that I'll be keeping a close eye on.

While story had a chance to be ok the writting pretty much removes the fun of reading it, that needs a fix as the very first thing atleast in the English version.

Then theres the missing kinetic tag, which is another huge thing for me personaly since i dont do kinetic novels, you have a choice to turn down one cat girl for unknown reasons since everyone else is forced so doent make much sense, but outside that main story is kinetic and so are all other relationships, think of it as the standard mindless fuckfest which to me just arent fun.

Girls looks nice but some i wouldent touch with a 10ft pole and when your forced to see sex scenes with those you hate it becomes a turn-off, which is also why i always exclude kinetic tag in search for games.

Animations are about average.
Sound effects are meh.

Virgin scenes are piss poor, no blood which is ok but also barely any pain even though MC has an over sized dick, so the scenes makes 0 sense and anyone with a virgin kink would get nothing out of this.

I really wanted to like this game the potential is there so I'm gonna be generous.
Now I know the Dev tried but honestly the English is headache inducing.
The conversations are stillted and dificult to understand.
I Guess in Spanish the way they talk makes sense.
But as I don't speak spanish it is just a guess.
As for English honestly I can think of anyone that talks like these.
The story seems ok could be good if I was just able to follow it easyer.
For me the biggest issue is the MC yes he looks old.
But thats not it... no not only do's he look like an old Prick but,
he talks acts and thinks like a Prick as well.
He's basically a selfish, self-absorbed, aragent Ignorant Prick.
Ok he helped out the waitress and looked like he wanted to help the woman in the nightgown shopping as well. But I can't help but feel that was less about being a gentleman and more about getting in their pants.
And as he admits to being fond of haveing a fight it's more the chance to fight than actually wanting to help.
The Moms supossed to be the love of his life right now.
Well untill he fucks the daughter that is.
Then suddenly she is surplus to requirements.
And he's more happy to tell the mother that he's now swopping her For her daughters pussy instead.
Also btw they neglect to inform the mother about the new place.
While the daughter is talking to mom on the phone.
Then as he go's back with the new love of his life to the place he's been allowed to stay at.
Its then that he see's Sarahs ass and suddenly it's a case of daughter what daughter?.
Now I'm used to and often expect these days MC's like this one that cares only for himself they usely look younger mind you.
The only time it really anoys me is when the Dev has the MC pretend to give a shit about anyone else.
Both when the MC is talking or thinking in game but at the same time visibly showing the opposite is true.
Like this MC do's most of the time in this game.
I really wanted to give this game one star at the most.
But as I stated it had potential and the Dev was trying so three it is and thats being generous.
In fairness I realise that some people will dissagree with me.
Especially if they like. or just don't mind playing these types of self indulgent MC's.
Or maybe just wonna Fap to something and arn't to fussed what.
Then I hope they continue to enjoy it.
Now exscuse me while i go take some asprin,
For this fekin headache it gave me reading this game.

Mc in this game looks to be 50-60... yet in retrospect of his he is 10-15 years younger and looks like a kid. At most 20. So why dev made him to look 50 when he is 35-40 at most? Thats the most annoying thing for me because his looks do not match the story he is in. If he is 50.. then where are his kids? Real life kids? His family? Etc? Especially for a horny guy like Mc its almost impossible that he don't have several kids of his own out there. That is point one and two I don't like in this story.

What I like obviously are render quality and animations that improved a lot. I like the improvement a lot. Mc if his face didn't have so much deep wrinkles would look much younger and the story would fit his looks more.

Grammar is big no from me, even menu isn't properly translated when we choose other language. Its not a bug its a feature. Either way it is one sexy story with pornish vibe to it. As girls are a little too easy for my taste but this way there is more spicy moments.

For me an avg game is 3 stars and this falls just a little below what I consider to be passable.
+The models are pretty and the general look of the renders is decent.
+The rework and changed and upgraded the story a lot from the first incarnation.
-This is where we get into the same problem as before, the writing, spelling, and grammar are still way too rough and distracting for this VN to be enjoyed.
*In my opinion this VN in its current state is just not worth reading. If it gets a script overhaul with a good proof reader who is a native speaker I'm sure this could bump up to a 3-4 star game.

v0.04

I'm liking the models and the idea of the story so far. For me the bad translation to English makes the reading a bit too distracting. I understand why it's so wonky, so I won't fault the dev for that. Some things just don't translate as well from Spanish to English.

With some proper translation and re-writing this could be a compelling story.

The way the MC looks when he's older... why? Ain't no way Mónica would be getting with that guy.

There is potential here. The dev needs someone to properly translate the dialogue from Spanish and we could have a decent game.

Version 0.03
Definitely better with the reboot.

Models : 5/5
Renders : 4.5/5 (just needs some polishing here and there)
Story : 4/5 (the whole boxer thing rings a bell in me)
Writing (English) : 1.5/5 (a lot of typos and overall bad english)

What I appreciate the most is that the dev is learning from past feedback. The first reviews where harsh yet quite objective, but they do not apply to the reboot except for the bad English (just needs proof reading).
The renders are WAY BETTER now and almost everything that annoyed the previous reviewers is, in my opinion gone (except the bad English).
I like this story of ...

I hope this story will get a proper ending.
Definitely worth playing it even at this early stage, the end of version 0.03 is quite satisfying.

I find this game definitely not as bad as its current rating (1 star).

I agree with other comments about the bad english, the writing needs to get better, but it doesn't go so bad with the rough side of the MC.

The main attraction is the step-daughter who becomes really beautiful in the last update (reminds me of the older sister from Family Faring). The other girls don't look bad either.

It will probably get abandoned like 90% of games here but I think there is good potential.

If you are going to release something put some effort into it, bad English and a bit of back story not really worth the time it takes to download and play. Steer clear of this until it's a lot more mature.

A complete and utter waste of time.

There's nothing at all in the prologue sex wise.
From the dev's notes, the game itself, will not be uploaded here, and as such, this is nothing more, than an advertisement from the dev himself, from the reboot of a game which was already pretty terrible.

From the extremely, ridiculously low content available in this... "game":

-The renders are barely enough to be considered acceptable.
-The English level makes it barely readable.
-The story has been done and redone multiple times already.
-Absolutely nothing to set this "game" apart from the other dozens like it.
-The characters are far from being attractive, and the tiny ass amount of story we got in this, is far from enough to make anyone want to check out the, other game I guess?
-Fap value is so low, you can't even begin to think about starting to wank either.