VN - Ren'Py - My New Daughter's Lover Reboot [v0.7 Public] [DerketoGames]

I really wanted to like this game the potential is there so I'm gonna be generous.
Now I know the Dev tried but honestly the English is headache inducing.
The conversations are stillted and dificult to understand.
I Guess in Spanish the way they talk makes sense.
But as I don't speak spanish it is just a guess.
As for English honestly I can think of anyone that talks like these.
The story seems ok could be good if I was just able to follow it easyer.
For me the biggest issue is the MC yes he looks old.
But thats not it no not only do's he look like an old Prick but,
he talks acts and thinks like a Prick as well.
He's basically a selfish, self-absorbed, aragent Ignorant Prick.
Ok he helped out the waitress and looked like he wanted to help the woman in the nightgown shopping as well. But I can't help but feel that was less about being a gentleman and more about getting in their pants.
And as he admits to being fond of haveing a fight it's more the chance to fight than actually wanting to help.
The Moms supossed to be the love of his life right now.
Well untill he fucks the daughter that is.
Then suddenly she is surplus to requirements.
And he's more happy to tell the mother that he's now swopping her For her daughters pussy instead.
Also btw they neglect to inform the mother about about the new place.
While the daughter is talking to mom on the phone.
Then as he go's back with the new love of his life to the place he's been allowed to stay at.
Its then that he see's Sarahs ass and suddenly it's a case of daughter what daughter?.
Now I'm used to and often expect these days MC's like this one that cares only for himself they usely look younger mind you.
The only time it really anoys me is when the Dev has the MC pretend to give a shit about anyone else.
Both when the MC is talking or thinking in game but at the same time visibly showing the opposite is true.
Like this MC do's most of the time in this game.
I really wanted to give this game one star at the most.
But as I stated it had potential and the Dev was trying so three it is and thats being generous.
In fairness I realise that some people will dissagree with me.
Especially if they like. or just don't mind playing these types of self indulgent MC's.
Or maybe just wonna Fap to something and arn't to fussed what.
Then I hope they continue to enjoy it.
Now exscuse me while i go take some asprin,
For this fekin headahe it gave me reading this game.

Mc in this game looks to be 50-60... yet in retrospect of his he is 10-15 years younger and looks like a kid. At most 20. So why dev made him to look 50 when he is 35-40 at most? Thats the most annoying thing for me because his looks do not match the story he is in. If he is 50.. then where are his kids? Real life kids? His family? Etc? Especially for a horny guy like Mc its almost impossible that he don't have several kids of his own out there. That is point one and two I don't like in this story.

What I like obviously are render quality and animations that improved a lot. I like the improvement a lot. Mc if his face didn't have so much deep wrinkles would look much younger and the story would fit his looks more.

Grammar is big no from me, even menu isn't properly translated when we choose other language. Its not a bug its a feature. Either way it is one sexy story with pornish vibe to it. As girls are a little too easy for my taste but this way there is more spicy moments.

For me an avg game is 3 stars and this falls just a little below what I consider to be passable.
+The models are pretty and the general look of the renders is decent.
+The rework and changed and upgraded the story a lot from the first incarnation.
-This is where we get into the same problem as before, the writing, spelling, and grammar are still way too rough and distracting for this VN to be enjoyed.
*In my opinion this VN in its current state is just not worth reading. If it gets a script overhaul with a good proof reader who is a native speaker I'm sure this could bump up to a 3-4 star game.

v0.04

I'm liking the models and the idea of the story so far. For me the bad translation to English makes the reading a bit too distracting. I understand why it's so wonky, so I won't fault the dev for that. Some things just don't translate as well from Spanish to English.

With some proper translation and re-writing this could be a compelling story.

The way the MC looks when he's older... why? Ain't no way Mónica would be getting with that guy.

There is potential here. The dev needs someone to properly translate the dialogue from Spanish and we could have a decent game.

Version 0.03
Definitely better with the reboot.

Models : 5/5
Renders : 4.5/5 (just needs some polishing here and there)
Story : 4/5 (the whole boxer thing rings a bell in me)
Writing (English) : 1.5/5 (a lot of typos and overall bad english)

What I appreciate the most is that the dev is learning from past feedback. The first reviews where harsh yet quite objective, but they do not apply to the reboot except for the bad English (just needs proof reading).
The renders are WAY BETTER now and almost everything that annoyed the previous reviewers is, in my opinion gone (except the bad English).
I like this story of ...

I hope this story will get a proper ending.
Definitely worth playing it even at this early stage, the end of version 0.03 is quite satisfying.

I find this game definitely not as bad as its current rating (1 star).

I agree with other comments about the bad english, the writing needs to get better, but it doesn't go so bad with the rough side of the MC.

The main attraction is the step-daughter who becomes really beautiful in the last update (reminds me of the older sister from Family Faring). The other girls don't look bad either.

It will probably get abandoned like 90% of games here but I think there is good potential.

If you are going to release something put some effort into it, bad English and a bit of back story not really worth the time it takes to download and play. Steer clear of this until it's a lot more mature.

A complete and utter waste of time.

There's nothing at all in the prologue sex wise.
From the dev's notes, the game itself, will not be uploaded here, and as such, this is nothing more, than an advertisement from the dev himself, from the reboot of a game which was already pretty terrible.

From the extremely, ridiculously low content available in this... "game":

-The renders are barely enough to be considered acceptable.
-The English level makes it barely readable.
-The story has been done and redone multiple times already.
-Absolutely nothing to set this "game" apart from the other dozens like it.
-The characters are far from being attractive, and the tiny ass amount of story we got in this, is far from enough to make anyone want to check out the, other game I guess?
-Fap value is so low, you can't even begin to think about starting to wank either.