VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - My New Home [v0.3] [AMN]

I honestly don't know why I bothered writing such a long review. This game is not worth the effort. I deleted everything several times over. But, I give up. Here, have this train of thought:

There's no reason for this to be a game. It doesn't have enough connecting tissue to be a 3D render comic book, not to mention a game. There's no biding agent between scenes. There's like 5 lines of dialogue, sex. 5 lines of dialogue, sex.

And the sex is ... kinda pathetic. I mean, there's a few frames per sex scene, it's not a jap VN with a static image and chapter's worth of dialogue. But, it's still very short, not animated. No buildup. Not romantic tension. Not hot. Not inspired. Imho, it's non functional. I cannot wank off to it. Despite hot models. It's just bad.

I'm the kind of guy that usually thinks I don't need no buildup. If MC lifted his mother's skirt during family dinner and inseminated her on the spot in front of the entire family, that would be tremendously hot in my book.

But that's what I would call "inspired". Either do something out of the ordinary. Situationally hot (cuz it's in front of the whole family, it's not normal). This is not that.

Otherwise, you could focus on characters and make me like them. Then I would want to fuck them, and just fucking them would be then much better. Or you could make them extraordinarily hot. That would also work. But it also needs extraordinarily hot sex. This has neither.

Another alternative is tension. Buildup. I don't need to know a lot about a character, if she's hot. And if there's some sort of tension. She looks like she'd like to fuck me on the spot, but we're at a kindergarten and, well, that's just not possible. She's your mother's best friend, and while she wants to fuck your brains out, she can't do it here and now (in front of your mother during breakfast). But she still gives you verbal ass liking, so unsubtle, that your mom has to stop her. This is not that. There's no dialogue worth mentioning.

So what do we have here? Well, the models are hot, but not THAT hot. They are not interesting in the least because there is no story. The situations are not sexy. I'm not fucking my sister at a party where people who know us are just watching us, mouth ajar. It's not provocative. It's not taboo. But it's not regular hot either. It's too short, too clumsy.

I do not know what the people who give this even 3 stars, not to mention more, I don't know what they're smoking.

Imho, you can have a much much much much better time just googling "3d porn comic"


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I could very simply immagine a better game using the same characters, same set pieces, same settings, same premise.

You live with your very attractive family. But they're all not happy.

Your sister makes you meet her boyfriend. He seems hot, confident, rich. But also shady, maybe he's some sort of drug dealer. And he treats your sister poorly.

She takes you out on dates with him, but where she knows he'll be a no-show again. Because he's always a no-show. So, IRL, they are dates with you. But it takes time to figure this out.

The dates start of banal enough, but she keeps escalating. What was a coffe date, becomes a date in a nightclub, and things get hot and steamy.

The above is the B plot. The A plot is your dad using the most powerful ability in the known universe, nepotism, gives you a job at his company. Here you meet your other sister. The serious type, not the party goer. While at first you have a very cold relationship, at work you get to actually know eachoter, and things start to warm up.

Because she's a workahoolic, you have the option to either go home early, spend more time with your blonde bimbo of a sister, or burn the midnight oil and get close to your oldest sister.

Spending all those lonely nights togeather, you start forming a bond. She gets more compfortable with you. Maybe undresses more because idk, air conditioner broken, or something.

At home, your mom still isn't very happy with your father. Spends too much time at work. Doesn't give her enough attention. You have the option to help with cooking, cleaning. Watching late night tv with her.

Then the game should decide if it's a dating sim or a harem. I could go either way, don't care.

The A plot can be about shady stuff your father is doing at the company. Give you a possibility of outing him, taking over. Then at home, decide if he stays in the house as your personal cuck, or kick his worthless ass to the curb.

You could the have the B plot about the drug dealer boyfriend, and gaslighting his ass. Maybe have a way of getting rid of him. But also some tension where he suspects you're no good.

Maybe tie in A and B plot. Where you find a way of doing some underground illegal stuff through his drug dealing conections, and your father's firm as a distributor. Some Pollos Hermanos breaking bad shit.

It could be done. There's a skeleton here for great stuff. But nothing like that will happen. There's literally nothing in this game that shows me there's potential of things getting better.

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I also don't like how the real game gets into job details. No one cares about salaries, HR ladies, passwords, nothing. Skip all of that.

If you want your character to get a lot of pussy with no story, he's a photographer, no need for anything else. Problem solved.

Also there's a lot of attention to detail. Cooking food. Having it shown on a plate. Opening a laptop, seeing the UI, the text. There's a lot of effort put into this game.

But the story and lag of tension and lack of connecting tissue makes it all, not worth anything.

I want to love it. Sex with your sisters. Cucking your big bro. Hot ladies. Lots of sex. It sounds all well and dandy. But it's just not good.

Okay, I don't review games as much as I should, but I'm enjoying this one. The graphics are kind of wonky sometimes, the dialogue is okay, but I'm enjoying the story. I'm looking forward to seeing how he takes down the big bad guy and saves the day.

Initial story and well build character, i loved it. Mainly looking around some build up with stepmother and brother's girlfriend. But other characters are good like stepsisters and business man's model wife.

Overall it's a good game hope they improve proper dialogue and make lewd scene buildup more promising. And make story little bit more deep if possible.

some things to pointout on this game....
the first one and most important ...the story/script is poor with so many inconsistences,between characters and places.
the second the premises are just bad no development of the characters at all...
the mc just openly talk about revenge with ppl who he doesnt know,.and let the daughter of his ''enemy''be on the same room and give him advices about shit.
there are many deception moves in the plot but he seems so naive and idiotic almost [or he doesnt care or he really is a principiant [but he is retr0 one of the best hacers]wtf

That was a great first impression!

I do have to point that some scenes happen too fast (sisters).
Also feet could be optional... not a thing for everybody.

Despite this, there was a lot of content. Image quality is good, animations were decent, overall story is good, but buildup not so much (not bad content, but it could be better explored). For a 0.3 there is a lot of content

The writing sucks. Literally, the 2nd sentence after starting the game is, "My dad met a women about a year ago." Enough said.

The build-up to the lewd scenes is poor. Girls jump on the MC's dick way too fast. The MC even gets a threesome with both stepsisters with no effort and little reasoning.

There is a decent amount of animations, but they are mostly so unnatural looking that they are distracting. In one of the first lewd scenes, the MC's penis looks like it's made of Jello.

For a 0.3, there is a lot of content. Quantity of content is a strong point for this game. Quality of content not so much.

Apparently, foot fetish is a major part of the content of the game. One of the very first choices is whether or not the MC gives his stepsister a foot massage and the choice is clearly labeled that it will enable foot fetish content. However, even when players don't select this option, players are later presented with 3 more choices specifically for foot fetish content. Players are bound to feel like they're being kink-raped. No means no.

Good models.. decent writing. A first time Dev showing some skillz. Definitely not a slow burn but not tremendously over the top.... for a game on this site An actual story being told with liberal amounts of lewd content included. The animations aren't too shabby either. All in all a pretty enjoyable ride.

some very naughty bits, the blonde her face is stunning, dialogue needs serious work. But good start... and Love that it is not using Illusion assets and it has Zero grind or mini games.. Big plus's for fap material in my opinion!

Only thing the game really has going for it as an adult game are the models unfortunately. The story itself is unoriginal, which by itself isn't the end of the world, but the scenarios being so over the top with the girls basically throwing themselves at the MC immediately and seemingly having no character development apart from that means the game isn't much more interesting than a quick fap. It may be that the game starts somewhat further along that development to be fair, but even if so, it just makes the game feel extremely shallow.

Oh Lord help me.
This was such a fun ride. I loved every single aspect of it - the sisters, the cheating, the clothes, the content.
This is definitely worth a try if you like the tags.
I'm sorry if you're the kind that likes paragraphs of back story, many choices, and a sandbox to grind. There's none of that here, unfortunately.
Enjoy yourself's

Pretty good for rather just starting game.

In contrast with 99% of other games here there is content right away, Dev won't leave you with blueballs for another year of updates until first sex scene.
Story is okay and girls models are looking good enough.
Of course there are a lot of clichés, you can skip some kinky\lewd content but you can't skip another for some reason.
Foot fetish is also pretty big here.
All the girls are pretty much the same ''average hot girl'' from every other avn, no diversity in height\weight\age\personas or preferences.

Overall decent avn, i say worth a try at least.