VN - Ren'Py - My Orc Family [1.0] [Are`pa]

Facking love it!!!
At first I was like: yeah very curvy girls... lets give it a try...
But the it have some of the Best animations for a 2D Game...
And the MC is just a jerk to this family but I like it from time to time.
Really hope to see more in the future!!!

As others have said, most of the negative is semantical.
It keeps saying they're green, when they're pretty clearly yellow.
It frequently calls them orcas which, while funny, certainly doesn't seem intentional.
When referring to one of the girls, it always says "him/his/he".
Some entire lines aren't even translated, so sometimes I had no clue what they were saying because I couldn't be bothered to pull up a translator myself just for one line.

Things like that, which are all obviously attributed to translation errors, so not really all that big of a deal.

Also, one option with the phone girl (I don't remember her name) makes the MC behave uncharacteristically...evil? Sadistic? I'm not entirely sure what to call it. So that was also odd.

I'm glad to say though that most of those qualms are only nit-picks. I don't have any major issues with the game otherwise.

The art is so-so. Not bad, but I wouldn't particularly call it good either. "Average", I guess. The character designs are great, however pretty much anything NSFW looks weirdly...I don't even know how to put it, I guess "over-detailed? It doesn't look like the rest of the art, but only by a little bit. But it's enough to look a little out of place.

Otherwise though, I like the style. I like the girls' design. The story is actually cohesive. There just isn't all that much content yet, but I can't fault them for that, since that's practically the norm on this site.

I look forward to seeing some more development and polish!

Absolute banger of a porn story! The scenes are so erotic! Issues lie only technically, especially the translation barrier.

Writing and Content
idc that he is adopted, just make it hot

• if he is adopted it should be fine to call the family like a normal family, instead he calls the mother orc "landlady". but there's an easy Patch fix for that.
  • also there isn't coding for capitalisation.
• the game doesn't play with the fantasy element of orcs that much (it's more like a skin) but —butt; ass, a lot of it — something tells me orc lore isn't necessary
• the plot doesn't shy away from erotic scenes. second to that the MC doesn't cockblock himself
• the mistranslations of pronouns dampens the playthrough

• hot and cute character design - a killer combo.
  • the girls are drawn with variety in body shape
• the setup of this story along with all the fat ass love made me envy this fictional character
• there's a sexy dynamic between each of the family. such as:
  • the tomboy sister loves to tease your dick!
  • mom is getting frustrated with no dad around .
• even when the scenes are a tease they are very hot. i believe it's due to the physical contact nature of them.
• outfuckingstanding end scene with mom. big delivery on a first release and it paced so well, building from the very start when we met her in the kitchen.
• animation is good enough.
  • but tomboy sister car scene had ugly animation art. though shading and colours were good.
• scenes lack sfx and there's a lot of narration when it could just be shown/heard.
  • although the writing is pretty good n lewd af but suffers a bit due to translation

Gameplay
technical issues and choice system

• annoying screen transition. whenever switching between game and menu there's a slow fade effect that wastes time. i hate it so much
• scenes with no text auto forward very slowly. it be nice if it went faster for immersion.
• some Spanish text leaked in English version.
• note you must choose one girl to go see resulting in missing content if you don't replay
• with each girl there's always a more rough choice with her

Mostly off to a fantastic start. I both like the writing for its sweet erotic appeal, especially in dialogue, and dislike it for the translation issues.

Art and premise are good but the translation is terrible to the point of it not being clear what the difference between choices you make are meant to be, and with sex scenes becoming incredibly confusing as the pronouns used for characters constantly swap making it hard to know who is doing what to whom. Whole blocks of text are left in untranslated making it clear that absolutely zero proofreading was done. Genuinely one of the worst translations I've seen on the site.

I would easily give you 4 stars

plot is simple
art is good
animations are nice

It worth to play it for the firstrelease of this game. I love that you are giving scenarios,whom to visit, and with only 1 option per time, not like other games where you click and see the whloe content no matter what.

I also, would love to see some changes in to the characters so they would look like ORC, and with those shapes and colours. However, your MC looks good and no need to change him,
anyway, good luck and thank you for the first release!

ThhhhIIIIIIIICCCCKKKKKKKKKKKKKKKK Female Orcs. What more could I ask for. Love the art style and the character designs of the female orcs. Maybe I'm being a bit bias cause I love green skins. But I love the game's art style and characters none the less.