just finished [v0.8.0]
first i have to clarify that I will return to this story when there are more new chapters out. The art is undeniably amazing & that cliffhanger was brutal. the art alone is so good it's carrying the entire 2 star rating i'm giving. this is already generous.
that being said, no dev will ever improve if all they receive is constant praise so i'll spend more time highlighting my issues and hopefully that will give the dev enough perspective because if the writing improved + this the art style dev has the potential to develop the Midas Touch .
i will start of with the protagonist. or rather the lack thereof. you spend most of your time through a soulless, blank, placeholder. buddy has absolutely no personality, no finesse, he's not suave, crafty or anything. I'm not saying that good protagonists need to have these qualities but at least give me something gd.
he lacks any depth or complexity whatsover. and i know what you're thing "iTs a PoRn gAme. NoT everythINg NeEds 2 b Deep, Jake" and you're right. however this came across as so surface level if felt like being forced to eat a tub of unflavored yoghurt without being able to add anything extra. literally the only reason the plot even take place is because
yup! that's it! at the beginning, this guy didn't stop to analyze what was going on and ask himself how he could benefit from where he was. it's like he cant make considerations for more than 5 minutes into the future. okay buddy
. such a 'safe' protagonist.
through out the story, he finds himself in these raunchy situations and none of it is by his doing. it's all either because the women are perverts or throw themselves at him. i struggle to find it realistic that this guy would get as much action seeing how it's almost as if he doesn't exist. bro is a background character in his own story. he's a non factor, you could switch him for any other human and it wouldn't affect the story much. infact anyone else might have made the story more memorable.
ok ok, thats enough ranting regarding our "protagonist?". nc pmo
next is that, there is hardly any are no choices in this. nothing you do or say matters, it just changes whether you see a certain color, outfit or sex position. that's it. which also bleeds into my earlier complaints about protag being a non factor.
Anyway, awful character writing and non existent story aside, the art is 10/10. I'm not off put enough to not return just for the art. so yeah.. hopefully dev's next project is a little more dynamic
first i have to clarify that I will return to this story when there are more new chapters out. The art is undeniably amazing & that cliffhanger was brutal. the art alone is so good it's carrying the entire 2 star rating i'm giving. this is already generous.
that being said, no dev will ever improve if all they receive is constant praise so i'll spend more time highlighting my issues and hopefully that will give the dev enough perspective because if the writing improved + this the art style dev has the potential to develop the Midas Touch .
i will start of with the protagonist. or rather the lack thereof. you spend most of your time through a soulless, blank, placeholder. buddy has absolutely no personality, no finesse, he's not suave, crafty or anything. I'm not saying that good protagonists need to have these qualities but at least give me something gd.
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he lacks any depth or complexity whatsover. and i know what you're thing "iTs a PoRn gAme. NoT everythINg NeEds 2 b Deep, Jake" and you're right. however this came across as so surface level if felt like being forced to eat a tub of unflavored yoghurt without being able to add anything extra. literally the only reason the plot even take place is because
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through out the story, he finds himself in these raunchy situations and none of it is by his doing. it's all either because the women are perverts or throw themselves at him. i struggle to find it realistic that this guy would get as much action seeing how it's almost as if he doesn't exist. bro is a background character in his own story. he's a non factor, you could switch him for any other human and it wouldn't affect the story much. infact anyone else might have made the story more memorable.
ok ok, thats enough ranting regarding our "protagonist?". nc pmo
next is that, there
Anyway, awful character writing and non existent story aside, the art is 10/10. I'm not off put enough to not return just for the art. so yeah.. hopefully dev's next project is a little more dynamic