VN - Ren'Py - Completed - My Stepsister - A Short Story [v1.2 Final] [Alias_Pseudonym]

You know those random 3d game ads that show up on websites?
They last longer than this game, which features a single scene that you have no control over. The writing is just as poor.

The character design is almost ok, but that face gives an uncanny valley feeling. The ashen hair also makes her look like an underdeveloped 40 years old, or maybe she works at the mines.

I would probably give it 3-4 stars if it was a version 0.1, but as a finished product, it has no redeeming qualities. It's literally a single scene.

The writing is awful claimed to be based of a true story, but the real true story is probably that the developer once saw a girl and then came up with the rest in his mind, the Characters are shallow and boring,
The conversations cringy, and the g ame is generally extremely short and rather a waste of time.

Better use your download time and bandwidth for something else.

The game should be called "My stepsister - an extremely short story" or "My stepsister - a short fuck scene".

That's literally it: one scene. MC grows some hair on his balls gets to see his stepsis and goes for it.

Very short with some words there to make the scene last a bit longer but nothing to write home about.

The renders themselves are average and could be better.

Audio? If there is any I can't remember it so again average at best.

Could be 3* but taking one due to the fact this is shorter than some replayable scenes in other games.

Version Reviewed: v1.1

Overview: Let's fuck, Ok

Story: You are a guy who is hot for his stepsister, so you fuck her, the end.

You might think I'm exaggerating but that's literally it. There is no build up, no teasing, not really anything beyond the boy laying on top of her, hotdogging her thighs for a moment, then fucking and kissing her, the end.

This review already has more words than the game does.

It's hard to even fap because there is no build up at all.

Also, this claims to be based on a true story, but I have some doubts. At the very least the dialog doesn't feel real. It definitely doesn't feel like the very first sexual encounter between teenagers. The dialog is 100% out of a cheap porno. There should have been more giggling, exploration of each other's bodies (there is a bit of dialog about the girl having never seen a penis before, but nothing comes of it), some heavy petting, and so on. Instead he basically stole all of the bases in his rush to get a home run.

Art: The art is nice. The girl is cute and everything is well rendered.

Conclusion: I can't give this game a bad grade because it does tell the truth and it didn't waste my time, but I also can't give it a good grade because it is just too short and underdeveloped.

I agree with some of what's been said already. I think the game could be longer, have more dialogue to build up the tension. Images are great, expressions are great, the story is cute, but it's a little immersion breaking with how fast things go. Dev should consider making a longer version. That aside, I think it works well. "Based on true events" isn't the same thing as suggesting that it's based on "a true event", so I suppose we have to look at it as containing some lived experience and that the rest is made up. But either way I don't really care. It's a cute little fantasy. I'd just like to be helped a little more to fully believe it, if you will.

Thanks for the post!

Its hard to give review this without giving harsh points, ngl.

- Its short, in the bad ways. Just "hey sis i want to grind your ass" proceed to anal, then cum button, press it, then repeat. as it much accurate to make it Simulator game instead.
- Animation is on acceptable level. despite i dont typically like 3dcg.
- Why you need to assign her age? it unnecessary (and i put 0 on it)

Suggestion:
- if you perhaps want to update [despite you mark that as "FINAL", who know?], at very least make it longer, or have option for other and/or multiple fetishes. (different skin color? different clothing? different hairstyle? maybe?)

Out-Of-Review, comedically purpose:
- don't sell "Based on Real Story" but your note said that you don't actually have sister nor half sister. also its impossibly can be even slightly believable

Don't get the "real story" gimick, the writing is not even remotely believable. It goes like: Hi sister - let me touch your ass and grind on you - and the sister just goes "OK". And don't get me started on the wrong hole meme.

TLDR: too short, there's no believability since story is dumb and backgrounds are non existent so everyone just floats in the pink void

You'll enjoy this game if:

• You're looking for a quick fap, with just enough exposition to establish the history between the characters.
• You're looking for a sweet, intimate scene in which both parties are happy with the action and the outcome.
• You won't be distracted by a few grammar and spelling errors.

If you're on the fence, try this game just to see the posing. It's best-in-class. Real care and effort was put into posing the facial expressions and body positions of the woman in the scene, and the results are outstanding. This could have just been an animation, but because there are so many individual images, you, the player, control the rate at which she becomes comfortable with the action, which is engrossing to a degree which would not delivered by watching a movie.

There's only a single scene, so a glance at the tags will provide you with an accurate and concise summary of what you'll see.

The woman in the game is "petite"; you'll be prompted to specify her age.