RPGM - Abandoned - My Sweet Family [v0.4b] [XR GAMES]

Excellent RPG game, I really liked how it took the NTR theme
and how easy to play, is too short (abandoned), but it's a real shame that the DEV has abandoned it, I hope it comes back one day at least for the story to have an end.
Graphically it is very simple and the story is simple too ,but if you like the NTR it's fine

As a player, I think the concept is good, if this is the genre you want.

Here are ways, in my opinion, it could be improved:

I hate leaving bad reviews but this one deserves it. First and foremost, I am not judging the game based on NTR or not NTR.

1) Story is awful. Long story short bully takes advantage of all the women you like. It's not executed in a logical manner though. Just random events strung together with no overarching theme. 1 Star

2) Graphics are insanely bad. Posing is awful, rendering is worse. This is the epitome of epic lazy. 0 Star

3) Controls and basic game mechanics are RPGM. Not the best but it's the default built in. 2 Star

4) Writing is awful. Misspelled words everywhere, dev is probably not a native English speaker but it's really bad. 1 Star

Overall, 1 Star is generous but I couldn't do a 0 Star review otherwise this would be a 0 star.

Review of version 0.4b.

Bad renders, bad writing, bad English, no options.
Almost unplayable without the written walkthrough.
As a person that enjoy some NTR the writing ruins it for me. The Mc is so dumb and I get that it's supposed to be that way but it's just bad writing.

This is so dumb. The description of the game makes you believe that you can actually defeat the bully and save them. Nope. Bully gets to feed cum to your mom, rape your childhood crush along with his father. Lack of a quest journal is also a thing in this game. I can honestly say this is the worst game i played. To whomever wants to try the game based on the description, don't. It couldn't be farther from the actual game.

Absolutely very lazy execution, very lazy design.
I do not even understand why a human being (DEV.) is wasting his time for building such shallow piece of junk.

Technically very poor, the only good interesting thing is the plot but executed and developed very badly.

I regret wasting my time on it

NRT: better if non avoidable
Story: 8/10
Graphics: 4/10
Gameplay: 10/10

That's a very good game and has pontential
This is for NTR lovers, if you are not one, don't waste your time. If you are, download and spank your monkey.

Will have to say the game (or lack there of) has a weird pace. Usually in many scenarios scenes would be happening before the utter destruction of the mc but not here. The quality hasn't made any improvement at all since the beginning. pacing of the updates is very poor as well all and all about 2 out of 10.

I rarely leave terrible reviews but this is just poor.

Dialog: Terrible, contains plenty of spelling mistakes and it does not seem like it was well thought out

Art: Not good. The one scene where you actually see the "black kid" he's literally red, looks like someone got a white kids DAZ model and painted it red

Story: The bully is horny and wants to fuck your family and while at it messes with you, that's it no deeper meaning it's just a copy pasted story, the story genuinely seems like a 12yr old that just discovered puberty wrote it

Realism: Nothing realistic about it, here are some examples: You molest your childhood crush while she's asleep the very girl who has thought of you as a brother your entire life... so how would she realistically react? If you thought fall in love with you then ding ding ding we have a winner! You see your mother naked she thinks you are perving on her... How do you think she reacts? If you think telling you to go to her room and then she undresses saying would you want to fuck me and make more siblings... yeah once again ding ding ding... but there are no winners in those who play this

RPG Maker: There is no reason for this to be an RPG Maker game, sometimes RPG Maker fits in great (you know... like if you're making an RPG?) but this doesn't take into account the fighting features or anything like that the only "features" that make this less like a Renpy game is you have to go around fetching dog poop and flowers (Literally not joking)

Overall rating: Dog poop.

Poorly implemented game lacking focus. This is of course attributed and excused by some due to the developer making 3 games at one time, but this just shows even more than the developer is just throwing out ideas and fishing to get supporters without giving any good reason to continue supporting. It also doesn’t help that the developer will go dark for months at a time.

After several hundred games and a fairly long time on this site, this game is the first that I felt I had to review.

Plot [1/5] - The plot is comprised of bland tropes that are poorly implemented, the game fails to deliver worthwhile NTR content. Unfortunately, the above issue is compounded by poor pacing.

Visuals [2/5] - Artwork is below average but good enough to convey what is happening, would be acceptable in an otherwise good game.

Writing [1/5] - The writing is just barely serviceable, more times than not manages to indicate your next destination and successfully conveys what is happening. It meets the bare minimum and nothing more.


--------------- This is for the developer, if you are reading. ---------------

Despite what could be considered a harsh review, I do not believe this game is beyond saving. I believe the following changes may be beneficial:

Plot:

- General Suggestions
1. Slow down the pace of the game and rationalise the story arc, have small events, tease the player, take the time to build characters, and do so in an order that makes sense.
2. Do not waste player time with random errands or lots of running around, keep that in mind particularly with the above suggestion. The gameplay should be intrinsically fun, not just running around with a boring list of chores and stumbling on the odd scene.
3. Don't overly rely on the genre, it is fine to have a bbc bully cuckolding game, but that is no substitute for well thought out scenes. If all else fails you can always research popular erotica, porn and games for inspiration.

- Concrete suggestions.
1. Remove cum drinking event, it has poor pacing and is a bit ridiculous.
2. Replace bullies father with his friend from school or remove him completely. Father and son cuckolding duo five minutes into the game is nonsensical. Introduce him later if you want father and son content.
3. Replace dog poop with an insect or something, something you might actually do a project on. Poop for a project is beyond ridiculous.
4. Reduce poop and flower requirement to 3 of each and have multiple nodes for each active at a time. Reduces wasted time for players.
4. Place notebook on opposite side of school, where Suzy find us earlier in the game. Makes more sense and reduces wasted time for players.
5. Place horse outside the MC's house, not in the corner. Reduces wasted time for players.

Writing:

- Suggestions
1. Spend more time describing what is happening, that way the writing serves to enhance the visual scenes. Furthermore, in the case of text only scenes, being descriptive is what brings them to life.
2. Make dialogue more realistic, better dialogue means better characters and better characters mean better scenes. It is really that simple
2. Make sure the writing clearly indicates what the player must do next (every time), this is critical in linear open world games.

This is not an exhaustive list, just a few suggestions off the top of my head.

This is easily one of the worst games on this site and I say this as a NTR fan. There is next to no plot and the writing is absolutely filled with spelling and grammatical errors. This is very much a rushed project and should never have been made in RPGMaker. If you're still somehow interested in playing this hot piece of garbage, then make sure you follow the walkthrough that comes with the game, which is about the only positive thing I have to say about it.

If the developer is serious about improving their craft, then there needs to be a complete overhaul of the game. It might also be better to switch to a Visual Novel style rather than RPGMaker as the fetch quests and walking back and forth between unnecessarily large maps are incredibly tedious.

At present (0.3 version)? Poor. There is currently no sound for the NTR sex scenes and nor are there any CG's of what is happening. One scene for example is the bully's dad blocking the door while his son fucks your childhood crush. All we get is some textual moaning.

There is no build up in this game, it's literally wash hands, find laptop, go here, go there in a real linear fashion, but the fact that, as others have pointed out, you need a walkthrough just for something linear is also bad. Characters are not developed at all, one is introduced, this is your bully, this is your sister, this is your mum, this is your childhood crush, fetch some items and oh your bully is fucking them...

NTR requires immersion, it requires build up and detail. Look at Scars of Summer for an example of this done correctly. Now...it is early days still and perhaps there will be more detail and less of a walking simulator in further updates, at which point I may amend my review. But at this point I cannot recommend this.

I am also worried about the games development and focus as this is one of many games being done at the same time as others by the same dev. If I can give constructive criticism what is needed is FOCUS and DETAIL. Focus by going for one maybe 2 projects at best to maximise updates for this game. Detail by slowly building up and giving background on the characters in the game. We feel no real attachment nor investment when all we get is 'This is your mum', 'this is your bully' you fetched an item and now they're fucking. Slow, detailed corruption and competition would make it far better.

As of version .2

Plot: 4/5 The Idea of a bully taking your family, friends, crush, ect is a common yet popular story however I take a point away because it seems very rushed and unorganized. It seems random and without the walkthrough it'd be almost impossible to find out what to do.

Graphics: 3/5 The images aren't bad but they're not outstanding either. Don't get me wrong they're better than some of the other images in other games.

Gameplay: 2/5 Typical RPG however very little to zero instructions. IF there wasn't a walkthrough it'd be damn near impossible to complete this game. It'd be better if it was more story focused to flush out the characters to allow a better flowing game so the RPG style gameplay would flow better. However it seems like a scavenger hunt from hell that has a random NTR theme.

I think that this game has potential for NTR lovers if the author presents the story in a way that flows better with the gameplay. It seems way to random with a bully that just pops in and fucks the people in your life. It just seems cheap or presented in a way that just is unrealistic even in a porn game. I may have high standards for wanting a better flowing story or fleshed out characters and plot.

5/5 and For NTR lovers only.

Story/Plot(3/5): The story is a very basic NTR story, but it never pretends to be more than that and is executed well for what it tries to be. The bully takes your family and friends.

Characters(3/5): The bully and is father make a good antagonistic duo for you and your family is set up well. The MC is set up to be useless and indeed is such. He is self aware of what's going on and few NTR games have that.

Sex Scenes(3/5): The developer does a good job and I think he deserves credit. There are grander RPGs with greater art/sex like Henteria Chronicles/NTRPG(got to highly recommend these), but this is a small scale game that does what it tries to do well.

Development(5/5):The developer is good about feedback and seems to be dedicated to development of the game. I respect and appreciate that. Heck, I am hype for new updates and sure we will get them.

fun and 'grounded' story. Its subjective, but the type of game I enjoy more then giga epic stories with 200 characters. Hope the dev. keeps working on it, you might want to wait until it have matured a little bit more.

This is one of best ntr game. The story is amazing and I hope it gets better and better In next updates. This game has lot of potential. I would recommend it to every ntr fan. This review is based on version 0.2

Just played version V0.2 after dev added non ntr path that leads to a instant game over. The writing is very bare bones and the models are like models from alot of games and the story is like most ntr games bully or best friend has sex with all the girls and the mc sits and Jack's his dick lmao if that is what your looking for then this game is for you. If you want a actual story with emotion and character development there are alot of them on this site I recommend playing one of those So in my opinion 1 star