Ren'Py - My Toes Story [Demo] [Osjey]

Might adjust the rating, but this was an incredible play.
A good VN with incredibly beautiful art, music, and generally good writing.
The writer could ease up on the "Yes Boss" repetition a little, it's kinda sill,y and also maybe explore the MC's thoughts a little. I mean he:

As far as demos go, this is an amazing proof of concept. The animated countdown scene is brilliant something that I hope gets repeated.

Sexy main female interest with decent dialogue although the characters are kind of basic so far.

The in-game phone layout was overused for no reason.

After a quick second playthrough I realized that the game rewards degeneracy and not being a good worker for the boss, thought that that is pretty darn funny

Overall
A good with good art and a focused fetish. Genuinely good if the kinks fit your taste. Looking forward to more

Art
It's good!

Sound
Pretty good sound design with BGM that isn't distracting

Story
The dialogues are a bit stiff, but they do the job.

[Demo] It's early, but there are no bugs that I could see. Solid demo content. The subject matter is somewhat rare in games, so big thank you there! Any art-style and pacing criticism would be nitpicking, I think. It was quite good at this stage already. Great work! I hope the process to 1.0 goes well.

It's nice to see a new foot focused VN and personally I'm a big fan of boss - employee office scenarios, and this is what I most liked about the game, the initial setting.

Now, I felt the scenes, specially the writing, kind of shallow and a bit rushed (Mostly the foot worship scene). I think this could be more detailed and improved, specially after all the build up tension this Boss makes on her poor employee. I wish the scenes would be longer, and a bit better dialogues on these. This is the weakest part of the game for me.

The art is fine, some CGs are better than others (for example the underdesk foot CG looks nicer than the one where she spreads her toes). So I think is OK.

Perhaps CEI could be a switch off/on as this is not a kink everyone enjoys. (Now I gotta admit that I didn't check the settings to see if there's actually one after playing it, so if there's one I apologize in advance!)

Now my rating could be in between 3 and 4 stars (that's between average and good). So in reality I would gave it 3.5

Still I look forward how this VN develops, it was fine.