VN - Ren'Py - Abandoned - My Virgin Bride [v0.13] [Sukebe Sensei]

This game has interesting concept and great potential. Unfortunately it is not completed and I dont think it will be. The graphics look very good and the scenes might be very interesting but there is not much content. The flow of the game could be better as well.

Omg this suddenly became one of my favorite NTR games of all times! The art? Good but not 'great'. The language? Hot but not super-filthy like I prefer. So why fave? It captures NTR like nothing else. There is humiliation but the partner isn't humiliating you - in fact she's super supportive through some of the sluttiest choices. There's 'naked in school', drugs, even a possible sex cult possible path. And it is sweet - which makes all that happens that much naughtier. It is... oh I so hope this game gets added on to....

This may contain spoilers so... Be careful.

I loved this game. I was captivated in every way. Once I finished a certain path (the option of making her a "promiscuous" girl so to speak. The one where you can ask her to massage or sleep with your boss or things like that) I thought there would be no more content, but it was my surprise and my amazement was great when I discovered the opposite! I think it is one of my candidates to be my perfect game. The models are to my liking, the characters are great (although I don't like very much that the Ex of momo has a penis SO big... I never liked that kind of thing since it makes the act of intercourse very difficult) and the wife is wonderful! Depending on the path you take, sure... It's amazing, I was very surprised by the separation of fetishes here. It may seem that they all lead to the same thing, but I realized the excellent separation that there is in each of them. For example, in one of them it is total swinging and she always consults with you before doing something, while in the other... Well, it would seem to give the impression that she does not need your permission to do something behind your back... It's great! I really loved it. I am really looking forward to the dev continuing with this project... It is one of my favorite works! In my opinion, I highly recommend it, you will not regret it! Whether you are a fan of ntr or swinging or not... I personally believe that you will not be disappointed. I started it with the lowest expectations I had and I was very surprised.

Just wanted to rate this game 5 stars really, Great NTR game! Not sure about the other routes, but the gifted tease / rocky road route which I have just begun is something no NTR fan should miss out on.

There are other routes too that might suit your preferences better ofc, but as a NTR fan, this is a must!

Great game, well written. Even the simple situations, and how the relationship with the wife progresses feels real and not forced, which makes the NTR element just amazing. Can't wait for future updates.

[v0.13]

Alright. We've been bamboozled, guys. This ain't no NTR game. Well, it is, but not the kind you fap to. This is a comedy. A satire. And a damn good one at that.

I've had my suspicions after playing the curious student route last time. Granted, I have not played all the variations of all the routes, but after playing the Gifted Tease rocky road, I can confirm with absolute certainty that this is not a classical NTR game like 3Diddly's original likely would have been. This is something much more than that. Something a lot rarer.

We have possibly the most hilarious script I've ever seen in a porn game in this day 2 of gifted tease rocky roads. The dev has a way with words and shows an impeccable grasp of the English language to pull this off masterfully. The whole thing reads as a satire of NTR. The script isn't designed to induce arousal, although some scenes are indeed pretty hot. The primary concern seems to be humor. After that, it's feel good vibes. And then finally it's the fetishes.

Dev notes points out that Gifted Tease rocky road is the main NTR route, but if I'm being honest, none of these characters play their expected roles. We see no antagonists. Even the asshole boss or SharQuan are not actually evil people. Well, the boss kinda is a dickhead, but not in the typical NTR antagonist kind of way. The titular wife is doing this explicitly for the MC. Every character, including the MC, is surprisingly well rounded and do not fit into cliche molds. Who knows what the future of the route will bring, but after this set up, I would actually be disappointed if it devolves into a classic NTR ending where she is corrupted and stolen from the MC. The Netorase vibes and genuine love they seem to share is oddly endearing lol.

This still won't be palatable for people who are deathly scared of any type of sharing/NTR/swinging/cuckold tag grouping. People who can keep an open mind could stumble unto a rare gem that is incredibly funny and has a surprising amount of heart to it.

TLDR
Came to fap to NTR. Couldn't fap because I was cracking up the whole time.

This is really one of the best (top 3 for me personally) NTR games I've played and trust me I've played a lot. The approach to it is fantastic, the corruption that we see is really the best and the main character is the most unique I've ever seen. 5 star deserved.

This looks to be the beginning of effectively six games, each with a different story to the others but the same characters. Incredibly hot so far, especially the NTR content contained in some of the routes.

Rating for the game version 0.117:

The good:
The game is in an early state, so therefore the game content is average, but for only two updates not bad. The renders are ok - not the best, but I liked them. With (I think) six routes in the future there is maybe also a lot of different game content to expect for replaying the game. The humor in the game is really good, it got me some laughs. The story is - at least for me - unique and fun in the beginning. Also really good, but not influencing the rating because it's a Mod: the excellent music add-on.

The (for me) really bad:
As the story is really good and fun on the game start, it get's annoying at about the middle of the game. The MC is now becomming a complete looser, and most of the other characters are only there to humiliate him. His wife is a slut/bitch who only takes advantage od the MC and also convince him to take part in the so called "challenges" (=humilations). And that she is still (technically) a "virgin" is because...well, I really don't know and I don't care anymore.

Summarizing:
So maybe this game route in the last update is defenitely not for me, but as I've seen in the poll and also in the posts the other routes are becoming somehow the same. For me that is even far beyound NTR, there should be (maybe is?) a game tag "MC humiliation".

Too bad about the good game beginning (hence the 3 stars), but I'm now definitely out of it. Maybe I try a "vanilla" route later on, I don't know.

Nevertheless I wish the developer all the best.

For sure one of my favorite games here.
Definitely on my must watch list, and I am eagerly awaiting any update!

The mixture of innocence and pervy-ness is great, and def comes across in the game.

Keep up the good work Sukebe Sensei!

Favourite game on here. Can’t wait to see the different routes and outcomes! Love the bride and how she almost can’t help herself but be dragged into the lustful situations.
Big fan of the rocky road path on schoolgirl route.
Must play for ntr fans.

Played all routes to the end. Ver:0.117
Felt quite lackluster overall even for a "day 1 " game, not much content at the moment so maybe later on there could be improvements.
The content that is there at the moment felt dry, although I may not like NTR/Cuck games usually if it has a good enough story I wouldn't mind but so far the way this is heading doesn't seem to be anything special.
One thing I really have a distaste for is how often choices lead to a game over but I guess you can chalk that up to it being an early version.

I would suggest for anyone interested to wait until the game has actual content to play.

So I've played all three paths to the end of the first day (the end point).
I'm probably not going to play future updates.

This woman begs you to marry her so that she can stay in the country and by agreeing you place yourself at risk for felony prosecution and she treats you with utter disdain. In none of the paths does she show gratitude.

In one path she rubs in your faces that she's going to pursue her former boyfriend, who previously kicked her to the curb.

Why in the hell would anyone play a game where you get crapped on from day 1?

Not my cup of tea.

Rating for the game version 0.1:

Nice game start, for a 0.1 good ammount of content, many (hopefully not to many in the future) branches, sometimes really funny. For me (ok, I'm no expert) good englisch. The graphics are ok, but of course not comparable with the big titles - but I liked them. The wife model is really hot. Some small animations are in there, too. Music already exists, but currently only for the beginning of the game. The story: I already liked the abandoned original one - and that's how it looks here too, even in the still early version.

To summarize it, I enjoyed it very much

Good renders with one of the best looking asian female character.
Start of the games is bit similer to the "Wifey's Dilemma " which was abandoned since long time.
Some of the event felt bit rushed and didn't make sense but since it's the first release hope it will get better in the future.

There is logic gaps all around this story and things happen because they need to happen. The story does not build the bridge for them to happen, it just shoves them in place because it wants to rush over the groundwork and time to make it so and just rush to the end result.

Your character constantly mentions jealously as an excuse to do stupid things, like it is some get out of jail free card for story telling. Or he will think things to himself but never say them allowed. Even though he is supposedly a genius. He never challenges on simple simple things because that would ruin shoddy storytelling, the wife clearly oversteps storytelling logic such as their one on one conversation after the park, which I might add the park was another astoundingly horrible piece of story telling.

I don't want to go into too much storytelling spoilers. If anyone wishes to contact, I have no issue debating my stance or explaining in a conversation.

Game needs a lot of work, if I come back to this game in the future and it improves or deserves an expanded review or updated score. Of course I will do so.

Overall I played v0.07 and the story and scripting in my eyes needs a big overhaul. The renders are fine. But I always need a good story to go with renders, a story makes you invested and it always needs to be strong for me and believable and characters need to be well written.

This is my review, everyone is different and if you play and like it. No issues from me. I will be glad you enjoyed it. We all think differently and you are entitled to that opinion as I am mine.

Well produced the entrances and exits of the paths without conflict.
The graphics and animations are well rendered, with proportions in the body of the characters without defect, and without excessive graduated lines in the rendering.
This is an important factor in images in renpy games.
And because it is a first job, the developer took good care of the details and history so my grade is being excellent.
It deserves credit something that was born from the beginning with perfection.

This game takes the same basic concept as well as the character model from the abandoned "Wifey's Dilemma", so it's impossible to review without comparing the two.

On the whole, I would say that the plot and writing in this game work better than the one in Wifey, but art wise Virgin bride could use a bit more work. Still, it's much easier to improve on art with experience than it is to fix bad writing, so I have good hopes for this game.

One thing in particular that I enjoy is the choice to decide whether or not to have NTR turned on is characterized as whether your character wants Vanilla or Rocky Road. The descriptions for those choices are clever and not immersion breaking like a big "HATE NTR" "LIKE NTR" button.

The only thing I might caution against is spreading the story too thin. There's already three distinctive paths as of this first update, one of which is incomplete. It's easy to see that each of these 3 paths will get further split into sub paths. The most likely result of that is certain paths will end up being neglected and have very few updates, which can be frustrating.

I'd suggest finding a way to narrow the paths more, have your choices matter but have the story converge into common points where you need only to make a single scene with variations in dialogue rather than six completely different ones.