Yog-Sloth
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The MC is actually present/has access to these conversations. I had the same impression before i've played the game but turns out the description is accurate.
Tags are for content which is implemented in the game and there isn't any NTR in the game yet.
No. That "recap" is the poster's own fanfiction from about two sentences on. The husband overhears wife's conversation with her friend and then hacks the wife's phone so he is aware that his nephew is hitting on his wife, but the wife isn't shutting him down and the game ends at this point. That's the story. (so far)
The first part is the story.
Mc invites nephew to stay, despite wife being against it.
Nephew comes over, starts leering up his auntie.
MC has unfaithful thoughts of "omg she's so bored of me, she might actually " so he does turn around in his car, eavesdrops on his wife and best friends conversation. He does actually hack her phone to spy on conversations.
The rest I made up, because I was very flabbergasted
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Updates!
Hey everyone, how’s it going?
First of all, a huge thank you to all of you who were curious enough to open and play my game. I know it’s far from perfect right now there’s still a lot of work ahead. I’ve been reading the feedback over the past few days (the good, the bad, and everything in between), and that’s exactly what I need. It’s all part of the process.
You’ve probably noticed I’m still an amateur I’m just getting started on this journey. But I’m confident that with time and effort, I’ll turn this into something truly worth your time.
For now, this project has my full focus. I’m already deep into Chapter 2, and I promise it’ll be a big step up from the first: real choices with branching paths instead of just “next page”, hotter images, and of course the continuation of the story you’ve been waiting for.
I’m about 50% done with Chapter 2 and aiming to release it next week.
Thanks again for sticking with me. See you soon!
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Hey everyone, how’s it going?
First of all, a huge thank you to all of you who were curious enough to open and play my game. I know it’s far from perfect right now there’s still a lot of work ahead. I’ve been reading the feedback over the past few days (the good, the bad, and everything in between), and that’s exactly what I need. It’s all part of the process.
You’ve probably noticed I’m still an amateur I’m just getting started on this journey. But I’m confident that with time and effort, I’ll turn this into something truly worth your time.
For now, this project has my full focus. I’m already deep into Chapter 2, and I promise it’ll be a big step up from the first: real choices with branching paths instead of just “next page”, hotter images, and of course the continuation of the story you’ve been waiting for.
I’m about 50% done with Chapter 2 and aiming to release it next week.
Thanks again for sticking with me. See you soon!
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The netorare tag is missing;
The focus of the game is this netorare content; you don't have to wait to add the tag.
the content is already there.
The husband overhears wife's conversation with her friend and then hacks the wife's phone so he is aware that his nephew is hitting on his wife
The focus of the game is this netorare content; you don't have to wait to add the tag.
the content is already there.
The husband overhears wife's conversation with her friend and then hacks the wife's phone so he is aware that his nephew is hitting on his wife
there's a handjob that was about to turn into blowjob that got interrupted and that's where chap 2 ends
overall im not a huge fan of all the other giffs being spammed almost every message from random movies and tv shows that are supposed to show some kind of emotion that MC is having, its jarring at best.
It definitely shows that its someone's first project, and its fine to do, to get experience, but don't expect a lot of quality
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I've played the first two chapters of the game, and it's clear you've put a ton of passion and effort into it.
Lemme share some quick thoughts after playing the current version:
First off, the protagonist Robert uses a shitload of first-person narration, which makes the whole game feel like you're just reading a novel. Plus, there are no branching choices at all, so it kills the immersion for players.
Second, when Robert's wife Jessica starts texting back and forth with her nephew, he doesn't show even a hint of jealousy—which is super weird. He should've at least felt some jealousy vibes, but since the nephew didn't cross any lines, he couldn't really do anything about it. Then later, when John starts sending flirty texts to his wife, Robert's way too chill about it, and there's barely any inner monologue. It totally yanked me out of that novel-reading vibe real quick.
Third, the author totally skipped over the most fun part—the initial flirting between John and his wife—which makes the plot feel super abrupt. I think at least show 'em starting with some flirty texts, maybe swapping pics, tying in with Robert's erectile dysfunction issues. Then Jessica could tease him a bit, gradually getting comfy with John getting hard around her, instead of just jumping straight to her yanking him off... The motive for Jessica giving John a handjob in the story feels completely forced and unreasonable—like it was shoved in just for some porn-y elements.
Overall, the story progression feels very awkward. A beautiful wife, who also has a daughter, suddenly kneels down and gives her husband’s nephew a handjob without any major triggering event? Just because he got aroused around her? That reasoning simply doesn’t hold up at all.
I'd give it 4 stars right now, with one of those stars for my excitement about the game's future. The backstory and theme have me really hooked!
Thanks for all the hard work so far – looking forward to seeing how it develops!
recking1209
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There’s another reason why Robert can’t just kick John out right away. He doesn’t want to ruin his relationship with his brother. On top of that, it was Robert himself who brought his nephew—this huge problem—back into his own home. That choice makes it much harder for him to throw John out quickly, and it directly leads to his wife being corrupted. This also works as a more reasonable explanation for why Robert tolerates everything at first instead of immediately snapping or exploding.
Every story should have a reasonable explanation behind why things happen, and it’s the attention to detail that really makes a game’s narrative engaging and interesting.
HTML games are usually about transformation.
So do we make our black nephew our white wife or vice versa?
Buckle up!
So do we make our black nephew our white wife or vice versa?
Buckle up!
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