VN - Unity - Completed - My Wife Is a Football Coach [v1.0] [Mizuki Kabiwani]

Low effort game, simple as that. It's badly written, the English is terrible, has no renders, the animations are clunkier than Honey Select, and it's just a pointlessly edgy game that humiliates the MC for the sake of it. MC enjoys getting cucked by default, wife mistreats him for no reason, and everything plays out in a matter of minutes. Not even NTR lovers will like this one. It's just bad, really bad.

Whatever you're hoping to get from this game... this ain't it.

At the moment, I'm not quite sure which is a bigger boner killer, the graphics or the incredibly poor writing, but it's a closely fought battle.

Even for a porn game the writing is abysmal and there is no check for consistency between writing and graphics. One minute a dude is humping her tits while the game is talking about a throat fuck, then the scene does switch to the blow job before randomly switching back to him motorboating the wife.

I also have no idea why it feels the need to connect to the internet.

This game cucks the player and that’s about it. This may have been a “first” game for the developer which of that’s the case fine, but this one is bad by most metrics. I’m pretty sure this is also trying to do something nefarious as it was attempting to connect to the internet while playing which I blocked with my firewall. Don’t bother with this game.

Review of 1.0

Not great.

If you enjoy a powerless MC being cucked by their partner you might like it, but there's zero buildup, zero real explanation, just his partner trying to convince the MC that her sleeping around is what is necessary for them to win because they wouldn't otherwise.

You don't really get to affect the story much (at least in the couple of things I tried before I got bored). The gaslighting was poorly done and not really explained and I found the whole thing just shallow and dull.

2 stars just because the animations are decent.

It could be an interesting story, but a lot still needs to be done.
Admittedly, I've played manager games myself and thought some motivational skills were missing when managing a team as a FMC. This game could fill that gap, but it requires more than what's shown here.
I also have to say that I only played the game up to the interview and the first fuck. I then stopped because it was implemented too poorly.

Why is the coach already standing there without a shirt or bra after the first loss, but nobody comments on it? Just linked the wrong picture.
Why do you have to embody a white wimp again when the other players on the team are all black?
Why do the NPCs seem to be 40+ instead of around 25? Unkempt and with a belly?
Why are images constantly shown that don't correspond to the scene? The constant switching between blowjobs and titty fucks, for example. The constant changing of positions in front of or behind the protagonist? Ugly placeholder images, like the playing field?

There's plenty of room for improvement here. Show game scenes, giving the players a body and a face.
Let the corruption play out more slowly and coherently. The coach enters the locker room too early and catches a few glances.
It's raining during the game, and the coach's clothing reveals a lot.
The players specifically address different motivational options, or the coach promises different rewards. This starts with showing off their tits after a win and can be a promise of a BJ for every scorer before important games.

And make the man more coherent. A professional athlete is unlikely to act like such a wimp. Sharing, observing, and participating can all be on the table, but just standing by is the wrong approach.
Alternatively, change his position from player to manager so he doesn't have to experience every scene right away.

The game currently offers far too little to stand out from the crowd.

This is terrible. The renders are lackluster, the "writing" is horrible and a mess. The "choices" do nothing and you are just on a railroad watching the wife getting fucked and be happy about it (even if you pick the most negative choices).

The engine is workable at least.

When you look for a very short, gonzo kinetic ntr fap - go for it. For the rest this is a waste of your time.